Os laxmi jee ( my take was close) - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Thanks for the pm
I was laughed so much when i read the part laxmi was licking la
that was just beautiful
great job and i loved the os
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update.
mindblowing.really brought the smile on my face.😆😆
great job.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏...Wonderful OS!!! It was so funny!!! Im not surprised that la didn't realise it was laxmi not arnav! after all she's a bimbo!...Keep it up! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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dey kinda stole ur idea 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

La: oh my hands i need a manicure ... she just walkout of the kitchen

Nani : enter kitchen found everything ready" hmmm lagta ha koi jadu ki chari mil miss Khashap ko"( i guess she found a magic stick ) she just walk back to her room

Laxmi : like always move around nani

Nani: jee laxmi jee kya baat ha aap kuch naraz ha ...patted her

Anjali :walk in with Arnav and Shyam "Nani kya woh raha ha"

Nani: kuch nahi yeh Laxmi kuch perechan ha aaj.

Shyam: patted it

Laxmi walk out

Arnav: i am going to my room

Anjali: chota you will not have dinner.

Arnav: khaloga baad mein just want to be alone

Mani jee: uff aagai aap Anjali

Anjali: mami jee kya huwa

Mani jee :pacho kya nahi huwa .. bus aap humara funereal mein aata aata ragai

Anjali: why what happen?

Mami jee : uff yeh miss teep taap Kashap na to hum ko bara upsettia kya

Anjali: per huwa kya

Mami jee: humrwa murder karna wali thi woh.

Anjali: where is she ?

Mami jee : apni make up kitwa la ker beta ha ... arnav betva ka pthuher is in danger

Anjali hum dekhta ha

Nani: aap beta Arnav dekhe laga...


La :looking her self in mirror" uff the heat has spoil all my skin.i should apply mask before changing . it will be no use to wear a new dress .she placed her dress on bed and she apply mask on her face , placed cucumber at her eyes and lay down.with her head phone on

Arnav: knocked at her door but didnot find any reply he walk to his room. as he knock the door open

Laxmi walk in it move here and there . it sit on her bed on her dress .. chew it a bit..

LA: i know ASR will love to see me in this color

Laxmi: saw cucumber it add from the plate placed next to La .. .laxmi finish it look around saw one on La eyes it clime on sofa back and try to eat... its tongue lick La fore head .

LA: ASR is that you honey ... she felt some one touch her softly

Laxmi : could not reach it jump on the arm where LA arms were walk on it

LA: it is tickling ASR , why you are in such a romantic mood.

Laxmi: reached to her eyes and with picked up one cucumber and chew it ...

LA:Arnav kya ha give me back i just need to relax after so much cooking.

Laxmi: placed its feet on her shoulder and picked the other cucumber...

LA: i am having goosebumps ASR...

Laxmi: lick her nose.

LA: oh ASR..

Laxmi: sneeze maa maa

LA open her eyes and just shocked she could not speak for some time

Laxmi: lick her face

LA: shouted you i will kill you

Laxmi: got scared and pee on her... and jump on bed

LA : what the hell is this ASR.. she just could not believe.

Laxmi: legs were tangle with her shirts and it ran out.

LA: on top of her voice ASR i will kill her she just ran out behind her.

Arnav who was watering his plants thinking about Khushi her house door was coming in front of his eyes again and again... he heard La voice ran towards her room

Laxmi: reach the main hall with LA shirt sat next to Nani

LA: reached behind her " i will not leave this goat"

Arnav: kya huwa

LA: she had my cucumber and .paused

NAni: tou aap aur lala miss khashap kitchen mein ha

Mami jee : hello hi bye bye : waitwa i will bring

LA: she pee on me and see ..my designer clothes she pointed at her dress on which LAxmi was sitting..

Anjali: just could not hide her smile...

Arnav: i will buy you more

LA: throw it out or i am going .

Arnav:looked at nani 'LAvanya you come with me "

LA:no you decide right now if it will stay in this home i will not.

Nani: thek ha aap ja sakthi ha miss Khashap kyun ka Laxmi ka tou yeh ghar ha

Arnav: just could not say any thing :Lavanya baat tou suno "as he saw her walking out

LA: please dont follow me i cant stay in this home..

Mami jee : saauo maam aap ki gootawa tou bari taaz ha

Nani: ha Laxmi ko insan ki pechan ha Arnav ko nahi...(laxmi can recognized people not Arnav)

i hope you guys enjoyed it ...dont forget to comment


Happy Independence day to all

i was close she did thought laxmi as arnav 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This made me LOL and its amazing about how close your take was to the actual episode! Well done xX
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOL!! Naddiya. I was watching todya's episode and after seeing that scene I was like that was soo close to that os I read. I guess the cv's came to our forum and borrowed the idea from the os.

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