~~~ TUMSE HI ... ~~~

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It's a beautiful love story of a couple. . . It's a friendship and college based love story. In this story u can find a beautiful & cute couple struggling to express their feelings for each other though they hav a gud understanding and love for each other! The story is very simple still when all things are fine there happens some mistakes some misunderstandings which turn ur lives!! This story of couple or I can call as best friends will take a turn when they come to college and go into the love tracks! Simple things around them turn out and make their life change ! this story is a short fiction but if u want me to continue I will but only if u all wish too! It's a cute love story may go for some 55 epis or so ! I will post each epi from today till Friday(everyday) and from next week it will be 1ce in two days! I wish u all like it coz I jus simply love this story though I hav written it! "Tumse hi... from you and only for u... <3"

P.S: this is not any serial fan fic! its a story wich i have written by myself long bac and have converted it into a episode format and posting it :)




Rahul Raichand & Sonam Singhania:-

Rahul a very handsome cute boy next door types' he lives life too fullest! Thodi si naughty, thodi si ziddi, thodi si soft and thodi si rough but uski bada sa dream Ka ek bada sa hissa Hai uski dosti' Uski best friend ' Sonam! And his life is his parents- Mr Vikramjeet Raichand & Mrs Meetha Raichand! And he thinks Sonam completes his life as a friend, as a guide, as mate!! He has always had a soft corner for her!! In his house there stay Sonam's family! Sonam's parents- Mr Rajeev Singhania is an honourable MAJOR of the army and his lovable wife Mrs Sheetal Singhania are best and close friends of Vikramjeet and Meetha!! Rajeev is a retired judge! There was a strong bond between the two families! Rajeev and Sheetal had a daughter (Sonam) and a son (Arjun)' though Arjun is quite elder to Sonam (5years) he has always took care of his little sister like a father! Has seen that all her dreams wishes come true! The full on happiness of the 2 families was until Rajeev & Sheetal met with a car accident and they left this world leaving their little Sonam into her Brothers hand! Sonam was 12! This made Rahul loose his very loving uncle aunt and his best buddy! And Sonam lost her parents! To give Sonam a good life and himself to make a bright future Arjun left to New York to his MAUSI's house! Little Sonam accompanied him! Sonam is lovely cute bubli girl with a matured mentality still lying naughtiness in mind she is prefect girl! Other than Vikramjeet and Meetha in Rahul's family there is his Naani who often comes to their house .. she stays in Aagra but fond of her elder son Vikramjeet she comes to his house for a long or short stays!!! She likes Rahul more than her other grand children! In Rahul's family also consists of his Bua (who is widow without children) and his younger sister Kushi !!! Arjun is also a handsome cute guy but more of matured due to loss of his parents in early age!!!



intro and character sketch(c.s) & EPISODE 1: page 1

episode 2: page 2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=2�

episode 3: page 3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=3

episode 4 & 5: page 4- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=4

episode 6: page 5- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=5

episode7: page6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=6

episode8: page 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=8

episode 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1923156/tumse-hi?pn=9�

episode 10: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1923156&TPN=10

episode 11 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1923156&PID=48996532

episode 12+13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49511480�


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww thats a super cute story!! 😳 Plzz update soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nams .. this SUPER cute .. but dont u think ud get more views and comments if u used Kriyansh / Swaron / Viha .. basically D3 in this story ?

No offence just a suggestion :)
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episode 1:

3rd December:Early morning at 6am when sun rays falling brightly on her face there she is lying in her bed with her eyes half open… she has a cute smile on her face with a dimple in her cheeks she has a perfect well-built slim body.. as sun rays is falling slowly on her face a background voice is heard calling " sona… sona betiyaan 6 baj gayi hai… uto beta!"

(now she opens her eyes wide and gets up at once)

Sona: "kya??????? (screems) !!!! 6 baj gayi???? Oh no!!! Dhaima meine kaha tha na aapko jaldi utaane ke liye! Ab dekiye kithna der hogayi ! meine facial b nahi ki! Mere chechra dekiye kithna ulajgayi hai!! Aap bina Dhaima!!L (she hurries up by wrapping her blanket)"

There enters her bro [Arjun] and her Dhaima whoz her caretaker! Arjun comes smiling up to her… Where Dhaima has sona's coffee in her hand! Dhaima and Arjun giggle around looking at Sona's screems!

