*RAYA* THE EXPLORER(updated 8th jan ) pg 11

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Hi every1 i am Shagun AND dis is my first ever ss so i hope evry1 likes it 😊

all the characters are the same bt there are no other character except RAYA and Vikram and neha in my ss😉
so here is the first part :
ram : no ways i am gonna get into dis it's impossible
neha : no u will be doing it as u lost it in the game😈
ram : u are such a devil who came from hell to put my simple life into a miserable one
vikram : ram don't be a spoilsport we have planned out everything and u are given a choice too
either you take priya bhabhi to a 15 day honeymoon trip to europe or a 7 day trip in india itself
not too far from ur work and office the choice is urs
ram : pointing towards god hey ram!!(oo that's me myself😆) save me plzz
neha : no one is gonna save u not even u urself
vikram: so whats ur decision ??
ram : have i any choice leftt??
neha : (triumphantly) no u don't and don't sulk and enjoy ur best coz we all know u haven't
been on a vacation since a proper past 10 yrs my goodness u surely need a refreshment
ram : thinking sumthng for a while opened his mouth bt was rightaway cutted in by neha
neha ; and Mr ram dat surely dosen't include taking dadi for a haridwaar yatra👏

ram ; huh finally as u ssay i agree and will prefer the india trip
both vikram and neha : ya u will surely enjoy it (thinking we have many things planned out for u both😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey didn't any1 like reading it??
i am sorry😭
bt if u liked it and want me to continue den plz comment plzz...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice take. plz cont. soon thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww... gr8 start yaar... n m glad that only these 4 here da part of ur SS... plz continue
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hey thnx for liking and commenting on my story 😊
so here goes the next part:
part 2:
ram : (entered his room saw priya with a book) ahmm priya
priya : yes Mr. kapoor what do u want
ram : wooh priya me i was thinking that after our marriage we have'nt gone anywhere out so
i was thinking ki we should go sumwhere out with each other
priya : 😲 (thinking: kahi aj mr kapoor ne kahi excess drink toh nai kia bt then again) with a
smirk cum on mr. kapoor don't melodramatize or beat around the bush now cum straight
to the pointt
ram : 😡(thinking:ohh the nerve of this woman she is surely the baap sorry ma of investigation)
woh priya i went to vikram's house for a get -together and i lost a bet and as penality
they have planned a "honeymoon" trip of 7 days for us
priya : (supressing her laughter) so??😕
ram : so so what i want u to pack up soon and be ready as we will be leaving tomorrow
priya : so where will we be going to?
ram : oh i don't have any idea everything is planned by vikram
priya : how ironic we are going for our "honeymoon" bt both of us have nil amount of idea as to where we'll be going
ram : now all angry says: what's the problem with u priya that u always keep bugging up
my head ? all i want is just ur cooperation in it as i am helpless can't u bear that
much ? and i promise the trip won't be all that bad!
priya : oh ya ya i know what we will be doing u wil be engaged with ur favorite laptop(in mind
my worst sautan) and i'll gat bored till death no i don't wanna cum along wid u
ram(now loosing all his tamper shouted): what do u think that i can't enjoy and have fun
then mind it mrs. priya u are totally going to regret and rethink before saying this
to me ever again
ram(walking out of the room) : called vikram : hello vikram can u plzz.. reschedule my trip
with priya yes i want u tomake a 20 days long trip and all the information i will mail
u within half and hour bye!!
vikram(almost trembled from the chair he was sitting on) he thought in mind that wether he heard it right or not or it's that ram has now totally lost😕 his senses
t.b.c. (plzz. comment)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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20 days!😲🤣🤣🤣 totally love da idea yaar👏 brilliant!! continue yaar
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Continue updating its very nice
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hey gr8 start dear...
and did he say 20 days?? 😲😲😲😲😲 I was shocked like vikram
😆Please continue😆
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hey every1 thnx for commenting and liking my story ☺️
so here goes the next part :
vikram : (in his house) neha i think ram has realy lost it
neha : what i can't understand what u r talking about 😕
vikram: neha it was us who planned everything for ram and priya isn't it?
neha : ya i know so whats the problem ? is fatty denying from going😡 how can he i'll talk to him
right away
vikram : no he is not bt instead he extended the trip and has even mailed me his whole plan of
various destinations in india , first he wasn't going and now he seems as a kid who has
every bit prepared for his holiday
neha : what😲 really bt then smiling she said , i think fatty wants to enjoy his trip with his wife so
let him enjoy and don't panic they r surely gonna enjoy it!!
vikram : ya i too hope everything goes fine

scene : raya's room
ram : so priya all set u must as we will be leaving for our "honeymooon" in say abt 1 hr
priya : still in daze 😕😕😕😕
ram : priyya am i talking to u
priya : yess yes mr. kapoor i am listening and yes everything has been packed
ram : good😊 now we should leave as to avoid any traffic and i don't want to miss my flight
with my wiiiffe to "our honeymoon" isn't it
priya : (in mind : has mr. kapoor lost it or has taken my words seriously ohh god save me!!)
and moves out
(at airport) vikram and neha had cum to see them off 😊
vikram : ram every arrangements has been done as per ur wish and reservations for hotels
and outing plan everything is sought out and yes don't worry abt business as
everything is under control
ram : ya i will and b.t.w. why would i worry foe business when i am going out an a holiday
with my beautiful wife
priya : on hearing this is jst 🤢(in mind she says : gannu bappa plz save me how will i
tolerate all these antics for 20 lonng days plz..help me )
the announcement for boarding of passengers is made and raya bid their goodbyes
scene : (chandigarh raya seated in a car heading towards hotel)
ram : priya r u comfortable ??
priya : (huh where did this gentleman dropped from??) ya i am comfortable , amm mr.
kapoor can i ask u 1 thing ??
ram : (ya i know what is in ur that tinyyy brain😈) ya sure
priya : amm why did u choose a long trip for us
ram : (all with an angel face) oh yar i told u as well as vikram for the umpteenth time and
telling u again its jst a normal honeymoon now u too relax and enjoyyy...
priya : god plzz.. tell me its a dream plzz.😕
T.B.C (PLZZ COMMENT next update today evening and it will be full of surprises😃)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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another sweet update😳 waiting 4 the next😛

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