NEW GIRL IN TOWN- SECRET DIARIES-MNff-Part35-pg105 - Page 37

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

I Can't Stand this Aman...😳
n They Met Again...😳
Awww...he is Heart Broken...🥺...But Still...he is managing to Flirt...🤣

"Cruel and you can't ever exist in the same sentence. Your harshness I deserved it. You had to be rude . I know I was hard. Well'umm'usually I am soft though."

these Lines just cracked me up...🤣
oopppsss...an akward Moment...😛
But Mayank...Gossshhh..i luv him...❤️
the SRK Lines...se mujeh u n Ayshu n Komiee ki pyaar bahri Fights yaad a Gayinn...😳🤣
okay cuming back to the Update...😳😆
i luvddd there wholeee convo after this...😳
n u wrote it beautifullyyy...😳👏

"Start soon before I get lost."

"Ssshhh'.let me complete. You know the first time I saw you I thought you were'."

"Hot."

"No!"

"Must be sexy then?"

"Mayank!"

" You sure you don't have any eye-sight problem?"

"I am going to kill you if you interrupt me one more time."

These Lines too Just Cracked me Up ...🤣he will never change wotever happens 😳🤣

Awww...nupur finally was Going to Confess...😳😍

BUT...LOVE CONFESSED...!🥺

Pehaly Dingo Dong Bell...Ab Ye Aman...😳Arghhh...😡

Well Very Well Written Shivi...i just Luvd reading It...😳👏⭐️

i just don't wanna say anything next...Just Continue soon...😛

Annu😃

Originally posted by: Payal-15

It was just perfect..❤️...but then Aman😡

n Mayank wans to change for her...Aww...😳

n girl seems u r on a confession spree n agar Nupz confesses in the next update then it will be a hatrick😉u get what am saying😆

update soon😃

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Shivzzz🤗

Awww Mayank is such a sweetheart😳...He is hurt but he spoke so sweetly to her...😳

and Mayank...don't make fun of my SRK😳🤣

let me complete. You know the first time I saw you I thought you were'."

"Hot."

"No!"

"Must be sexy then?"

"Mayank!"

" You sure you don't have any eye-sight problem?"

@RED...🤣🤣...I just love him...🤣🤣...fultoo kameena...😳🤣

Omggg was Nupur going to confess??😲😲...hawww...and that stupid Aman came in between😡😡...awww...Nupur plzz confess it in next part😍

can't wait now...abhi update kar de plzzz😳

Originally posted by: 18anila1

areyyy u updated??????????😲😲😲

bt mujhe abhi tak PM kese nehi aya??????????😲😭😲

agar main ase hi check karne na ati to kyaaa hota mera??????😭😭😭

i can understand sis...😊

hehehe...ur frnds r cute...😆

PM abhi aya...

nw abt d update...

awww yeh kya kiya...😲

uff iss Aman ko to main...😡😡😡

idiot...sab kharab kar diya...gadha...😡😡😡

kabab mein haddi kahin ka...😡😡😡

usse aur time nehi mila tapak ne ke liye...😡😡

sab kuch bigar diya...😡😡

abhi meri Nupur mere Mayank se confess karne hi wali thi...

arhhh m so hating dis...uff idiot Aman...😡😡

awww my poor Mayank...usse kitna bura laga hoga...

i hope u will make dem soon together na plzzz😊😉😃

ps: want to see Mayank's POV also...plzzz😉😊😉

waise i loved it lodsss...😃😃

awesome update dear...👏👏

jesa maine pehle bhi kaha tha...😉

u write awesome...👏👍🏼👏

beautifully written...👍🏼

i really loved it lodsss...😃

plzzz continue soon...😊

will be waiting eagerly for ur next update...

love ya...🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: valliyah

why this aman guy had to come n ruin the moment...pls clear up the mess n update soon very very soon...!

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Jumping right to the point...

what the hell was Aman saying?? what with " I need time" does he not understand... She didn't say yes yet so how could he go on and say they're getting engaged... Looks like he left his brain back in high school...

Wonderful update shivani, a beautiful to-be moment ruined by Aman... Feel so bad for Mayank. He still had a hope, and now its shattered because of that looser...Continue soon pleasee!

-SP-

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Aman's got the worst timing ever..

and he had no right to say that they r gonna get married..Nupur never said Yes to him..wth is his problem?Nupur should downright refuse this proposal and tell him to get lost..😡

Please dont upset Mayank anymore..hope that Nupur clarifies and confesses the truth to Mayank soon

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Till now Aman was ok but now I'm hating him😡
Thank you for the update!

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

i kill this aman...thodi late nehi a sakta tha kya..aur nupur ne uuse ha kab kaha..

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Awesome update

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

NOOO...gosh she finally mustered the courage and then damn aman had to swoop in...i loved mayur in this update though...nupur's incomplete confession was just as awesome as mayank's complete one...update soon!

