MG HISTORICAL FF:MYTH-AWALK INTO THE PAST~epilogue - Page 50

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
they got married
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

hi

thnx for all the comments...

Maaneet got married and there is more to come...😳 😃

vl update asap...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the update! Amazingly written! Can't wait for the challenge!

Originally posted by: rsroopali

wowww awesomeee superbbb

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved the way both maan and geet adore their relationship, continue soon.

Originally posted by: priya.shilpa

awesome update...maan geet r married & also dey became one...too good...cont soon...precape is interesting...thanks 4 pm

Thnk u sooo much for all your comments 😃 😃

vl update asap...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukon

Awesome .. Hot .. Update yaar... it was wonderful .. can't wait to see what the challenge will be .. I know Maan will win .. Update soon dear . .. Loved it .. :D

thnx for the comments...😃

Will Maan win??? 😲

Find out in my nxt update...😉 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

they got married...n became one...😳☺️

that abhay...he is planning something...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...


they got married...n became one...😳☺️

that abhay...he is planning something...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thnk u so much for the comments 😃

vl be updatin soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnk u so much for all the appreciation...😃

Coming up with an update..sorry for any typo..i'm not proof readin it 😛


PART 19

Maan took Geet in his arms to her bedroom.Priyamvadah who had been waiting for Geet giggled as she saw them.Geet blushed and hid herself in his arms.Maan softly placed her on the bed.He kissed her forehead and tucked the spread on.He gracefully left her room.Abhay was hiding behind a pillar and he saw Maan leaving.Abhay entered Geet's bedroom.Priyamvadah stopped him.
Priya:nhe Yuvraj,is samay rajkumari ke kaksh me pravesh karne ka adhikar apko nhe he.
Abhay:tum keval ek dasi ho.Aur mujhe kya karna he aur kya nhe ye tum na batao to acha he..
Geet got up from her bed.
Geet: Abhayendra😡,Priya humari sakhi he aur unke sath ye vyavhar hum kabhi bardasht nhe karnege! Aur hum apsey puch rhe he,ap is waqt humare anthapura me kya kar rhe he?
Abhay: hum..(he takes an apple from the fruit bowl) is phal ke ras bhogna chahte he..bade dino khwaish he..ab rha nhe jata..

Geet lukd away sensing the vulgarity of his words.

As Abhay was goin to take a bite,he lukd at Geet..his eyes full of lust.Geet moved back.The apple was just an inch away from Abhay's mouth when a knife stuck at its centre.Abhay was petrified.Geet lukd at the source.Her eyes twinkled with pride and joy.She gasped and let out the name in each of her breath,'Maanavendra..'

Maan came and took the knife with the apple.His eyes had fire enough to burn Abhay😡...


Maan: Rajdharm ka langhan karna yuvraj ko shobha nhe deta Abhayendra.Ap jante he na rajkumari ke anthapur me pravesh karne se pehle humari anumati leni he aur rajparivar ka bhojan unsey pehle hume chakna he.Is phal ke swad pe humara adhikar he.

He took the first bite with a smirk.
Abhayendra: ek senapati ka jhuta khana hume manzur nhe! 😡

Geet:lekin hume yehi pasand he.
She took the apple from Maan and took the bite from the same place where his teeth marks were left.They both stood and lukd at Abhayendra.A disgusted Abhayendra left the room.

As Geet was about to move away,Maan held her hand.She turned to luk at him.Maan pulled her closer.
Maan: rajkumari ap baki phal hume nhe khilayengi.
Geet blushed and took the apple to his mouth.He took it from her.
Maan:ummhmm..aisey nhe
She blinked her eyes and lukd at him..reading his intentions...



