~*~*PIYAR*~*~MIILEE*FAN~FICTION~

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HERE IS PART 1 OF MY STORY

~*~*PIYAR*~*~

PIYAR

PART 01

ONIE MIILEE SE BUHAT PIYAR KARTA HA & MIILEE US SE NAFRAT KARTE THE . KYU K WHO BUHAT SHARTE LAGAYA KARTA THA .........................KUSHI ONIE SE PIYAR KARTE HA....

M:MIILEE O:ONIE K:KUSHI D:DADE MAA V:VISHAL R:RAHUL

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MIILEE IN COLLEGE

M:hi guyz

K:hi miilee

O:hi

M:onie tum muj se baat mat karo to aacha ha

K:are miilee ajj tum ko kiya huia

M:mujhe kuch nahi huia

K:ok tu tum onie se lar kyu rahe hoon

O:haa dekho na

M:kiya dekho ? joo dekhna ha tum ko dekhna ha

O:plzzzzz mujhe maaf kardo

M:ese din nahi aie

O:ok

K:kiya huia miilee tum mujhe batao

M: haa batate hoon per akele me

K:ok onie tum jao

M:ha ha jao

O:ok byeeeeeee guyz

K:byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

M:ha

K:haa to KYU lar rahe hoo bichare onie se ?

M:bichara haha who muj se piyar karta ha & me us se nafrat karte hoon

K:kiyaaaaaaaaaaa???????

M:tum ko kiya huia ?

K:miilee mujhe kuch nahi huia but tum ko pata ha k me onie se piyar karte hoon

M:kiyaaaaaaaa? us kamene se

K:miilee us ko kamena mate kaho na plzzzzzz

M:ok mere maa bus tum hii batao k kiya kaho us ko ?

K:us ko kahoooooooooooo SIR

M:kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?SIR

K:ha SIR

M:MY FOOT

K:nahi kaho ge

M:nahi ok byeeeeeee me chalte hoon dede aagaie

K:byeeeeeee & sir VISHAL ko mera taraf se piyar dena

M:ha ha mere maa

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V:hi beta

M:hi papa

V:kuch huia kiya ajj?

