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Hey Everyone(:

I'm Anniie, I'm 16 years old. I love creative writing. I've never wrote a FF before and I've actually never wrote any piece just for the fun of it, all the writing I have done before has been for my English Language & Literature Course.

So this is the first time I'm doing this. I'm a beginner, no professional, so my work won't be up to the standards of other FF writers here. But all I can say is thaI enjoy doing this and I hope you guys will support me in this.

AR and Maaneet FF - *Love You Hamesha & Forever*


Index

Chapter 1 - The Past Remains The Same

Chapter 2 - The Past Catches Up

Chapter 3 - The Right Decision

Chapter 4 - The Meeting

Chapter 5 - I'll Never Give Up



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Plot

Maan, Geet, Rhiddhima & Armaan are best friends from college days. Friendship for them is everything. They believe without friendship & love in your life you cannot ever be happy. They were the best of friends and promised to stay together for life. However, a horrible incident left them all shattered. Maan & Geet went their own way after that incident, and Armaan and Rhiddhima separated and went their own ways. This FF concentrates on how their lives changed after that 'dark night'. It will concentrate on how trust is very important in friendship & love. The FF will start in the present, but will go back to their college days where Maaneet were a couple and AR were a couple. I will spend at least 10 Chapters in the past maybe even more. As their past is very important to their lives in the present. And oh the present will be 4 years after that 'incident'. They were all 22 when the incident happened.

Hope you guys like the idea.

Main Characters:

Rhiddhima.- Jennifer Winget


Known as Ridzy to her close friends. Young lively bubbly Rhiddhima loves competitions especially in her favourite sport - basketball. Undefeated but she refuses to play against Armaan ' the basketball champion of their college. Dancing is her passion. She has a different view of life compared to others. In her opinion you should always be thinking of your future and work constantly towards it - quite the opposite of Armaans view of life. She shares absolutely everything with her best friend and who is in fact her actual sister too, Geet. Well she is a half-sister of Geet but they love each more than real sisters do.

The present Rhiddhima likes being independent. A young Doctor - she loves her career a lot. She always wants to see people smiling, which is what she does she makes people smile. However, she is constantly hiding her pain from others and refuses to share her pain with anyone. She does not care for dancing anymore and she is not the lively bubbly Rhiddhima who used to live for herself only. But now she lives only for others, one person especially.


Armaan. - Karan Singh Grover


Armaan the guy all the girls are latoo over. He loves the attention he gets from girls as he knows this makes Rhiddhima jealous. He has a careless attitude and believes you should make the most of life, you should live every moment as your last. His favourite sport is the same as Rhiddhima - basketball. He leaves no stone unturned to annoy Rhiddhima. However he loves Rhiddhima a lot - she is his life. He never let's Rhiddhima know exactly how much she means to him, maybe if he had things might have been different today. However, the whole college know that these two are a couple.


Geet. - Drashti Dhami


Shy & quiet Geet can never see others hurt. Especially her sister Rhiddhima. Her friends mean the world to her. Geet is always the one that makes everyone make up after a argument. Her aim is to become a fashion designer. Geet is very innocent and is often told by Rhiddhima that she needs to harden up as when she steps out into the real world she won't be able to survive. However Maan promises to always protect Geet. Maan & Geet are known as the college's best couple.

She hasn't changed much in the present apart from that she rarely smiles anymore and is having constant nightmares.


Maan. - Gurmeet Choudary


Maan like Armaan has loads of girls after him however for him his love will always and only be Geet. Unlike Armaan he wants to make something out of his life. He wants to be independent and set up his own business. Maan is a very loving person, who rarely gets angry.

The present Maan however has changed. He has achieved what he wanted a business that has got him fame money and everything apart from happiness. After that incident him and Geet have never experienced happiness again. Now he is the hard and strict Maan Singh Khuranna. He believes no-one should be given a second chance. And most importantly he believes life is just about how high up you can go in earning money. Money is everything to him now.

Others.

Rhea - Diya Sonecha


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Chapter 1 - The Past Remains The Same

"Rhiddhimaaa-"She screamed.

She sat up and looked around, complete darkness. Exactly what she was afraid of, this darkness that had surrounded their lives after...after'she couldn't bring herself to repeat the incident. Somewhere a light was switched on, the shining bright light hit her delicate face. You could make out the features of her face now, her eyes were a dark brown with innocence reflecting in them. Every feature was defined. Her body was shaking out of fear. A hand reached out to touch her face, unknowingly it comforted and calmed her.

"Geet" The comforting voice called out.

Geet let a sigh of relief out. She was safe. She rested her head on the figure's chest.

"Maan" She called out. This was Maan Singh Khuranna, owner of Khuranna Industries. He is the loving husband of Geet. Geet is his life and whom he cannot live a day without.

"Maan, I saw it all over again. I can feel it Maan. Something's wrong, I need to go to Ridzy, I need to find her and warn her-"

"Geet" Maan forced Geet to lie back down on the bed. "Calm down Geet, just relax" He stroked her hair.

"How can I? Maan she's in danger, I want to talk to her now please" There was desperateness in Geet's voice.

"Geet, you perfectly know that if it was in my hands I would take you to meet Rhiddhima right now, but if we have no idea where she is, then how can you meet her?"

"Please Maan, we can look for her, she needs me-"

Maan cut her off "Geet why don't you understand Rhiddhima is happy wherever she is. It was just a bad dream."