He put the apple on her mouth and she took another bite.He leaned over her and took his bite from her lips and they continued eating apples...
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NEXT DAY:
The Udaipur Rajdurbar:
It was a vast ground.On one side the royal family sat on the balcony.The Raja Dharmchandra,rajguru,mantri,rajkumari Geetanjali,Abhayendara and Maanavendra.
The people were sitting at the gallery on the opposite side.They were separated by a large duel ground and its exit led to the gate of the fort.
As everyone was gathered,
Abhayendra: Maharaj,Sher Khan ne Rathore durbar me abhay prapt kar liya he.Sheegr hi dono sena humse yudh karnewale he.
DC: Jante he Abhayendra.Humari sena sarva roop se sajj he.
Abhay:lekin maharaj,yadi yudh me apke pran ko kuch hua to ye udaipur rajya anath ho jayega.Kya apko nhe lagta ki ab uttaradhikari ki ghoshna kar deni chahiye?
Everyone was surprised by his question.😲
DC: Isme ghoshna karne ki kya baat he?Humare baad is rajya ka adhikar humare santan ke hatho hogi.
Abhay:ap bhul rhe he maharaj apki keval ek putri he.Aur rajya ko sambhalne ke liye ek putr ka hona avashyak he.Yadi aisa nhe he,to rajkumari ke vivah ke bare me apko sochna chahiye.
DC: Humari putri har kala me nipun he.Hume unpar viswas he.
Abhay smirked.He got up from his seat and snatched Geet's anchal in a second.



Everybody was shocked😲.Geet covered her chest with her hands and her eyes filled up.Maan clenched his fist.His eyes were red due to rage😡.He took his sword and placed on Abhay's neck.


Maan:maharaj,apke palke jhapakne ka intezaar he hume😡.Usi kshan hum is neech ke sheersh rajkumari ke kadmo me daal denge.
Abhay: saza jo chahe de dijiye maharaj.Lekin ussey pehle humari baat suniye.

By this time, the people were shoutin to kill Abhayendra.
DC signalled everyone to calm down.
DC: Humari icha bhi kuch aur nhe Maanavendra lekin hum raja he aur har praja ka paksh sunna humara dharm he.Kaho Abhayendra.
Abhay: apne kaha apki putri rajyadhikar sambhalne me prapt he.Lekin achanak unpe vaar hua to wo pehle apne samman ki raksha karne ke liye soch rhe.Isliye unki ankho me asu he aur wo hatho se apne chathi ko dhak rahe he.Kya yehi he udaipur ke uttaradhikari ke lakshan?
Geet gave him a disgusted luk.
Abhay:isi liye ye avashyak he ki inke liye var chune aur usey uttaradhikari ghoshit kare.
DharmaChandra knew Abhay's intentions and he never wanted Geet to marry him.
DC: Lekin us var me bhi maharaja ke gun hona avashya he na.
Abhay:hum samajte he.Is baat ka bodhya bhi aj ho jayega. (to the guard) chaturashva rath(four-horse charriot) durbar me pesh kiya jaye.
The charriot came.Abhayendra took Geet's chunni to the charriot and tied it like a flag. Maan gritted his teeth.😡
Abhay:ye rath udaipur ki seema tak jayega.(lukin at Maan)Jo vyakti pehle jakar rajkumari ka uttariya leke ayega vahi unka var hoga.

Dharmachandra couldnt take it anymore.His daughter is being humiliated to the core.Geet took her hand crossing her chest and stood up with her head held high.
Geet: hume manzur he.Aur raja ke taraf is chunauti ka samna senapati Maanavendra karenge.

Abhay smirked.
Geet:aur yaad rakhna,yadi ap haar gaye to apki saza bhi hum sunayenge!
Abhay:manzur he.

And the charriot was set to the border of Udaipur...



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PRECAP: RACE: THE CROWD WAS SHOCKD TO SEE ABHAY LEADING WITH THE 'UTTARIYA'😲

HOPE U LIKE THIS. GIVE ME UR VALUABLE FEEDBACKS!
VL UPDATE NXT WEEK!

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awsm part...👏 i'm gonna kill Abhay... 😡 nxt wk??????????? 😳 plzzz updt sn... 😃 i'm dieing to read d nxt part...🤢 cnt w8 tl nxt wk...


updt sun or i vl irritate u by posting million of comments... 😛 i'm vry gud at irritating ppl😆

Edited by princess_mimi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ..
luved the part alot...
thanks for the pm ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey madhu 😊
really nice & awesome part .👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
ahhh😡😡😡😡😡
really ye abhya to bahut hi ghatiya insaan nikla yaar.😡
usne geet ki chunni khili wo bhi bhari sabha me😡
really & the way he said those cheap things to geet in directlly by apple wass really cheap.😡😡

but our sweet heart maan controled him every where.😳
sachi the way he sorted that apple one &😳
in rajya sabha also his reaction was really awesome 😳
& then again our never ending maaneet romance .😳
oh i really loved it thanx for so awesome update . 😳👏
love arushi

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