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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update, cant wait to read what happens next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahem believing Rashi more than Gopi...typical!
Kamna making him aware of his priorities.
Looking forward to the Ahem hugging Gopi next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I read the story again ... it was very good, it was tipical ahem , alway believeing everyone else , get mad and taking his anger out on gopi. Thank god for Di , talking to ahem first and letting him know what really happened...I wish we had some one like that in the show... Loved the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a great update...am so eager to know what happens next and how GoHem reciprocate each other...
Please update soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok here is a part that you will surely like. I was blushing all the way through writing this. Thanks again for the lovely comments. I do read read all of them. Thanks to everyone again and again. I am feeling very colourful today even though its not Holi but I want to make you all feel colourful too so enjoy.
Part 7

Ahem had a long walk to his room. He was recalling everything that Kamna had said to him about the recent happenings. He was brewing with all types of emotions which were making him go insane. He was speaking to himself "Gopi was pestered by some boys and that while he was not present. Gopi, my gopi.. how can that be? If I see those boys I will kill them. I couldn't even protect her and she looks up to me for protection...oh man who cares I was not her I will go to the police station and kill them today... and Rashi, she lied. How could she lie? I thought she was Gopi's sister, how could she lie about her own sister."

All these questions had diverted Ahem's mind to another realm that he didn't realize that he had opened the door to his bedroom. Suddenly he saw a naked figure on the bed and which caught his attention. He became aware of his surroundings and looked around the room. He looked back at the door to see if he had entered the right room or not. Everything was fine. Everything from the colour of the room to the decoration to the curtains was of his taste. He had entered the right room but the figure sleeping on the bed was not making any sense to him. He slowly came near the bed and saw gopi still sleeping. He thought to himself "Why is she sleeping naked in bed?" He could see her whole back which had caught his attention that he didn't realize that he was reaching out to touch her back. It looked so smooth and so attractive that just by looking at it Ahem couldn't control himself. Something was happening inside of him.

Never in his life had he expected to see Gopi in this position. He came closer to gopi and sat on the bed and started to reach for Gopi's arm when she stirred and turned her position over. Ahem freaked out for a moment thinking that he was going to see her naked front. What he saw was something else. Gopi was wearing a green satin nightgown that was completely backless.

(I was imagining something green and found this).
She was looking so attractive and different plus it was Ahem's favourite colour that was making her look more radiant. Her hair looked different as if it was cut with layers. Ahem couldn't take him eyes off his sleeping wife she was too good to be true. It was like as if he was dreaming. Suddenly gopi opened her eyes and looked straight at Ahem who was now scared that he is caught

Gopi: Ahemji, again you are in my dream..

Ahem: kya?

Gopi (got up halfway): Ahemji what is this? Why are you in my dream again? Didn't I tell you I have to do a lot of work and Kamna ben's shaadi is coming up soon still you are pestering me in my dreams.

Ahem just looked at her totally confused. He thought to himself "She was dreaming about me".

Gopi: Ahemji, how many times do I have to tell you that I have to get up early every day and help Kamna ben. Still you come and don't let me get up.

Ahem was now really confused and looking at her like "is she nuts, maybe she had another bhang ka laadu", then he realized that Gopi thought she was still asleep dreaming.

Gopi: You know Ahemji you are really confusing me these days. Ever since I came to Delhi I only dream about you and you just show me too much love. In reality Ahemji I wish you were like this. In reality you don't even say a word of love to me; all you do is yell at me, tell me to leave the room and get annoyed with me. But I don't know how to please you. You are so unpredictable sometimes that it scares me to death. Yet I still do everything just to make to happy, just to make you smile.

Ahem was now starting to feel a little guilty for not telling Gopi that he was really there sitting in front of her. Yet he was feeling more guilty for listening to her personal thoughts like this. When suddenly Gopi put her arms around his neck

Gopi: You know Ahemji that day when those boys came into the house. I was so scared. They tried to touch me, they were trying to pull at my clothes. I..I..

Gopi puts her head on Ahem's chest and holds him tight. Ahem was now shocked at her gesture.

Gopi:...I was really scared Ahemji. I really wish you were here that day. I fought them off as much as I could. I said to myself that no man can touch me accept for my Ahemji. (sobbing now) If Kaka and Jiju did not come in time I don't know What would have happened. (Ahem now puts his arms around Gopi to give her some comfort) Ahemji I would have killed myself with they had done anything to me. I couldn't bare to face you if anything had happened. Kahnaji protected me and kept my purity only for you Ahemji.

Ahem: sssh! Its ok. We can talk about this later.

Gopi (sobbing): Ahemji, you don't know what I went through that night. I couldn't sleep. I was crying all night long. I was scared to death. Kamna ben was trying to calm me down but I really wanted you. When she called you so I could talk to you, you completely ignored me. Ahemji your meeting was more important to you than me.

Ahem was recalling to the day after the incident when he was at work with some clients. Kamna had called and said Gopi wanted to talk. He couldn't say no to his di so when Gopi got to the phone, he said he was in an important meeting and he will talk to her later. But he never called back. He realized now that she needed comfort very badly.

Ahem: I'm sorry. I should have talked' listen you'

Kamna: Ahem..Gopi you two are still haven't got ready.

Gopi got her head up from Ahem's chest and looked towards the door to where Kamna was standing. Ahem turned his head also in that direction. Kamna was standing in the doorway holding Ahem's luggage.

Kamna: Well if you two are done romancing each other, you need to come down for breakfast. Gopi we have a long day ahead so get ready fast. Ahem you too because I need you to run an errand for me so chop chop.

Ahem: Ji Di. We will hurry.

Kamna: Oh by the way you left your luggage downstairs so I brought it up. See you two downstairs.

Ahem: Ok di.

Kamna left and Ahem turned and looked back at Gopi who looked confused. He knew he had to let go of her before she jumped. Gopi was having a hard time putting the words in her mouth. She was confused no if she was dreaming or in reality. She thought she was dreaming then she looked at Ahem who had removed his arms by now.

Gopi: Ahemji?...

Ahem: Yes Gopi..

Gopi: Are you really here in Delhi?

Ahem: Yes I arrived this morning and ...

Gopi removed her arms really fast from Ahem's neck and started to cover herself with her robe and the blanket and Ahem was watching her doing all this so fast. She still didn't feel that she covered herself and stood up. Ahem then had a good glimpse of the nightgown she was wearing before she jumped and ran off to the washroom.

Ahem (himself): I think she is back to reality. Too bad I won't see her like this again.

Gopi on the other hand had almost collapsed in the washroom thinking Ahem had seen her like this. She blushed at the thought but also got scared as to how much of her thoughts she had revealed to Ahem.

Have you started blushing yet?
Edited by samiya315 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Really nice chapter, it was nice to see Ahem feeling guilty for what he did
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
The Gohem hug was all too dreamy.
Gopi has spoken her heart out. Ahem was mersmerised but the whole moment.
Now waiting for Ahem to respond to all this.
Pretty green satin nightdress!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
I feel like I am back in high school, when you are with all you friends, and the cutest guy in school looks at you, and only you ... your chapter was incredible. I hope you can top this chapter, because on a scale of 1 to 10 it was 11. good luck topping it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

this is sooo sooo wonderful...



wish we can see this in the serial..we all will be in la la land🤣😳

pls update sooon...really love the story..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
wow! Aham got shocked to see gopi talk so intimately with him...and gopi got shocked to know that he is in here with her in reality...great part...p.s. I loved the night gown

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