Arjun is tall handsome guy who is very caring toward his little sister..

Arjun has dressed formally and he is winding up with tie and starts sona.. he sees her Chulbuli sadness in her face and sits beside sona… While sona jus woke up from sleep and is busy in worrying about her packing.

Arjun: " oh ho sonu c'mon nw! tum ithni acchi se neend mein thi ki tumein utaane ki man hi nahi kia! And don't you worry my dear sister humari fight 11am ko hai!! So chill dear sis! Ab chalo mere liye apni cute si smile do .. (now sona has a little relief & she gives a smile with cute dimple on her face! She hugs her bro very tightly and says slowly in his years ..)

Sona: "thank you bro…! love youuu sooo much!!!! Aap world ki sabse best brother ho! "

(Dhaima comes forward keeping the coffee tray on the table)

Dhaima: "sona baby get up and fresh up! Aapki coffee tayaar hai betaji "

Arjun smiles at sona and continue saying

Arjun: "tum meri princess ho! And my little princess always needs a special attention! Am I right???? Aur meri sis koi wish kare and mein use inkaar kardo! Now tats IMPOSSIBLE!! (He moves his right hand fingers through sona's beautiful long silky black hair and says in a soft voice…) jaldi se make up shake up karke tayyar hojao! Tumeiy college jana hena apni friends se milne ke liye jaane se pehle?? C'mon now make it fast.. mein tumein collge se pick up kardoonga! I hope tumne saari packing karli hai?! Right?? ( he has quite not sure expression!)

Sona gets into an small shock expression!

Sona: "OMG!!!! Oh no………!!!! bhaiya kal jo shopping ki thi use tho rakna hi bool gayi!! Oh no ab kya karoongi!! (she bites her little fingers and she is now going to little tension mood..!

Dhaima: "betaji y u fear when Dhaima is here! Betaji aap jaayiye aur fresh hojayeyi meine aapki saari packing kardi hai and aapke kapde bi rakdi hai jo aaj pehnna hai..! (she moves through wardrobe and opens and takes her dress out!) Sona betiyaan aap aaraam se tayyar hojayiye and sabse pehle yeh coffee pee lijiye! Ok? " (she smiles pinches sona's cheeks and moves out of room)

Arjun: "keeps his hand on Sona's cheeks ab jao fresh hojao ok. Waise b aaj koi tho bahut kush hai hena sonaaa ( he says it in long tune and stares at sona and moves towards window giggling)"

Sona: "(blushes and runs to her bro hugs him tight and says..) bro obviously kush tho hogi na 5years baad India jaa rahe hum! Uncle Aunty ko dekne ke liye kithni saalon se wait kar rahi thi!!"

Arjun: "Sirf Uncle Aunty se ya…………………"

Sona: "(slowly hits her bro and says..) Brooo!!!! Aap bina!!!!!!! Haan thodi excited hoon Rahul se milne ke liye !! after all meri best friend hai..!!!" (she moves to her coffee takes a sip and starts thinking of those days when rahul and she used play around)

At the movement Arjun's phone rings..! she stops smiling and moves towards Arjun!

Sona: " lo muje phone do aapna! Humesha galat waqt par bajtha rehtha hai huh..! (she pulls his phone and Arjun blushes and looks around)

Muje pata tha yeh Avantika ka hi phone hoga!

Sona: "hey avantika Bhabhiii……!!"(she smiles out loud)

Avantika: "hey sona tum??? (she blushes deepely and a bit of embarrassed!) Quite surprising hann! Kaisi hai??? Packing hogayii??"

Sona: "haan bhabhi mein tho teek hoon but lagtha hai koi bahut upset hai aapko chodke jaane ke liye!! (laughs starring at her bro)"

Avantika: "yeh kya bhabhi bhabhi laga raka hai??? Mein tumari bhaiyaa ki secretary hoon don't forget! (she laughs and suddenly has cute blush in her face while recalling what sona said!)"

