MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 43

this was best of all you have written so far really....i mean you left me

inters with the last part...

awsum work..keep it up!!👍🏼

you really made me Hate mayank for the first time...

do write more soon...i am waiting....

NO! I seriously can't believe this! Oh gosh, this was so unexpected and so painful! Never even in my dream I had thought that this would have such an end!

OH MY GOD! That letter was so painful, and everything that happened, since I read it from prt 6, so for me it was like I was watching a beautfiul magical movie and it just ended like a tragedy.

Gosh, Mehak 🤗 Sweety, this is your best story yet, because I can understand how difficult it must be for you to write this! This was such a beautfiully heart wrenching story! And I salute you for writing this one because touching someone's heart enough to make them cry is really tough, and you did it! Hat''s off to you jaani! Love ya loads <333

And I'll always remember this story, forever!

bt asa end i hv nvr imagined yaar...

m cryinggg 😭😭

i nvr thought u will kill mayank

i know wht he did he can nvr be forgiven bt i nvr thought u will kill him...😭

coz i can nvr imagine my MAYANK to be bad like dis evr...

bt after all it was a nice ff ya

hw cud u can write so well...👏

i mostly loved ur """D UNEXPECTED MAGIC""

its my fav ff i hv evr read...😆

n ya for a change in dis ff u didn't make Nupur calling Mayank ""AAP"" n all coz in ur almost every ff nupur called mayank """aap""😉

bt i loved it lodsss

u r jst brilliant...👍🏼