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Posted: 14 years ago
thnnk u jiyaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
will update soon dearr
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Posted: 14 years ago

really amazing story...

continue soon dear...

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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

really amazing story...

continue soon dear...

n do add me to ur pm list...

awww thnk u sooo much...will add ya to my PM list...n ya will update the next chap on 21st august
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Akash(to payel )- agar tum dono ki baat cheet khatam ho gayi toh hum chale?

Ridzy- kahaan?

Akash- payel ke saath date mein?????

Ridzy- haaye haaye kya baat hain………Mr.angry young man toh Mr.Romantic bann gaya…. ….waah Payel teri jaadoo toh chaa gayi

Payel blushes…..

Armaan- ridhimma, hume bhi chalna chaahiye….hum dono ko kabab mein haddi bann ne ki kya zaroorat hain…😉

Ridzy(smiles)- haan ..lets go…bye love-birds

N they all leave…….

Armaan and ridhimma goes to the parking lot

Suddenly,

Ridzy- ouchhh(she screams in pain)

Armaan- ridhimma kya hua…….

Ridzy- ahh…kuch nahi … bas meri sandal ka heel toot gaya…..

Armaan- tum sandal uthaar do na….

mein gaadi leke aati hain

Ridzy- arrey nahi…mein tumhaare saath parking lot chalthi hoon

Armaan- chup!!!! Meine kaha na mein gaadi leke aati hoon…..itz full n final

Ridzy- theek hain.

Armaan smiles n he goes to the parking lot…

After a while he comes with the car…n ridzy enters the car

Well she was constantly looking at armaan😳😳………armaan noticed that n he smiled…😊

Seeing him smile,she turned her face away with a shy😳😆😳

Ridzy(in her mind)- yeh kya ho raha hain…aisa lagta hain ki armaan meri zindagi ki ek ahem hissa ban chuka hain…..kya mujhe armaan se pyaar ho gayi kya???? Nahi nahi ridhimma…… do teen dino mein pyaar????? Aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakti

Armaan- kya soch rahe ho???

Ridzy- ahh…..kuch nahi ……iien kaha soch rahi thi….

Armaan giggled..(he knew wat she was thinking)

Armaan- chalo…ghar aa gaya…..

Ridzy-ohh…..good night armaan…… byeee

Armaan-byee

Ridzy- byee

Armaan- byeee!!!

Ridzy- byee😆

Kirti- arrey ridhimma tu aa gayi…..

Ridzy(comes back to senses)….she notices dat armaan was smiling(or laughing) at her😆😆

She feels awkward…n she runs to her house…..

seeing dat kirti gets confused-😕 yeh bhaag ke kyun aa rahi hain

Armaan (bursts into laughing)- paagal ladki…….his phone bell rings n as soon as he sees the name of the caller in his phone screen he sayz- ohh teri….aaj toh solid marne waala loon….he attends the call n say- arrey daatna mat….mein aa raha hoon tumhaari ghar….he cuts the calls n he leaves

Ridhimma enters d drawing room………

Padma- ridhimma…beta teri dance performance kaisi thi

Ridhima- achi thi maa……

Atul(seeing ridzy's tensed[awkward] face)- hey ridzy koi pareshaani hain kya?

Ridzy- nahi atul…woh mein bohot thak gayi hoon…isliye

Kirti- acha tu kamre mein jao…mein khaana waha leke aati hoon

Ridzy nods her head n goes upstairs to her room

Later:

Ridzy was walking hither n thither thinking sumthing deeply

Kirti comes with the food

Kirti- kya hua ridhimma….phir se kisi par coffee gira diya kya😆??? ( refer d 2nd chap)

Ridhima- arrey aisa kuch nahi hain bhaabhi

Kirti- aao.. yahaa baith ke khaana khaano

Both of them sits

Kirti- acha…..teri performance kaisi thi

Ridzy- dii……bohot acha tha….sabko pasand aa gaya…..

Agar armaan nahi hote toh mein yeh sab nahi kar paati

Kirti- oohhh

Acha payel aur baaki sab aaye thei kya????

Ridzy- haan di payel aur akash aaye thei

Par uss idiot nahi aaya

Kirti- idiot???? Matlab...rahul??

Ridzy- haan wohi!!! Bhabhi woh kuch zyaada hi gussa karne laga hain…..

Kirti- tu usse phone kar ke pooch ki woh college kyun nahi aaya??

