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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Friends... for those who don't know me, my name is Raj... I love NivRen... I always imagined them in various roles that we can see them together... And so trying my hand in writing a FF based on one such concept I imagined...I don't know how it is going to turn out... writing short scenes is fine but putting a concept into story and making it interesting is difficult... I don't know how these wonderful writers and members of our forum do such good job at writing FF... here is my attempt at it... hope u like it...hope I am able to take the story forward...suggestions are welcome

This is a fictional story ... Since I love ccbm and nivren, most of the names will be from ccbm and some may change...

Index

Chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 2 - page 2

Chapter 3 - page 4

Chapter 4 - page 4

Chapter 5 - page 6

Chapter 6 - page 10

Chapter 7 - page 10

Chapter 8 - page 13

Chapter 9 - page 13

Chapter 10 - page 17

Chapter 11 - page 17

Chapter 12 - page 21

Chapter 13 - page 21

Chapter 14 - page 24

Chapter 15 - page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 1

Mumbai...they say is the city of dreams, a city of opportunities... you see many coming to this city to test their luck, their kismat

Similarly there was one such youth, his name was Viren Sood who came to this city to live his dream, to make a name for himself...he had left his family (parents and younger sister) behind in chandrapur, city in eastern Maharashtra, where his father was and is still serving as a government employee... Viren came to Mumbai 3 years back... he had promised his parents that he would fulfill their dreams ... When he came he was all alone ... did not know anyone in the city... only had a call letter in his hand from a newspaper agency which was not well known... but he sort this opportunity with the hope to make it big... Viren had acquired his degree in mass communication and journalism and had passed with first class... he had sent out a lot many applications to various agencies but the reply was poor... He had almost lost his hopes when he got this call letter from Mumbai... No interview just a direct call letter asking him to join the newspaper agency immediately... The agency as I said was not known and was in need of journalist and pay was poor... Viren saw this ray of hope amidst the darkness and came to Mumbai... he lived in a working men hostel... he worked hard and struggled to climb the ladder... but then this was Mumbai a city which also teaches you to get your way and makes you smart... within the past three years Viren learned quite a lot, he was already intelligent but now he became smart and witty with the teachings of life in the past three years... But he still has to achieve this dream of making it big... today he works as one of the junior journalist under a well known journalist Vikram Mehra in a famous newspaper agency called 'Aaj Ki Taza Khabar... Viren tries to keep his boss happy and pleased in the hope of getting his chance one day... Viren knows that he is the best ...

Edited by Raj_Luv_NiViren - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats Raj on starting your ff today...n had to say great start..wating for next update..hmm viren introduced now wating for nivedita to come😳
Edited by jaindeepti9 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Deepti... Nivi will come ... how can my story be complete with out nivren 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey raj...by writin this ff u proved tat u r a multitalented peron👏...i am really stupefied yaaar😲...how could you do all wrk at that same time😲👏...you r doin collage,threds,siggy,gr8 posts,ff...etc!!!!😊


now comin back to ur ff...its amazing dear...i love it😉...vm is missin in ur list...waitn fr ur vm dear😉



Edited by doot - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats raj ur ff is really good👏.waiting for ur next update n nivi to come and add colours to viren's life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raj_Luv_NiViren

thanks Deepti... Nivi will come ... how can my story be complete with out nivren 😳

oh yes i knowEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago
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raj,, very good start,,, i like your new viren,,,, eagerly waiting for nivi. .. continue soon👏
Edited by love_never_dies - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waw,,,,,its great,,,,,,keepn it up raj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Raj...

Thanks to start a new FF...😊 One more Golden feather in your Cap... 👏

I read ur FF. .. I loved the way you described the changes in Viren.. You are right.. experiance is the best teacher... you described it very beautifully... I loved the way you portrayed Viren.. the modern guy who struggle to impress his boss so that he would get better future...Fantastic update...👏.. Waiting to see the rest of the story...😛.

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