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

i wish i could smash this aman's face with something hard...everything was going on smoothly till he popped up n poked his nose into a highly inappropriate situation...😡😡 who the hell gave him the right to interrupt such a heavenly upcoming confession in midway...!!!!!!

dunno why but somehow aman doesnt look that much innocent to me as he seems to the world...somehow i m hving a feeling that he did all of this deliberately... he didnt even get a slightest positive hint 4m nupur of hving feelings towards him, n somehow i feel dat he got the unsaid exchanging vibes between mayur in the very 1st place...so indeed it was his planning to ruin it 4 them by all means...thats why only he came up with such a weird misunderstanding between them, i might b completely wrong as well...😕

but coming to mayur...awww one ethereal moment they shared😳😍...must say !!! so beautiful n lofty in all sense...mayu is slowing falling head over heels 4 nupur... n nupsi is giving him tough competition at the same time...😍

shivi plzzz plzzz now throw this pie head jerk out of their life...now there should b only Love - Haddi between this 2 Love Birds...☺️

plzzz continue Soon..soon as in not in next 3-4 days..😔

Originally posted by: kirti123

aman is so irritating why had he to come in middle

loved the part😊

Originally posted by: capricornFA

hey my adoreee shiviii🤗 🤗

well i read ur ff last nite and im comentin now😆

the story is proceedin very beautifuly especially d attraction both feelin for each other is realy mesmerizin😳 😳d twist for d development of d story ur usin is excepnable...😳😳

omg d kiss in few previous updates is...☺️

sorry forgot 2 say somethin 2 u yesterday nite...i wish u good luck for ur new life at med coll...my prayers r wid u...inshallah ull become a successful and eligible doctor in future🤗 🤗

if u want any of any of my help in studies den without hesitation just ask for it im always here for ur help...😳

tc sweetheart will meet u wenever ull b online🤗 🤗

and u still havent accepted my buddy request😳 😆 i sended u d day wen u had asked for it.😆 cz i knw its very difficult for u 2 send me separately every update...

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

Lovely update..Its getting interesting.. waiting to read ahead. Do cont soon :) thanks fr the pm :))

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Nice part.

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

Can i just shoot aman!! .. 🤢

When did nupur say a YES to him? . 😡 URGHHH!!. he ruined everything!! 😭

Originally posted by: stargurl34

aww, i loveeddd the convo that nupur and mayank had. esp the saree part, mayank respects nupur. ARGGG, aman 😡 ! why are you doing this shivani, make them confess jaldi jaldi <3 lol im kidding, continue with the pace of the story as you planned it ! amazinggg update ! continue soon girlie

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

omg...shivi!
such an heartwrenchin update!🥺
aakhir wahi hua .. jiska mujhe darr tha!😒
she ws abt 2 confess ...but stupid aman!😡
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗

Originally posted by: dj_adnanss

when is this bloody aman going to leave them alone 4 heavens sake :(( arghhh!! can i stab him please!!! this is the limit.. he spoilt such a beautiful moment with his wrong entry,and btw when the hell nupur said yes to his proposal?? hasnt he still been over the doseof alcohol dat he is daydreaming of getting married to nupur?? plz shivi do something with this psycho. update soon dis time plz

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice update.

d story getting interesting time by time.

witing for next update.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

I saw him turning around to back to his car. I wanted to shout, to scream out, stop him but my body was going a momentary seizure. The engine roared and I could see him leaving.

"Nupur lets go back inside."

"Leave me."

"Huh?"

I jerked away his hand from my waist and turned to face him.

"Why you said that to him?"

"Say what?"

"That we are engaged? I did not yet say a yes to you! Did I?

"Okay that...well I told him what was going to come sooner or later for sure...what?...were you planning to reject my proposal?"

"Aman...It's that things are not the...the same anymore."

"What? And you are telling me this now?"

"Please give me a chance. I can explain all."

"Explain what? That you now like him! God I was such a bloody fool to think that you were waiting for me all this while!"

"Aman...calm down."

"How can I keep my calm after knowing all this? Why you called me here then? Don't say you hadn't known I was coming to visit you! All this while I had kept those memories safely close to my heart. The first time I saw you- the tiny two -ponytailed girl in class 7 entering meekly when you were newly transferred to our school St.Josehps' . I had always wanted to be your friend but you did not even look at me. You were always busy in your friends. Finally we broke the ice in class 9 teacher's day function when I helped you with the decorations in the hall when your friends had ditched you at the last moment. We all used to be happy bunking history lectures in our last standard and went out to have fun in the school garden. You don't remember a thing? You accepted my last dance in our farewell prom. You dislike me coz I was a nerd back then. You still hold that against me, don't you?"

