MN * YOU & ME - It's MAGIC. Part 18 - Pg 88. - Page 7

Oyeee Hoyee Fantu tu toh progres kar rahi hai...second part mein hi last line mein romance😳🤣.;...Aage kya hoga...I m wondering😍☺️🤣

kinzu I am sorry, I cant comment on 1st part. nupur character is so beautiful. but I cant understand mayank. in one hand mayank is mockin nupur for his looks then after that he is flirting with him . I think Mayank is casanova here. I hope mayank fall for nupur quickly

damn i loved it!...especially the last part😆...i was hoping mayank wouldnt turn out to be an ***hole...and thank god he didnt haha...his mom is just a bahaana...clearly he agreed cuz somewhere in his heart, he liked her too...but i like that hes so direct...because you need that for a girl whose not so secure about her own qualities...cant wait for the next update 😊

hmmm fragile magic is still the best! 😳 but kinza u knw i was extremely happy when i got ur PM...thank god u hv started another FF so soon.i got something to look forward to everyday again!

i m being totally honest.the concept of arrange marriage related with dark complexion of gal is something not new, i read similar Mn story recently in Mulan's FF & she described it beautifully...but i m looking forward to this one also...lets c, i m sure u will manage to give ur magic touch in this story also.
thanks again magician.🤗...

Beautiful and really Lovely

very nice update.

Loved it!!! Wonderful part, Angel!! :)

Esp the last bit...where he says "someone's falling for my looks" and then puts his arm around her waist to lead her out of the cabin...WOWWW...i could actually see the whole scene so perfectly and picture them sooo well :D

Lovelllyyy part and pllzzz yaar do continue soon :) Your FF updates have become a habit that im addicted to, you know :)

Yay !! so the magician is back, thank you for coming soon actually I was missing your updates.

Wow arrange marriage fab concept. I think the most beautiful part of any love story is development of relationship in couples.

Part 1

Gunjan supporting Nupur aww so sweet I like father daughter convo

MN will be meeting for fist time and god Nupur is hell nervous to meet him.

Part 2

Oh their first meeting, the way you described mayank I can imagine him hot and handsome. My heart pricked when he mock on her she found it same like the other people.

I don't like his smirks and he is marrying her bcoz of his mother, well let see how you weaves magic in their hearts with you extra ordinary touch.

Thanks for the PM

God bless you

Hey kinza.. Super happy to see u back with a new magical journey of our dearest MN. Okay so coming to the concept, i just can't believe how your concepts are somehow related to my life, even this one too! Maybe just a coincidence! Coming to the chapters, i loved how u penned down Nupur's nervousness and Mayank's attitude! Too awesome! Waiting to know how they will fall for each other! ;)

Update soon! Love ya! *hugs*

P.S.- Sorry dear for not posting a long comment as always. The reason is, i'm on a bed rest for a week cause of my illness. Yet i had to read ur story naa, that's why i'm here by my iPod! Will b back with detailed comments once i get well! :)

A huge huge congrats on your new FF🤗 I know that this will be as fabulous as your other ones are🤗 reading the first part I had guessed dark complexion and I was right im glad that you picked such a sensitive topic, being from Pakistan I know very well that girls with dark complexion are looked down upon on. so reading about such a topic from you is sone pe suhaga👍🏼 love nupur, mayank at the moment is a little confusing🤔 but I'm certain he doesn't have the same opinion about complexion as the rest of the society does.😛 love the concept of arranged marriage since I know I'll definitely be having one😆 hence it's nice to see their journey from stranger to soulmates👍🏼 she's marrying for her dad hes marrying for his mum shows how much both love their parents😃 ending was my fav part👍🏼
thanks for the pm🤗