pyaar ka naam na lena (ss) part 12 pg 113 updated

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prologue

"Tumhe ek baath kithne baar bolna padtha hey...aur tumhare himmat kaise hui phir se mere saamne aane keliye...tumhare jaise log sirf attraction pana chahthey hey...now get lost from my sight" shouted maan looking at geet...

Geet kept looking at maan's lips trying to interpret what he actually saying...when maan saw geet looking at him he became more furious...

'dekho mein ithni baath suna raha hu isse...yeh abhi bhi mujhe aise dekh raha hey...sharam naam ki cheez hey ya nahi tujme...maan spatted out in anger...

His talking speed was so fast that geet was unable to get what he was actually talking...looking at other people she could understand that he is shouting at her...she felt hurt...tears welled up in her eyes...she lowered her head crying...

" lo..ab aakhri weapon bhi use karna shuru kiya...i can't take it anymore...adi get her out of my office right now"

" maan..why are u wasting your time on such loosers...chalo we will go outside and have our lunch" said sameera plcing her hand on maan's shoulders...

"haan sameera..iss type ke ladkiyon keliye kyu mein time waste kar raha hu...chalo chalthe..."

he then walked out along with sameera...sameera while leaving gave a disgusting look to geet...

Maan again turned back and came near geet...

"look...agar dubara iss office mein kadam rakha tho...mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..."said these words maan went outside along with sameera...

Whole office staff was watching the tamasha...geet didnot know whta actually happened and why maan was shouting at her...only she could see the people around her giving disgusting looks...but cannot hear ...because she is deaf...which maan is unaware of...

Adi came near geet...he called her may times..but she didn't respond...he thought she was in shock...Adi slightly patted her on shoulders...she immediately looked at adi with teary eyes...she looked at his lips carefully to know what he is talking..

"tum yaha se chale jao ...warna maan sir mujhe daantenge" said adi in a low voice...geet nodded...she took her bag and moved towards exit...not knowing what to do...


to be continued...


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Index


prologue - page 1


part 1- page 9


part 2- page 16


part 3- page 23


part 4- page 33



part 6- page 57


part 7- page 62


part 8- page 71


part 9- page 82


part 10- page 93


part 11- page 104


part 11- page 113

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo congo
new SS
interesting concept
& different
do cont soonnn
wow geet deaf
cant wait to read first part
Edited by sharmake11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome concept!!! Plz continue soon and pm me plz!!
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wow..intresting.
geet is deaf..poor geet.
hate the way maan shout at her,
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept...
poor geet she is deaf!!!!
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ur stories are much much better than the present track of GHSP!!!!
I Miss the old passion very back hoppefuly i get dat depth in our story😭😭

Edited by -Crayon- - 11 years ago
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Superb concept... Loved it
Do continue
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wow nice concept.. geet is deaf... hmmm sounds interesting.. plzz add me onto ur pm list..
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Interesting ...con soon ...

Btw Congo ...new SS.

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