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THIS OS IS DIFF FROM MY OTHER WORKS AS THIS IS BASED ON A REAL LIFE STORY ... THIS IS MY BROTHER'S STORY ... I M SO MUCH INSPIRED BY THE LINE " THERE IS EXTRODINARY LOVE STORY BEHIND EVERY ORDINARY JODI " AND I TRIED TO BRING OUT THE LOVE STORY BEHIND MY BROTHER'S ORDINARY LIFE ...

I KNOW MANY OF U HERE BELIEVE IN LOVE THE FILMY WAY BUT IT IS NOT POSSIBLE ALL TIMES ( I DON'T SAY ITS IMPOSSIBLE)...BY NO CHANCE EVERY GAL IN THIS WORLD WILL GET SOMEONE LIKE RAJ FROM DDLJ OR MAAN FROM GHSP FOR TAT MATTER ... BUT WAT ONE GETS IS NEVER LESS ... IF U CLOSE UR EYES AND REWIND UR LIFE U WILL DEFO DISCOVER A UNSAID AND NATURAL LOVE STORY ...

THIS IS MY GIFT TO MY BHAI AND BHABI FOR THEIR WEDDING ANNIVERSARY IN ADVANCE

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Geet was returning from collage she was tired ... Geet lived with her mom in her uncle's house while her father was working in another city ... It was more like a joint family as everyone lived in different house but in same building and compound...She was always surrounded by her cousins ...It was friday and she was a bit happy tat she had two more days to rest ...usually she visits her aunt who is in ground floor before heading to her house in First floor but tat day she sensed the presence of some guests in her house so she decided to move to her house directly ...

Later in the evening Geet went to her aunt's place to have her regular gossip ...
" why didn't u come in the evening ? " aked her aunt
" i saw some guests in ur house so thought tat shdn't disturb u " geet said
" oh! it was Amarnath uncle and family ... u know them ,don't u ? "
Geet was not sure if she knew them coz she was poor in all this family stuffs...she gave a confusing look to her aunt ...
" don't u remember amarnath uncle who works in ooty ... he has two sons Dev the elder and Maan the younger " her aunt tried to explain...
geet wasn't much interested so she just made excuses and went.
In reality no universal signs will be witnessed as we get to see in movies ... Geet almost forgot the name maan untill her cousin nitu started to praise him ... it was then geet started considered maan as an existing person... Maan was nitu's brother in relationship and she was so much found maan as he was perfect brother material who would do anything his sis demands and of course never forgets a diary milk at each meeting...
Geet use to hear a lot abt maan from nitu all good things but she was never attracted to him at all ...tat is because along with godd deeds of him geet also gets to her abt his GF ... Geet was never attracted to him in the beginning for two reasons one tat he was comitted ( tats wat nitu said ) and two she didn't want to ...coz she always wanted her mom and uncle's head to be held high and wanted to marry a guy of their choice and fall in love with the same ...
Maan and geet had met each other often as maan would come to meet nitu but had never spoken with one another ... Thanks to geet's College project she went to maan's office with nitu to meet him ... Not much they spoke except geet told him tat the project was to be submitted next day itself ...
Geet was all tensed as tat was a impt project and her sem marks depends on it... Geet saw maan near her college she knew he was waiting for her ...Maan handed her project file to him ...Geet was shocked and surprised as tat was really not easy to complete the whole project within 1 night ...She didn't speak much but just a thanks ... he rode back just with a smile ... geet was not impressed by maan but had develped respect ...

They didn't speak much after tat but they used to share smile whenever they meet ...they had no connection except a small 5 year old little gal ( tats me ) ... both loved the gal very much ...

Geet's marriage talks were being made in her house and with none other but maan's elder brother dev ... Geet's family were not sure abt if they shd proceed ... Irrespective to othrs's views the lil gal was defo not happy as she wanted maan to marry geet ... Thankfully Dev was in love with another gal and his marriage talks with geet was subsided ...But the thought in the lil gals mind was growing day by day she declared tat her Geet di will marry no one but maan ... Being little adorable devil of the family her words were not missed by everyone as they began to ponder this ...

Elders of the family decided to talk to maan's father soon after dev's wedding ... Members of both the family was happy with the idea ... nitu cleared geet's doubts by stating tat maan was never interested in any gal but the gal was after him ... Geet and maan agreed to the proposal ...

Everything was set and the engagement was a week away ... Maan wanted to take geet out for coffee of course with family's permission ... Geet was waiting with her frd niharika near her office ...

" don't be silly geet ... u r gonna be engaged soon ... so wats wrong in going with him in a bike " said niharika
" i can't wat will my mom and uncle think abt me " geet tried to justify her

Maan was just a few steps away from them and was aware of their convo ... He didn't like the fact tat she didn't trust typical men attitude hit him ... He started to raise the accelator ...

" see he might feel bad u shd go " , niharika
" but ..." geet wasn't able to finish as maan started to move
" Mr.maan ..." Niharika shouted and maan stopped

Niharika forced geet to go with maan and she agreed half heartedly...

Geet was holding the side handle of the bike in one hand and her bag in another ... This made maan more angry ... He was driving ever so slowly ...

" why are u driving in snail speed? " asked geet
" u r scared , aren't u? "
" no i m not" said geet
" yeah tats why u r holding the handle instead of me " he said throwing angry arrow looks on the handle
" no ... i ... i m..." geet tried to search 4 an answer
" so u don't trust me " it was neither a statement nor a question
" i do " she said promptly
" then why don't u hold me "

geet was not sure wat she shd do ... she slowly placed her hand on his shoulder ... Maan smirked at his initial victory but wasn't satisfied ...

" are u holding me 4 safety or u don't want me to fall " he said
" ji ? " geet didn't understand his words
" hold around my waist "
" no ways ... never " she said immediately
" everyone do tat ... don't u see around u "

Geet watched a few couples in bike and realized wat he said was true ... she was hesitent to touch but jolted courage and put her hand around his hip ... Maan jerked due to sudden contact ...

That was their first day out ... From then maan used to drop geet home after her office and at times they would have dinner or coffee together ...They became comfortable with each other ...

They got married in all traditional way with blessings of family ... A year after their marriage they were gifted with a angel daughter ...

maan was cleaning his car ( or shd i saw pampering the car with all love ) while geet stood near the door watching him in disbelief she at times wonders if her husband loves her more or his car ( i ll answer its the car ...lol)

" maan tats the limit ... its sunday and u r romancing ur car " geet complained
" sorry sweet heart just five mins ... u get ready we ll go for a ride " he said
" i a waiting for tat 5 mins for past 1 hr "
" mom i m all ready ... when shall we leave " asked their cute little daughter niki
" why don't u ask ur papa " geet said pointing to maan
" i m done baby ... papa will take a shower and then we ll go " he said running to their room ...

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monika1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome n thnks 4 pm...but plz cont further if dis is not d first n last part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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niceee os. plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx and congo for new ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely. thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for the new os...
jst a simple luv story...dats y it diff..
continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update lovely
convey my wishes too ur anna and anni
😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum upd. lolzz maan love his car more than geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice OS
like the part where he romancing with his car
that what my husband do on holidays
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very cute and sweet love story 😛

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