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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1001

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1002

hey akansha...

finally u updated!...

hw were ur exams n ur result?

anyways... lovely update!...

really love the way mayank fights with his conscience...

n loved nupur's part...

do update asap...

n plzzz update a longer part!...

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1003

awesome update..

continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1004

nice update...but wanted more...

continue soon.

thanks for the PM

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1005

In the last update, Nupur was mad at Mayank na? I guess so
It was because she thought he asked Samrat about her past, poor guy! He didnt!
So I had expected Nupur to get angry and then Mayank will manaofy her, I guess by taking up the challenge, Kiss her! 😆 😆 😆😳
But I guess will have to wait...

That was really fabulous update!
'If we were to compare Mayank, I am the only thing that's actually male in you.

Thats damn hilarious 🤣

Ok
take care :)
I hope I'll be here again :)

Love you 🤗

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1006

As usual...FANTASTIC part akki, 👏
looovved it...
waiting for the next part...plz update soon..
and plzzz update your FF- I WED THEE,
it's my favorite..

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1007

wonderful update akansha..loving the transformation of mayur's relationship...so the progress is on its way...cant wait 4 the moment nupur comes out of her shell permanently...continue soon,also i m waiting 4 WOWU to b updated...😊

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#1008

Hellooo Akkii 🤗

This is brilliant. I loved the Mayank-Conscience bickering part. 😆 It was so cute & hilarious. And the emoticons in the middle made it better. 🤣

I loved Nupur's part the most though. It was so beautiful & touching. I loved reading it. My fave line is this-

I loved him because he was the only one who loved me back.

Such a simple line, yet it touches your soul, straight away. 👏

You are an amazing writer Akki, and I want to read more & more from you. Call me greedy if you want. 🤣

Love ya loads 🤗 🤗

Nidz :)

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1009

A great chap...but why sooo short?? :( :(

The convo between Mayank and his conscience...lols...hilarious as usual...

Loved the "convo" between Samrat and Mayank...if it can be called that...hehe...but i feel now Samrat will help sort things out between them...:)

Hopefully we see a reunion soon and the past revealed...plz dont make us wait for too long for another update :) :)

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1010

Wow, you updated AYNIL too?

RESERVE.

Will update by tonight.

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Ha! I couldnt keep up with my jet lag yesterday. Actually I read the Mayank part completely before sleeping. But I didnt want to write a lousy comment. So I waited for tonight to read it again. 😃

It was short update. But I didnt expect it it to be this small update. It wasnt even 6 pages Word norm. 😆

Yeah! But as they say, quality over quantity! And man! It was so good to read to the AYNIL update after ages. I mean seriously! I was missing this rockstar Mayank conscience for months. He is the USP of this FF. He is Mayank's best critic. He is sarcastic, he is arrogant, he is disrespectful of Mayank... but he is much needed part of soft hearted sappy Mayank's mind. And you successfully continued to have that USP in this update. Why were you calling this a crap? You have no idea that it takes lot of talent to write good humour and you are really good at it dear. So stop cribbing for God's sake! And continue writing this FF.

My favorite part of the update was Mayank's conscience talk...

You know you should wipe that shitty grin off your face or else forget nice, people would think you aren't a guy in the first place.

This what I'm talking about. The sarcastically hilarious Mr.Conscience Sharma!⭐️

If we were to compare Mayank, I am the only thing that's actually male in you. So, it would be safer if we didn't go there.

I really enjoyed the update. Way to go Sweetu. It was the perfect AYNIL update. Except that it was short 🤔... but I ignore the length for the fact that you were having writer's block. But now that you have sorted out the things, I'm looking forward to Nupur's part of the story. And then to Mayank's success in winning the bet...😉 And then some more MN kisses...😆

Continue soon 👍🏼

Love you! 🤗

Edited by ButterflyEffect - 14 years ago