"I want Ridzy back, I want her now, please" Geet pleaded.

"Geet go to sleep, we can talk about this in the morning, now shhh" Maan placed his finger on his lips to indicate to Geet to be quiet. He kept stroking her hair till she had finally fallen asleep.

He pulled the blanket over Geet, and gave her a light kiss on her forehead. He got up but was pulled back by something. He looked back to see Geet holding his hand, a smile came upon his face. He slowly released his hand from Geet's.

Maan walked over to the window, the moon was shining bright in the dark sky. The wind was blowing hard, it seemed as if a storm was on the way. 'It was a night like this exactly when it happened' He thought to himself. "Geet when will you understand? That nothing will ever be the same again. After that dark horrible night nothing can ever be the same again" He muttered to himself, whilst looking at the stars that were shining down at him. He slowly pulled the window shut as not to make a noise that might awaken Geet. He went back to the bed and laid next to Geet. He stared at her innocent and beautiful face for a while. Before he knew it he was asleep too.

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On the other side of the world, in London the sun was starting to set.

"Mummmyyy!" A young girl called out. She ran up to the woman standing at the gates of the Nursery. The woman knelt down till she was the same height as the little girl. She put her arms around the small girl, and gave her a kiss on her soft, rosy cheek.

"Rhea my princess, I am so sorry. I got held up in an emergency. You know na Mamma is very busy these days. I promise baby it won't happen again." She gave the little girl a smile.

Rhea crossed her arms and turned around so that her back was facing the woman.

"Hmmm princess is angry with bad Mummy na? How about if Mummy got Rhea some Ice-Cream? Would princess still be angry?" The woman let a little laugh out. She pushed her soft hair away from her face, the wind kept throwing her hair back in her face and covering the beautiful features of her face. Everything about this woman made you want to keep staring at her, as if she was a magnet and you were constantly forced to stare at her.

Rhea turned to face her Mum. "Can I have strawberry flavour and chocolate and vanilla and-"

"Yes baby you can have every flavour you want" She took Rhea's hand and they started walking back down the road.

"Mummy I love you lots" She turned to look at the woman who's eyes were brimming with tears now.

"I know Princess. Mummy loves you lots too, your Mummy's life" She wiped the tears that had now started coming out of her eyes. "Now come on let's go before the Ice-Cream Parlour closes and then we'll get no Ice-Cream if that happens."

They both disappeared round the corner of the road.

The sun was half way setting now; you could just about see its orange glow. The streetlights were starting to switch on and traffic was starting to increase as people were starting to make their way back from work. This was the usual atmosphere of London on Monday nights.

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Precap:

'Rhiddhima, till when will you keep pretending that everything is alright, when it's clearly not?'

Okaii and that's the end of Chapter 1. I know it was kind of short but I didn't want to give too much away in the first chapter. So guys feedback? Critcism? 😳

Please press the 'LIKE' button & do give comments, it'll motivate me to write more.

And the main question is; should I continue?😳


Edited by ..Angel.. - 14 years ago
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Reserved!

EDITED!

OOO I LOVEE THE TITLEE <3
OF COURSE YOU HAVE TO CONTINUEE!
LOVEEDD THE PAART. HHMM
DEIN TO KNOWW WHAATT THE INCIDENT WASS CO'Z IT HAS CHANGED THEE GANG SOO MUCCH.
GEET +&& MAAN. THEEYY ARE LUCKKYY THEY ARE NOT SPLIT UP.
AWWW JUSSTT LOVEE THEEMM <3
ANDD DA SCENE BETWEEN RHEA +&& THE WOMAN.
DUNNOO WHYY BUT IT MAKES ME FEEL ITS RIDDHIMA.
TOO MUCH MYSTERYYY.
WAANNNA KNOWW. CURIOUSS <3
CHAMMK CHALLO <3 I LOVE YOU BABE. THIS FF HAS GOT ME HOOKED.
YOU WRITE AMAZINGLY.
I ALREADYY MISS MY AMMY =[
UPDATEE SOONN <3
HATSS OFF x x x

Edited by -RabiaKSGKaJen- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congo on ur First FF Annie!!!
Luvd the concept
Part 1 is awesome,,,oooh Wonder hu'z daughter is she!!😉😛
quickly post part 2 now hehe
Wanna know more about the past!!
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res *edited
hey
nice title first of all😊
the beginning itself has got me hooked...😃
dying to know what happened that night which caused so many probs...atleast maneet have each other...
but AR😭
I guess Rhea's mom is Riddhima...there scene was too cute but where is Armaan
already missing him
great start...cont soon
Edited by trouble_006 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res res res!
*edited - Annnieee! Firstly, I am so proud of youu! Your FFs will be much, much better than mine, I know it! 🤗
I'll always be here for you throughout your FF, I know everyone is going to fall in love with this fanfic.

I am so intrigued to find out more about the dark night!
Where's Armaan?
Are Maaneet together, because when Maan said 'nothing can be the same' it feels like they're not...
Ooh so many questions!
The first chapter was amazing, sooo many mysteries!
I can't wait to read chapter 2 now, update sooon!
I love youu loads!
Edited by walkintomylifex - 14 years ago
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congrats for ff...

interesting concept..

looking forward for next part..

add me..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for your first FF
loved d post n looking forward for d 2nd part
thnx for such an awesome pm👍🏼
Edited by shreya.12 - 14 years ago

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