Senior Inspector Daya (My Story) - Page 2

Nice story shreya...after 10 doses of AKA I was actually thinking...you know...daya sir ko bhi 😈

👏👏👏...lovely story Sri...awesome... ⭐️⭐️⭐️

and you sent them in Goa...😳😳

hey SHREYA...

very very LOVELY STORY👏... after prolong period i like BHAI as his CHARACTER in UR story👍🏼... pata nahi yaar main kyun tum log jaisa nahi likh paata😭... itni TRY karta hun😡... magar nahi ho pata💔... khair...
GOA, Ins RAHI, BARBOSA... very very well done... U really did a FABULOUS work⭐️... thanx alot to give ME a DOUBLE DOSAGE of BHAI... cz U posted it in TWO parts😉

Again a very good job shreya!! 👏 👍🏼

Very good story shreya 👏👏👏 keep it up👍🏼 thanks for PM😊

First of All Thank You..u knw Why😉...

Originally posted by: neeme

First of All Thank You..u knw Why😉...

And Now Abt the Story...It was All About Daya..Daya and Daya.ur story was on what Daya is. what he can do alone.👏..Nice plot..A very nice investiagtion and The character Rahi is good..Some scens was bit confusing for me..But later i understand..The overall story was good and the thrill, investiagtion was Good..It was Remake of "behroopiya"..Where Daya was "behroopiya"...

Nice Story👍🏼

and one thng i want to correct ur muhawara its "Rassi jaal gae per bal nahen gaya" Not kaat gae😉

First of all very sorry for late reply...I have not read yet ur Chase but will read it very soon...
Really good story...when i read it I thought of Beheroopiya...Great work Sri...keep it up 👍🏼

Wow...
great work sri...
Nice prolong...
I enjoyed much of this story...
Keep it up...