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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#971

gosh its been ages akansha...😔when wil the shubh day take place when i wil get to read ur update...

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#972

super mayur n sanu wonderful mmnts ke saath

ab amazing sayank mmnts can come too .

n wat is nupurs past .

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#973

hello Aki
waiitng for ur update
so plz try to update soon

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#974

heyya akansha...

well somewhere u mentioned u are on a writing spree...and i am on a reading spree...

i have read ur "I WED THEE"...next i have read this...

they are just awesome...

would love it if u continue soon...

but its ok will wait for u to update...

but whenever u update please PM me

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#975

update plzzz w8ing fr it

want to read :)

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#976

@ Valiyah, Ginny, Palz, Faria and everyone who's waiting.

Update today. Promise.!

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#977

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#978

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#979

Um, and reserve whatever too.

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Edited:

You know, A? I do not like to make reserves. So to speak, I am kind of useless when I have to edit them, altogether. Anyhow, I read it again. And here is my official two cent business.

First, you have to learn not to be sorry about what you write. Technically, you are not sorry. For, we discussed the parts you like in here last night. Eventually, you can get prone to a devastating syndrome of despising your skill, and not merely underestimating yourself. So, why don't you just get a life?

Mayank is a cracker and Mayank is a cracker. As I told you, I did skip the Amitabh Bacchan part which I requested you to scratch. Besides that, there was absolutely nothing that did not give me the AYNIL feel, so way to go, beta.

By the way, 'If we were to compare Mayank, I am the only thing that's actually male in you. So, it would be safer if we didn't go there.' is devastatingly hilarious. Mayank needs to man up, big time. We dun owe anything yet to his conscience's gallant, though.

And 'Man, this guy was disrespectful, impertinent and all the other synonyms.' is an innovation punch to deliver when you endeavor to cover up your scratchy vocabulary. And nothing shall be spoken further in light of who's vocabulary this may concern. Perhaps, you've got this style of penning down things, reminiscent of the way we folks talk in real. Yours have a realistic approach, even if you etch typical stories out. I appreciate it, wholesomely.

Apart from Mayank, even Samrat needs some insight. His wrap-up line launches so much chauvinism. Heck, it is not the man exclusively, women lurve alcohol too, personally. Ha! Samrat is the shielding jock in here, like a brother who does love Nupur back whilst her false belief in only Mayank's reciprocal of her feeling. It is sad, not her condition but principally, you, and that you haven't set things right with Nupur yet. You strongly need to get a life.

Enough said, give it the benefit of doubt, or try to find my harsh comments on you motivating, and figure out that you're really well at this. Doesn't mean you dun need to get a life, though. 😃

P.S. I will make the banner soon, by the way. =)

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#980

Akkiii...🤗..so finaly u updated...*same pinch coz i did too...after trying lot not to update..😆

i can c u r still not sure abt Nupur's part...her part was even shrter than samrat's😲 chalo koi baat nehi..😃...i m sure once u start thinking abt ot u wil figure it out how to write her!!!! i m just too happy that u updated finally!!!!!

mayank & sam.he he its good to c sam making the effort to make things right between them...& u actually showed the awkwardness between them perfectly!!!!!! i think it was very cute!!!!!!

& yeah even though its been long.mayank & his coinscience fighting still has the same effect on me...yeah it makes me grin like this😃 this cracked me up biiig time-🤣
If we were to compare Mayank, I am the only thing that's actually male in you.

all in all liked this update though there was no hint where the hell is this story going.😆.but u know how much i love ur writting..so its ok for me just to read ur updates as long as u r updating it!!!!!! 😳
keep it up gal 👍🏼& love ya..🤗..