"Aman you were , no you are always my good friend. But I never looked you that way! How can you say all that I was biased against you? I was the one who brought you to our group. I made sure none ever made fun of you. Yes I accepted your proposal to dance that day coz you had always been such a sweet friend. It's not that you don't have any faults. Yet I always overlooked them. Always! Did I ever differentiate between you and others? But all that was high school. I always thought you are my good friend."

"Stop it Nupur...don't cry now and make me the villain."

"How can you ever think that I did all this on purpose?"

"Hey...hey...now please don't cry. It's making it harder for me."

"You know how happy I was when Maa brought your proposal to me. I hadn't seen you after school was over. I had been looking forward to this day...thinking how lovely it will be to see your face light up on seeing me after so long."

Maa. Her sagged tired face managing all of us flashed before my eyes. I remembered her constant worries of my secured future. She was scared I was turning 25 and yet unmarried. It was difficult to reason with her that life just started with my career going to blossom now. Even my dad's efforts to reason mom on the topic of my marriage has been futile. She got heartbroken easily. This time she had high hopes from me and I was going to let her down yet again. Mayank was there. But can he promise me total commitment? Would letting go of Aman make sense now. All the unsurites debating in my mind made my hurt ache.

"Aman please I need some time." I pleaded through my sobs.

"I can you give my whole life to think. Just hurry up though. On your one decision hinges three lives- yours, me and Mayank."

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"It's alright Nupur. Stop crying now."

"You have no idea how happy I am to see you back Dia."

"But I wanted an even longer honeymoon. Can't imagine your condition then."

"I would have died."

"Hmm'.in a normal situation you'd have bugged me to stay some more and bring out my fantasies. There is something else the matter here. Is it Mayank?"

"Nothing. "

"Now don't lie. You had run away after his confession. Did he dare to trouble you next? Tell me , I'll make sure he regrets."

"No. I was the one going to confess to him this time. But then Aman happened."

"Wait. Who's this Aman? And since when you developed any feelings for Mayank. Girl what all have you been hiding from me? Tell me all from the start."

Wiping my tears, I cleared my throat and began.

"Gosh that's so complicated. You fell in love with Mayank but he was out with Bells then and thought you just a friend. Next your old friend Aman landed here for marriage with you and Mayank gets jealous and kissess to confess. You diss him but realize that he's the one for you. Now you were to confess but Aman interrupted. Right?"

"You left out the part that Aman proposed to me. And he told Mayank a false news that we are engaged." I added dryly.

"Yeah. Wait but I don't get this part- why didn't you say a NO to Aman at the end?"

"Coz he was feeling bad! I had never envisioned that Aman may get heartbroken."

"Nupur , dear one of the hearts have to break. That's inevitable."

"I know. I just need a proper way to make Aman understand that nothing can move beyond friendship between us."

"The more you take time to decide the more you end up hurting both men."

"What about me? Does anyone care how I feel going through this? I don't enjoy being in the middle of some tug-of war. It's not as simple as it seems. I am still unsure of Mayank's commitment to me. You have no idea how badly I'm pestered for marriage by my mother. I need to take care of her feelings too. "

"Can't say about anyone but I do. Come here. You badly need a warm hug."

"Oh Dia."

"Everything will be alright Nupur. Trust me. Have faith."

"My faith is shaking."

"You just need a break to sort out all your issues. And bingo I just have the perfect plan."

"Hey..I don't like when you smile like this. You always got me into troubles with your plans whenever you made this face."

"Haaha..relax it's not as if I am saying you kiss both guys and decide whom you want to be with."

"Dia!"

"Just trust me Nupur. My plans have always bore fruit. See finally I have got Ian with me now forever by my side."

"Remembering with Ian, You left your story mid-way. You went swimming with him to the beach. What happened next?"

"Ian's upstairs in his gym. Let me close the doors first." She winked.

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"Where are we going?"

"Are we there?"

"The trees are beautiful outside. They look somewhat different than those in the city."

"I'm bored."

"No. Play Keisha's tik-tok song again."

"Are we there yet?"

"Nupur! My head is hurting now."

"Serves you right. Tell me then where are we going?"

"Don't you want our after wedding party venue to be a surprise?"

I looked outside the glass windows of the land cruiser. We were passing through lushy green meadows and huge oak trees lining the roads.

"What's there in the countryside?"

"Surprise Nupur."

"Ian you know how much I love haunted manors and castles. Hope you booked one of those as the party venue."

"Nupur it's a farmhouse. A big villa turned into a farmhouse."

"Ian!" Dia punched him lightly on the shoulder. " you ruined my surprise."

"Oops. Darling I'm so sorry."

"Hahaa'Ian you rock buddy. So who's it? When did you guys booked one? And when was all the planning done. You guys just returned from Hawaii yesterday night."

"Well actually we didn't need to book any. It's my friend throwing a party for us. It's Mayank's farmhouse."

"I sent an invite to Aman too," added Dia.

I kept staring at both of them with my dropped jaw.

Ohhh...Nupur in dillemma..