Ridzy- haan abhi call karti hoon

She calls rahul

Ridzy- bhabhi woh phone nahi utha raha hain

She tries several tyms…bt she didn't get any response

Kirti-koi baat nahi…kal subah phone karna…theek hain…..

Ridzy have her food….

Kirti- acha mein chalthi hoon…good night

Ridzy- good night bhabhi

NEXT MORNING

Ridzy gets up from her bed…..

She takes her cell n calls rahul…bt no response

Ridzy- iss rahul ka toh mein…….nahi ridzy chill…subah subah uthke no gussa…….

She texts a Good Mrng msg to Armaan

N she goes to the wash room…

Later after she comes out of the wash- room…

She was drying her hair with d towel

She checks her cell

Ridzy- kamal hain…armaan ne reply nahi kiya????? kahi armaan kisi problem mein toh nahi hain!!

She calls Armaan…but to her ill-luck…she got no response…she tried several tyms..all her attempts were in vain…

Days passed by….she got no response from Armaan

One fine day:

Atul- ridzy teri WOH aaya hain😉

Ridzy- woh?? Kaun woh?

Atul- arrey Armaan

Ridzy(wid a wide smile)- kya??????

She stop smiling n gives a gussa waala expression(as if she wasn't bothered abt him)- kya???

Armaan- haan…..

Armaan enters ridzy's room

Ridzy turns her face away

Kirti n pranav too came to ridzy's room

Pranav- armaan!!!kaise ho???

Armaan- theek hoon bhaiyya

Ridzy- oh Mr...woh meri bhaiyya hain..tumhaara nahi

Armaan- im sorry!!!!

Ridzy- tum meri phone kyun nahi uthayii….pata hain kitni pareshaan thi mein???

Atul, pranav n kirti- ohhh….really????

Ridzy feels awkward

Ridzy(to armaan)- meri sawaal ka jawaab do

Armaan- ridhimma im really sorry….kal meri best friend ki shaadi hain..toh mein uski madat kar rahi tha…..mein uski ghar mein tha…..par mobile apne hi ghar bhool gaya…..sorry (n he holds his ears)

Ridzy(seeing this gesture,smiles)- theek hain theek hain maaf kiya

Armaan- yeh huina baat……waise tum meri dost ki shaadi mein aaogi na

Ridzy- nahi armaan…mein tumhaari dost ko jaanthi thak nahi…kaise uski shaadi mein

Armaan- arrey its ok…mein tumhe invite kar rahi hoon na..tumhe aani hi padegi

Ridzy- armaan!!!sorry!!! mujhe nahi aani…waise bhi mein bohot pareshaan hoon….n she looks at her cell

Ridzy(in her mind)- abhi tak rahul ne call nahi kiya

Armaan(to ridzy's brothers)- waise..mujhe lagta hain ki aapke behen ko sajna-savarna pasand nahi hain….i think she's not fashionable….

Ridzy- oh helow…kisne kaha ki fashionable nahi hoon????

Kirti(to pranav n atul)- lo..shuru ho gayi

Atul- arrey bhabhi….hum teeno yahan bethkar(pointing to the sofa) yeh live action movie dekthe hain😆😆…n they goes n sit

Armaan- aur nahi toh kya!!! Tum unfashionable ho..isliye tum functions mein jaana nahi chaahthe…waha tum doosro ke style se tumn match nahi kar paogi na

Ridzy- ohh helow……mein kaafi stylish hoon aur bohot fashionable bhi

Armaan- nahi…tum fashionable nahi ho

Ridzy- yes I am

Armaan- no you aren't

They continue their YES-NO fight….Rest 3 of them rest their hands on their chin n looks on

Armaan(shouts)- ok fine

Tum shaadi mein mat aana…mera galthi tha….sorry…..n he goes out of the room….

Ridzy gets angry n breaks her coffee cup…..

The screen freezes on her angry face

Precap- armaan gets a call…

Armaan- hello????

Voice(of the caller)- zara parking lot mein aao…maine tumhaari gaadi mein ek gift rakhi hain

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part :)
Thanks for the pm
Luv
Nandi
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Originally posted by: AMMY12

Nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

thnk u sooo much dear...btw u're welcome too

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Nice part :)
Thanks for the pm
Luv
Nandi

thnxxx a lot nandiii...
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awesome part!!!
loved AR little fight.
i wonder why rahul is not returning shilpa's call back.
very interesting precap.
please update soon.

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