Pyaar Tune kya Kiya- AR Love story part 5 updt

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guyys this is my 2nd ff a bit diff from my previous one which is still on .. that's O Re Piya...this ff as usual its about the Armaan & Riddhima the eternal love birds'.its about their separation, misunderstanding, ignorance & most above all thier Selfless LOVE for each other'''''''

PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA- AR LOVE STORY
So here it goes:

We see a car entering the hospital gates which is situated at the outskirts of Mumbai , two old people had a sad & grim look on their face they went to meet the doctor'.

Dr- Hello Dr shashank please come in & have a seat

Sh- Hello Dr Avinash

Dr- Mrs Gupta pls have a seat

Sh- so doctor how is she

Dr- Dr shashank I wont hide anything from you please here are her latest reports & hands over a file to him, Shashank gets disturbed after reading it

Dr- There is no progress from her side & have already told you the cure for her health,

Sh- No doctor not at all'no way'Padma starts crying & says shashank plss listen to the doctor

Shashank just keeps quiet

Sh ' can we go and meet her

Dr- yes sure but pls be careful & don't remind her anything about the past

Sh- ok doctor

Both of them hold each others hand o give the support they needed & with each slow steps they walk towards the room

Nurse- Ur'll can go in

A girl wearing a knee length dress with her hair all messed up siiting on the floor and talking to her teddy bear which she held it in her hand in a very childish manner

G- tum na kab aaoge mujhe na tumhari bohot yaad aa rahi hai (very sadly)

S- Riddhima beta

No answer

P- Rimmi beta

G- mumma (excitedly) mumma mumma goes & hugs her

P- (crying) beta aap kaise ho'..cupping her face & looking at her but riddhima jus removes her hand & starts playing with her teddy bear again as if her parents don't exist..

Padma just looks at Shashank even he has tears in his eyes

Then suddenly while she was playing she remembers sumthing

R- Papa woh woh armaan kahan hai'who aaya hai na mujhe maloom hai who mujhse milne na zaroor aayega (asking with lot of hope)

Shashank jus keeps silent not getting any answer

R- Papa armaan kahan hai ''..gets no answer'..crying badly papa armaan aaya na

She goes to Padma

R- Mamma mamma armaan kahaan hai'she caught padma's ahoulder & very violently shakng n asking armaan' armaan

Riddhima was getting very violent she just pushed padma from her way & tries to go out but was stopped by her dad & the ward boy n the nurse

R ' shouting Armaaann mujhe armaan se milna hai..

All were trying to control her., just then the doctor came gave her an injection which made her unconscious they carry her to the bed all this while still murmuring

R ' armaan'armaa'ar 'silence

Padma hugs Shashank starts crying

P- Humari beti ke saath hi kyun huwa'.why god did this to her why????..she was my perfect daughter

S- don't blame god '..blame that person who did this to her..main use kabhi maaf nahin karunga

Usne meri beti ki life barbaad kardi'''I Hate Him I hate that Armaan 'he said with lots of anger

(Yes guys the girl is Riddhima & she is in the mental hospital for the last 3 years .. yes its bcoz of armaan so whats the story do tune in for the next part)

PLss do tell me how it was & press the like tab any comments or suggestions let me know ...ur'll might find it similar to sumthing but this whole idea & writingis all mine...

Would love to hear from u😊😊😃..

INDEX

Part 1- Pg 1

Part 2- Pg 2

Part 3- Pg 4

Part 4- Pg 6

Part 5- Pg 10



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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept
but did armaan really hurt her or went away for her
anywayzzz continue soon
pm me when u update again =D

- Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great concept...
waitng to know more
do update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept...do pm me when u updt...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sweety :) The concept is very different and at the same time, heart-wrenching. Couldn't see Riddhima like that! Not At All :(
And I can't beleive that Armaa is the reason behind all this :( No :'(
I am eagerly waiting for the next part. I loved the way you describe all the scenes :D Ty for the PM. Continue superrr Sooon :) (In riddhima's Kiddish ishtil) :P
-Samica <33
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc concept ...

do add me 2 ur pm list ...

ritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept! continue soon! thanks for the pm! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesommee concepptt.
wheress armaan. whatts happenedd. ????
updatee soonn!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey jana plz update soon
good ff
plz pm me too
maria
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! man the story seems so nice i am loving it...it's a really differen concept and i wonder what would have Armaan done? just waiting for the next part cont very soon would love to read such and interesting story :)

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