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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
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awesooome spoiler...
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Originally posted by: mayadika11
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PART 5 :-

vikey watched sadley as maan & geet made their way upstairs, he so much want to change everything ,,,,,,,, he smiled sadly at his condition , he truly is getting punished.
but he can't let anybody come between maan & geet
... not even himself

he came out from his thoughts when he heard naintara saying ...

NT-so vikey r u still going to ur honeymoon ...

mukti felt like killing her good for nothing sister ,but she relaxed when she heard vikey saying ...

VIKEY- oh why not sure, afterall how can i break ur nd dev bhai's heart

though mukti knw hw vikey must hv felt at that time but they can't change anything now ...

anni really felt petty at vikey though she know he was also at the fault, but she was more concerned about geet ...

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in maneets room

geet silently followed maan upstairs ignoring all the wild thoughts running in her mind , she can't process the whole drama happenenig there . Though she can never doubt maan's intention but why this bussiness trip suddenly ...

while going through the whole disscision the same word of doctors running in maans mind ''' Mr. khurrana u hv to keep ur wife out of tension , as it can b dangerous for her present state of mind ,,,,,,,,,,, but his overely dramatic family they always love to create problms in his life ... so, he hv to plan this bussiness trip .. but how to convince geet ?

both maan & geet stood silently how to start the conversation ,

MAAN- oh , let us peck our luggage

GEET- r v really going

MAAN- (smiling) any doubt ?

GEET- no, but

MAAN- but what princess ...

GEET- is it necessary 4 me to go ...

( maan wondering was this a joke ...)

MAAN- why ? r u afraid to go with me (inching towards her )

GEET- its not like that ...

MAAN- so u r not afraid & than what is it than princess...

GEET- what 'll i do their ? u'll b as usual busy in ur work

MAAN- is that so ...
(thinking) so what about handling my work to someone else for 15 days

GEET- that 'll b not right , u'll b with me after work na so i'll manege myself ...

MAAN(thinking)- i hv to let u open on ur own , i can't take risk specially in ur case )

MAAN- so shell v start our packing

GEET- nodded

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DOWNSTAIRS

vikey grabbed muktis hand & walked off after giving an angry glare to nt & dev , though they hv given a painfull blow of present to him but he can't deny that it was a wonderfull idea for her plan to succede ...

mukti was still wondering what is happening around ,

when they neared maan's room mukti felt vikeys grip loosed on her hand , she followed his gaze & watched maan & geet talking peacefully with each other , beside an unusual pain their was a setisfection on vikeys face , geet was slowly becoming normal thanx to maan jiju...

vikey watched geet smiling slightly , it was a bliss to watch her smiling again,,,,, ...AGAIN ...
again word peirced his very soul b'coz he himself was the reason for the clouding of her eyes earlier ,but not this time & he will make sure for that ...

while griping mukti's hand tightly vikey asked her to follow him ...

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Maneet was busy in the packing, when geet remembered somthing ...

GEET- maan

MAAN- hhhmm

GEET - i hv to go meet my papa g

MAAN- (still packing) ok , whatever u say

GEET- but... mama& brig veer g will not let me ...

MAAN- they can't do any thing ...

GEET- but they never let me meet him from 1 month ...

MAAN- that was different as i was not their , but they can't stop u know ?

GEET(teary) - how?

MAAN- coz they can stop geet handa but not Mrs. geet maan singh khurrana ...

GEET(smiling) - u'll take me their

MAAN- anythng 4 my barbi

GEET- thank you

MAAN(smiling inwardly)- i don't need ur thank u ?

GEET(confused)

MAAN- i needed one cup coffee ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, with ur smile

GEET(smiling) - ok i'll bring it here

thats when she bumped with vikey and mukti coming inside their room

so guyz tell me how was it , plz comment & press the like button if u liked it ...

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