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Posted: 19 years ago
it was awesome part i like kripa being stubborn
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Posted: 19 years ago
really good part
i hope kripa finds out angad didnt rape her
and goes back to him.
Sasha and karan are just so funny 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i finally found the ff.....i for got the name dats why....itz soooo awsome plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwww that was a great part!! continue soon i loved it!
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Kripa reaches home and sits at the couch trying to rest a little bit. Sasha and karan went with their friends to the mala…and they will have a sleepover since it was their friends birthday.


Kripa went to meeting with the gang. She asked josh for the money and josh said he didn't have it
Kripa got angry and started fighting with him. She hates it when she receives her money late….the rezone is that last time when she was working she didn't receive her money…she said its ok…but when sasha got sick she didn't have money to pay the doctor…and aliya wasn't in town to help her nor was Raj…she didn't know what to do but to just sale her car. She got money and paid the doctors. The gang knows why she hates it.

K: I don't care….I think u have to pay me from ur own pocket and when u receive the money u could have my money
J: what no way….
K: there is a way…give me my money
J: but…….I don't have it
K: great….I don't know who the hell made u our boss when u cant do something right…now pay me or run for ur life

Finaly kripa takes money from poor josh. The rest of the gang laughs at josh. Kripa leaves and needed to talk to raj so she knew he would be in bar…she left to the bar and talked to him. Raj was half drunk. Raj give kripa some beer but she refused…he forced her and finally kripa took it…when they drink kripa just throw the beer to the plant that was close to them but still acted as if she was drunk to.

K: ok raj lets go home…
R: one more one more plez
K: no lets go
R: one more
K: lets go raj

Raj takes a bottle of beer and they both leave outside. It was around 10 pm and they were on the streets drinking. Raj started making noises
R: hey ur not making any noises….are u drunk or not
K: acting as if she is drunk) yea I drink to much
They start walking and raj falls becz he couldn't keep his balance. Kripa helped him up and put his arm around her neck helping him to walk.


Angad was driving toward home when he sees kripa and Raj. He stops the car and was shocked to see both of them drunk.
A: is that kripa….she is drunk

R: hey look at that bottle…kick it
K: I cant..
R: why
K: im to drunk
R: let me try
Raj tries to kick the bottle but couldn't he keeps on missing.
R: ****
K: let me try

Kripa kicks the bottle far
R: wow u got it
K: yup (thinking) of course dumbo…im not drunk like u
R: my beer is done….I want more
K: we don't have anymore
R: I have small bottle in my pocket
Raj takes out another bottle and was about to drink it
K: hey can I drink first
R: ok

Kripa takes the bottle and was about to drink it but drops it. The bottle drops and breaks
R: what? Heyyyyyyy…u broke my bottle
K: sorry
R: why u? I will get u for that
Kripa laughs and runs will raj trying to chaise her…..raj trips and hits him self hard on the ground
R: ouchhhhh
K: shakes her head and walk up to him) see this is what u get for chasing me….now get up and lets go

Kripa helps him up and they starts walking again. Angad fallowed them by his car and stopped when they reached by a house.

R: puts his finger on his mouth) shhhhhh ( rings the bell)
A girl opens the door and get mad
G: ur drunk again
R: no….
G: what?
R: it wasn't my fault…vo…vo….(see kripa) today was kripas birthday and I had to drink with her
K: what? Liar
R: puts his hand on kripas mouth for her not to talk
G: get in the house
R: ok
K: bye
R: bye kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
K: bye

Kripa sigh and starts walking toward her house. She doesn't go to her house….she walks to the beach and sits on the sand looking at the waves.


Kripa takes some small rocks from the sand and starts throwing at the water. Angad just sat in his car watching her. After few mints later kripas phone rings. She picks it up and answers
K: yea
S: hi mom
K: oh hi jaan (gets up and starts walking will talking in her cell) how are u guys doing
S: we are kool mom
K: I miss u guys
S: we missed u to…here talk to karan
Ka: hi mom
K: hi jaan…how are u
Ka: we are good
K: did u guys have fun
Ka: yea a lot….we missed u a lot
K: me to
Ka: ok mom we have to go
K: bye…take care….and remember don't get in any trouble
Ka: we wont mom….bye
K: bye love u guys
Ka,S: we love u to mom
K: laughs) bye (hangs up)

Kripa starts walking at the beach then walks toward her house. She unlocks her door and inters inside. Angad smiles becz he found out were she lives.




Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.


Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome part!!! Raj was halarious! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 greatttttt jobbbbbbbbbb
yayyyyyyyayyy 😆 😆
cont soooooooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally angad knows where she lives!!!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Next day

All the gang were together and they had to find someone. Josh gives the mans pictures and tells them that he is in a apartment. They all get in groups….1,2.…3,4.…..5,6
5: why do I have to be with him
J: is there any problem
K: yea a lot…
J: we have to be in order
K: but…
J: we are getting late…lets go
They all zoom off except for 5,6
6: why u don't like me
5: I hate u
6: what did I do
5: shut up already….listen just don't talk to me
6: why
5: becz I said so
6: whats ur name
K: none of ur business
A: then how am I suppose to call u
K: I don't care (zooms off)
A: thinking) why is she mean to me? (zooms off after her)

They reach to the place and all of them run to the stair then stops by a door
J: 4 kick it

Raj kicks the door hard and bangs it open. There was lots of men's inside with guns in their hand. They starts firing at them but before they do that the gang kills the mans. Now only the boss it left. Josh walks up to him and holds from his collar. He tries to drag him from the room. As they open the door one man throws a bomb inside and runs down.
J: ****…runnnnn

They run outside will taking the man with them. They were in the stair when the bomb blows up. The people from apartments were already out…becz they knew there is going to be fight. Everyone was outside when they see the building explode. The whole building was in fire. The gang were trying to get out when kripa hears a child cry
5: hey there is some inside
4: C'mon hurry up

They get outside finally and raj drags kripa with him. They were outside and sees the building burn.
5: u guys I heard a kids cry inside
3: there is no one in there…u might just thought u did…lets go

All the gang rids off will 5,6 remind there
6: hurry up lets leave
They were about to leave but kripa drops her bike and runs back inside toward the building.
6: ****….5 stop….
Kripa runs inside will fire all over.
6: damn it…
Angad runs after her inside to. Kripa runs to the stirs and hears the Childs cry again. She hits the door open and sees two kids by the bed crying. The kids were about ages of 3 or 4. Angad inters after her and calls
6: 5 are u mad…what the hell are u doing

Kripa runs toward the kids. Angad sees the kids and were shocked. Kripa picks up one kid in her arm and angad takes another one in his
5: takes the blanket from the bed) cover him

Both covers the babys and runs outside. They try a lot and finally gets out of the building. The people outside were shocked when they see two people coming out with kids and their jacket in fire. Both kripa and angad puts the kids down and backs up. They both unzips their jacket and hits it down since it was in fire. Angad takes off his hamlet and his face was all red since it was too hot. Kripa just takes off her jacket but not hamlet.
6: take off ur hamlet
5: no

The lady runs and takes her kids in her arm and starts crying. Both angad and kripa sits in their bikes and zoom off toward their gang house. When they reach there
J: where were u guys?
P: what happen?
Raj sees kripa and runs to her
R: 5...what happen?
K: nothing…(sits on the ground will taking her gloves off and her shoes.)

J: angad what happen?
A: when we wanted to come 5 run back inside the building
J: what? Are u crazy 5
A: there really was a kids inside
The whole gang were shocked
A: tells them what happen)
4: im proud of u 5
5: yea yea whatever just give me some medicine…I burned my hand

The gang helps angad since he got burned to and only 4 helps 5. Kripa looks at her watch
K: oh ****….(runs to her bike and rids off)
J: were did she go
4: she had something important to do
J: oh ok


Kripa went back to work and started working. Angad come there again and sat down waiting for kripa to take his order. Kripa doesn't come to him and finally angad calls
A: waiter
K: gets angry) ufff
Kripa walks up to him
K: what can I get u sir
A: I want one coke and…(sees her hand that was burned)
K: and?
A: and some sandwich
K: is that all sir
A: yes
K: ur food will be ready in 10 mints (leaves)

Angad was shocked to see kripas hand burned.
A: that were 5 got burned…does that mean…no that cant be…5 is a girl to and…maybe im mistaken….but if her right arm is burned to then that's her

After 10 mints later kripa brings angad his food.
K: anything else
A: yes u
K: shut up (leaves)
A: angad gets really big smile when he saw her right hand burned to…he knew it was her) wow today she was awesome….man I cant believe it im working with her…she was always with me and I didn't know…gosh cant wait to see her at work….


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Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago

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