M:no papa

V:ok chale

M:ok

~~~~~~~~IN HOME ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

M:hi DADE MAA KESE HOO APP ?

D:me kese dikhte hoon

M:ek dam perfect

D:ha to me theek hoo aacha miilee beta khan tayar ha jaldi ao

M:haaa aie 1 min me

D:theek ha

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~CALL TO MIILEE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

M:hi

K:hi

M:kiya huia mere ,maa ?

K:kuch nahi bas kall onie ne party rakhe ha

M:to

K:aaoooge na

M:no

K:plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

M:ok dekho ge kall parso kuch kahonge

K:kall parsoooooooooooooooooooo

M:YES

K:are party kall party ha & tum mujhe kall parso bataie ge

M:ufffffffffffffffffff who song tha

K:aacha

M:yes

K:BYEEEEEEEE

M:BYEEEEEEE

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~LUNCH~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

D:deeer kyu laga dee aane me

V:haa beta itne deer

M:who kushi ka phone tha

D:ha to

M:who kah rahe the k kall onie ke waha party ha

D:to

M:who kah rahe ha k tum bhi ao

V:to jana

M:thankx papa & papa wese RAHUL nahi nazar aaraha ha

D:who college me ha

M:ooooooooooooooooooo

D:ha lo who aa bhi gaya

R:hi pa da mil

M:oieeeeeeee ye shart foms kyu nikal raha ha

R:ese hii mujhe bookh lage ha kana doo

M:ye to para ha

R:kaha ?

M:are table per our kaha

R:haa per chiken kaha ha

M:maar jao ge

R:kyu ?

M:pata nahi bird flu nikla ha

R:jeeeee ha nikla tha

M:nikla tha nahi nikla ha

R:ok mere maa

M:bahi mene tum se kitne baar kaha ha k tum mujhe maa mat kaho me abhi budii nahi huie

R:aacha

M:rukoo me tum ko abhi dekhte hoo

R:haa dekhte ha

M:yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

R:bas hoo gaya

M:yes

R:ab jao KITCHEN me & mere liye chiken ufff bird flu leker ao

M:ok wait me leke aie

R:ha jaldi lao

M:ha fata fat

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~IN KITCHEN~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

M:lalalalalalalala

R:song gaa rahe ha pa

M:bahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bachao

R:mileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I HOPE U LIKE THIS ....😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2

THANKX 4 COMMENTS

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#3

THANKX 4 COMMETS

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HA RAHUL IS KA BAHI HA

& THANKX 4 COMMENTS

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THANKX 4 COMMENTS

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#6
hi
KUCH PICX HA . JO IS STORY ME LIYE GAIE HA . UN KI ONE ONE PICX HA enjoy 😆 😆 😆

HERE IS 😊

MIILEE


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105nlns.jpg

ONIE


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105nt53.png

VISHAL


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105nvoo.jpg

DADE MAA


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105nyxc.jpg

KUSHI


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105o2o9.jpg

RAHUL


LINK
http://i4.tinypic.com/105o4kw.jpg

I HOPE U LIKE IT 😊
(ENJAY EVRY ONE) 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HERE IS PART 2

PART 02


REACAP:MIILEE CHILATE HA & RAHUL JATA HA


M:bachaooooooooooooooooo
R:AYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
D:ye mere bache ko kiya hoogaya godddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
R:kiya huia?
M:ka ka kakroch
R:kakroch !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M:budu who neche dekho
R:kiya dekho ? HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA BACHAO
D:me jate hoon
R:bachao da
M:dade maaaaaaaaa
D:KIYA HUIA?
R:kakroch
D:theer jaa kute kamene
M:maro maro dade maaa
R:maro maro
D:maar gaya
M:gud
R:great
D:haa
M:chiken doo
R:abhi
M:ha
R:us ko dekh kar mere jaa nikal gaie ha & tum kah rahe hoo k CHIKEN doo
M:ha ok nahi khao ge to na sahi
R:matlub!!!!!
M:me chiken peakh rahe hoon neche
R:aacha haaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!
M:wowwwwwwwwwww
R:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
M:ok peakh diya neache ab mujhe jana ha
R:kaha ??
M:kise dost ki party me
R:ok
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PARTY~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
O:onie miilee ki bare me soochta ha
K:hi onie
K:helooooo kaha kho gaie
O:kuch nahi
M:hiii
K:hi
M:to mujhe tore deeer ki baad jana hoga
O:tum nahi jaaa sako gii miilee
M:matlub!!!
K:matlub!!!
O:me tum ko jane nahi doonga
K:how deair u ? onie
M:kushi choro me is se kud hi nipat loonge
O:kiya karooge
M:MIILEE jo karte ha who batate nahi
K:kiya karege tuu?
M:are me apne bahi ko phone karoonge
K:wowwwwwwwwwww
M:HA

& MIILEE CALL TO RAHUL & SAY COME TO HERE

R:miilee
M:bahiiiiiiiiiiii
R:kiya huia ?
M:bahi who onie muj se gandi harqat kar rahe ha
R:aacha
M:yes
R:kiya kiya us ne
M:who mere dirnk me behonshi ki dawa mila ker mujhe pila raha tha zabar daste
R:ok kaha ha
K:hi
R:oo hi kushi
K:onieee are who miilee ko leke jaa raha ha
O:kiya haa ?
R:kuch nahi chor doo miilee ko
O:kyu tumhare kiya lagte ha
R:bahan
O:ooo really
R:ye chor doo
O:nahi

& RAHUL ONIE KI PITAIE KARTA HA & MIILEE & KUSHI KO LEKE JATA HA & ONIE KO HOSPITAL CHOR KI CHALI JATE HA ....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~IN HOME~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
R:miilee tum waha ajj se nahi jaogi
M:kyu bahi?
R:ajj ye sab kuch dekha us ke bavjood bhi kyu
M:yes bahi me to onie ki party me sirf kushi ki kahne per gaie the
R:oo really
M:yessss
R:ok me kall kushi se kud poocho ga
M:ok
R:ok
V:kiya huia?
M:kuch nahi papa

& WAHA POLICE ATE HA & RAHUL KI LIYE POOCHTE HA(P:PLICE MAN)
P:heloo ms vishal
V:hi but kyu aie ha app yaha ?
P:app ki bate ne onie ko mara ha
V:ye app kese kah sakte ha k rahul ni hii use mara ha
P:hum kah rahe ha na
V:saboot to dee
P:is waqt hamare pass saboot nahi ha
V:to app kis ke kahne per yaha aie ha
P:hum !!!!
V:yes app log
P:humare yaha ek larki aie the
M:kahe who kushii to nahi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
V:naam to pata hoga
P:jii nahi
V:jab app kise ko leke aie ge tab hii hum mane gi ki rahul ne kise onie ko mara ha
P:ok ms vishal hum subha ko who larki leke aienge
R:miilee ab me kiya karoonga ?
M:haa bahi who sab kuch mere wajha se huia
R:no who sab kuch mane kiya & ab tum soo jao
M:ok bahi but
R:kuch nahi byeee GOOD NIGHT
M:GOOD NIGHT

& SOOCHTE SOOCHTE DONO KI RAAT CUTTE HA

M:good morning
R:good morning
D:brak fast tayar ha khao
V:khana mujhe office ki liye buhat deer hoo rahe ha
P:ha ms vishal
M:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
V:jii to saboot
P:ye ha who sabot ee larki ander aa
M:???????????
R:??????????
D:??????????
V:??????????

& PEECHE SE

PART 2 END

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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
that wa really good
i really enjoyed
😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
WONDERFULL WORK MONA!!
GOOOD WORK 👏 👏
aatif_bilal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nammu

that wa really good
i really enjoyed
😊

thakx 😊 4 liking my story 😊

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