LOVE HUA-Fan Fic-A LOVE STORY(udt pg 27!)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys,

I am thinking of starting a fan fic.

I am sorry guys but i was thinking of concentrating on only Kunal and Nimmo's developing love and not all the side issues like Kunal and his mom or swati and naina's life. Pls read this and comment if i should continue. One thing i can garantee is that it is gonna be very romantic😳

This will start after nearly 4 months after Nimmo's and Kunal's marriage. here's how it starts:

It has been 4 months since the marriage. Nimmo and Kunal are getting used to each other but are not in love yet. One day:

Kunal: Yeh char mahine kaise guzar gaye pata hi nahi chala.
Nimmo: Sach me.
K: Once koi tumhari bak bak se aur tumhari todne phodne ki adat se used to ho jaye na, to you are not so hard to live with😆
N: Tane marna band karo aur apna kam karo 🤢

KK enters

KK: Sir apko aur madam ko dadaji bula rahe hai
K: Iss waqt dadaji ko kya kam ho sakta hai, vo bhi mujse aur nimmo se?
N: Yeh to vaha jane ke bad hi pata chale ga na
K: ha, chalo

they enter the living room where Dadaji, dadi, shraddha(kunal's mom) and a few others have assembled.

K: Kya baat hai dadaji, aape hame bulaya? Koi zaroori kam hai kya?
Dadaji: Haan Kunal puttar, mujhe tumse aur nimmo se ek zaroori kaam hai.
K: Ji kahiya dadaji?
D: Dekho kunal beta maine tumse tundono ke honeymoon ki baat pehle bhi ki thi par tumne usse tal diya tha par ab me tum dono ki ek bhi nahi sunuga. tum dono ki shaadi ko char mahine hone ko aaye hai aur me chahta hoon ke tum dono jaldi honeymoon pe jao.
Kunal and Nimmo: Par dadaji
D: Par var kuch nahi. yeh mera hukum hai
K and N: Ji dadaji
D: Maine ticket book karvali hai, do din ke baad tumhari switzerland ki flight hai. to jao aur packing kar do.
K and N: Ji 😳

Kunal and Nimmo go to their room and talk

N: as if shaadi was not so bad, ab honeymoon pe bhi jao😆
K: Tumhe kya lagta hai me yeh sunkar khushi se jhoom raha hu? Tumse zyada upset to me hu. sab party aur friends ko yaha chood ke tumko switzerland dikhana padega. 😆
N: Mujhe switzerland dikhane me koi interest nahi hai. mai hotel me bethi rahoogi. Ab bed par se utho mujhe sona hai.
K: Ek to kamra share karo uper se maharani ko bed pe sona hai aur mujhe mere kamre me mere hi bed parse uthne ke liya kaha jata hai. aur sofe pe sona padta hai.😆
N: Bacche ki tarah complain karna band karo aur sone do

after whining a little more, they fall asleep

Precap: Pam chachi enters Kunal's and Nimmo's room early the next day and sees that there are pillows and sheets on the sofa and suspects something fishy in Kunal and Nimmo's marriage

Please post ur comments and tell me if u think i should continue😊

Naina

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue..i cant tolerate the suspense
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats was great 👏 👏 👏
plz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 do continue 👏 ..its nice tht ur writing abt kunu n nimmo's luv story 😃
do continue it. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job 👏 👏 👏 .
continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please count soon. its fab 😉 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u for the compliments 😳
i'll post the second part soon 😊

Naina
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great wrk naina, plz continue 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow naina 😃 ..kool fanfic 👏 👏 👏..plzzz do continue 😉 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hr8 fan fic
plz plz
count soon 😛

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