Sona: " Araay Avantika tum sirf Bro ki secretary nahi unki classmate b ho meri saheli b ho!! (laughs having fun pulling the leg of her bro & Avantika)"

Arjun has become completely red because of Blushing and embarrassment! Understanding this sona hand over the phone to Arjun ..

Sona: " Achha ab yeh lo aapka phone ! aap hi baat karo aapki secretary se waise b (tells out loudly & sarcastly so that Avantika hears it) mujse baat karne ke liye inhone tho phone ki nahi (she laughs)"

Arjun takes over the phone and moves out of the room catching Sona's ears and says

Arjun: "baad mein dekoonga tumein!" (he moves out)

Sona takes the coffee moves towards the window opens the curtains and sees outside with a wide smile in her face .. there is beautiful scenary of Rising sun through the long edged buildings of the city!!! Her house is a place where she can see whole of new york city at one glance!!

She says in her mind

Sona: "(in mind: finally aaj mein waapas india jaa rahi hoon Bhaiyaa ke saath! Waapas apne Ghar! Uncle ke paas ! Uss gar mein jaha meri bachpan ke yaad judi hai! Uss gar mein jahan Rahul rehtha! 'Rahul' mera best friend!! Poori duniyaan mein sirf wo hi hai jisse apni dil ki baat share kar sakti hoon! Infact share karne se pehle hi jaan leta hai! Bilcul Paagal!! And uss pagal se milne ke liye yeh pagal bilcul Tayaar hai!!! )"

Now she rushes into her computer and opens her mail! Rahul & Sonam keep mailing to each other just to ask how they are! She opens his mail and its written-

" hey shona mona!! Kaisi hai Monkey??? Waise tum kab aarahi ho?? Mein aaj Pune jaa raha hoon!! U remember na 4th December yaani kal uska birthday hai so hum sab friends uski ghar mein (pune mein) hi uska birthday celebrate karenge!! I know Monkey jab tum yahan thi tho hum sab pune jaake uske birthday manaathe the!! And now muje akele jana padega!! 5 saal se akele jaa raha hoon!! Monkey waise tumne 1 hafthe se message kyun nahi ki??? U know Kushi bi tumein Pooch rahi thi!! Poor girl she missing you yaar!! And sirf kushi hi nahi tumein yaad hai uski wo dost Riya jo humesha muje Line maarthi thi wo b tumein pooch rahi thi!! C'mon yaar ab tho 5 saal hogaya hai ab tho aajao!! Hey hope u will reply me soon!! Im waiting..! And you know riya b aarahi hai! And she is looking Damn Hot!!! Hey jealous mat hona!! Coz riya ko beat karna not easy task for u!! bachpan mein kithna chid thi na use !!! Kya mast lag rahi hai Red gown mein!! Gosh tumein yahan honi chahiye thi!! Hey chaltha hoon!! 1 hafthe se reply nahi ki hai soo im angry with you !! ab jaldi se Reply kardo warna mein MESSAGE nahi karoonga!! Byeee Monkey missing you…. And wahan pe ab subah hena? Sooo VERY GUD MRNG tc cyaa!!!"

Sona gets quite jealous of Riya!!

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Originally posted by: SwaRon911

Nams .. this SUPER cute .. but dont u think ud get more views and comments if u used Kriyansh / Swaron / Viha .. basically D3 in this story ?


No offence just a suggestion :)


well im doin wid tat tooo dear like IM WRTTIING FF ON KRIYAANSH 😊 started nt completed fully sooo by nxt week or so il fininsh off wid some parts and thn il strt posting it too 😃
plzz dont 4get to read it ok 😳
and stay tuned to TUMSE HI also😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ciyute story!!! Lookin forward 2 it!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its very nice yaar.tum ne story ko bahuth ache way se present kiya hey👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its wonderful and I just love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jaldi upload kiyiya 5 episode yaar main mar rahi hoon yaha par hahah loved it!!!!!!!! nice thread yaar :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting dear.. very nice. do continue. thanks for the pm

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