New one shot *ONE LAST TIME* An Apology..Pg 4!!!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please Ashima ,it's not fair that u are feeding us breadcrumbs .WE need the whole cake. Please continue. I'm waiting. Very true to our beloved pair's natures. Good job!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Ashima, just read both parts...loved it, please continue soon!! Hope your feeling better now 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi davi glad u lykd the update next part asap hope u keep reading and enjoying it dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi shamma glad u lykd the update next part asap hope u keep reading and enjoying it dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey aviva i am little better now thanks and hey bread crumbs and cake lol nice analogy! Next part asap hope u enjoy the cake dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its evening and a scene in kapoor mansion..everyone was elated to knw that ram and priya had decided to meet! And each one of them had come to ram individually not only to tell how happy they were but also..to request..and plead to say a yes..instruct to control his temper and warn to not end up in an argument!..😆😉

RAM WAS GETTING READY to go to the restaurant and with his patience already giving way..and neha going on and on with her Lecture..forces ram to speak up at last- ok neha enough! Yeh kya hai? Subah se..sab logg mujhe kuch na kuch..kuch na kuch sikha rahe hain..kya?..am i Mad?!🤣..pagal samjha hai tum sabne mujhe!..i dont fight with her on purpose! ITS..its just that she manages to get on my nerves everytime we meet! Aur iss baar i wont let that happen bola na mainey..ab chalein?..😛

😉SATISFIED NEHA SMILES AND nods her head..since neha hadnt met priya at all..she insisted on going with ram..and also vikram knew it would be better that the two shouldnt be left alone!..although he knew that they didnt back off fighting in front of a huge gathering..still they had to take some chance and preventive measure! 😆

RAM AND NEHA REACH THE RESTAURANT AND sit waiting for priya to come..and seeing a nervous ram neha couldnt help but smile seeing which ram says-hass ley neha koi baat nahin..😛

NEHA REPLIES-dekh rahi hoon..ki how can someone make this Alwaxs Confident Business tycoon Nervous?!..RAM SAYS-Oh please..she doesnt make me nervous..her attitude is what angers me! 😆

BEFORE THEY can talk any further ram sees priya walk into the hotel and falls silent...noticing ram quiet neha turns around and smiles seein priya walk upto them dressed in a pair nf blue denims and blue kurti..⭐️

Neha gets up to greet priya saying-hi priya..PRIYA SHAKES hands with her and glances at ram as she didnt knw who it was..neha smiles at the way priya looked at ram and says-i knw tum mujhe nahin jaanti..main ram ki dost aur vikram ki wife..😊

WITH A BROAD SMILE 😃priya greets neha and walking out after making priya facing ram neha says-tum dono baatein karo main abhi aayi..EXCUSING HERSELF neha leaves raya to talk and goes to place order for them..THERE RAM AND PRIYA remain silent and not knowing where to start the two keep thinking of finding the right words!..😛

THE TWO LOOK UP AT EACH OTHER TOGETHER as ram says-actually..AND priya speaks-woh main..at the same time and Fall silent..balh tune plays in bg as the two smiled asking each other to speak up first..and ram says at last-priya..to be honest..i dont knw why par humesha tumhara attitude irritate karta hai aur main apne gussey ko kaboo nahi kar paata..so..(priya is about to fireback at him telling how much his silly compulsions drove her crazy but ram interrupts saying)..let me finish first plz..(balh soft tune plays in bg as priya falls silent as ram goes on)..so before we start i want to apologise for behaviour..i am sorry priya..😍

NOT EXPECTING THIS AT ALL..TAKEN Aback..priya stares at ram as he just looks back at her innocently...☺️


PRECAP-RAM and neha get up to leave and soo does priya..as neha hugs priya saying-it was a pleasure meeting u..waise..tumne mera naam toh poocha nahin..(priya is about to ask as she says)..i am neha..LISTENING TO WHICH PRIYA's smile vanishes as she recalls the man she met outside the hotel addressing to a Neha!😲
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read all the parts in one go... its awesome... luved the flow of the story and the way it is proceeding... updt sooon... do PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyy!! Loved it...they had a meeting where they listened to each other and Priya finds out about Neha!! 👏 👏 Can't wait for the next part now!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ashima...kaha gayab hogaye yaar??? 😕 😳

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