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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hope you all will like my small try...I guess its small😆
What Is This Called
What is this called?
Life to rejoice or love to merchandise A blockbuster where the person feel At the top of world or a flop where the dream Of ones eyes shatter I was on top of this earth When she confessed her love But the other moment she started Her game of yes and no Is this the wand of luck which is blessing for everyone But a curse for me I never believed in luck Only in hard work But the circumstances did not spare me They caught me and made me Believe there is a luck
Which plays its game
And makes the strongest man lame
Its my luck which is making us aloof
Though our hearts one
What should I do
sit and curse my luck
or make a new luck for me
I cannot cry or my luck
Its not my personality
But can frame a luck which
will never separate her from me
If she is flower,I am her fragnance
If she is Book ,I am her cover
If she is happy,I am her smile
If she is body,I am her soul
I promise I will never leave her alone
Neither circumstances nor luck
Now my decision won't be abduct
She will find me on her way
Wherever she will go I will be her shadow
After a long struggle
I got my love back
If I cannot take her in my arms
Then I won't let her stumble either
I will be hers and she will be mine
Nothing can change my decision
We will be together for ever and after
I know its not a fairytale
There will be ups and down
But I am sure in every odd day
our love will together make a way
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NidhaA thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guddu's feeling has been well portrayed shona...
Kudos👏🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, Sur. That was fantastic!! 😃
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Guddu in a nutshell. You should put it on Himanshoos fb. Lovely poem.
azuria
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really touching - love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one Sur...👏...Beautiful...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: azuria

Guddu in a nutshell. You should put it on Himanshoos fb. Lovely poem.
azuria

Perfectly describes Guddu. Agree with AZ should but on H FB page !
Nina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Excellent 👏 👏 👏 way to describe Guddu's inner thought... nice poem ...loved it ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Such a cute poem Sur!
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Originally posted by: Eowyn

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">Guddu's feeling has been well portrayed shona...</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">Kudos👏🤗</font>



thanks angel 🤗

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