Phool Aur Kaante (A.K)

Hi everyone
im starting a new ff Phool Aur Kaante
hope u guys enjoy😃

Its 5 in the morning. U see a small house and there is only one room. No living room and in the room there is only one door that leads to bathroom. The was a small bed in the room and a big cabinet in the corner. There is one figure in the bed and its non other then kripa. U see her sweaty and moving her head around. She is having a nightmare. Kripa jerks up from sleep sweating. She gathers her legs to her self and starts crying. After 5 mints later she gets up and goes to the bathroom washing her face. She comes out of the shower after 15 mints later with towel around her. She goes to her small cabinet and unlocks it. On the side of her cabinet there was guns hanging and on other side different kinds of knifes. In the center all u could see is black shirts and black jeans. She looks around her clothes

K: what should I wear(even thought they are all black) how about this one…
She puts on back jeans and black shirt and on top black jacket. She opens under her cabinet and takes her boots out and puts them on. On one of her both she puts knife on the edge and on other small gun . Her jeans where long and its cover on top of her boots. She takes out a mirror from edge of her cabinet and brushes her hair. After when her hair gets dried she thighs them up in pony and wears her hat. Kripa locks her small house and sits on her small car and zooms out to a club.

The back grown song starts
Saaki Se Mohabbat Hoti Hai
Har Roz, Shikaayat Hoti Hai
Peene Ko Mere Peena Na Kaho
Yunhi Toh Ibaadat Hoti Hai

Kripa walks inside the place and stops by the mike. She starts singing

Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Jo Nashe Mein Na Rahe… (2)
Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Aise Jo Tauba Kare
Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Dil Mein Jiske Gham Na Ho
Loot Gaya Samjho Sharaabi Paas Jiske Ham Na Ho

(The guy comes next to her and both start dancing)

( Oh Saaki Saaki Re Saaki Saaki
Aa Paas Aa, Rahe Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki )… (2)
( Woh Sharaabi Kya…Sharaabi Paas Jiske Ham Na Ho )
( Oh Saaki… Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki )… (2)

Ishq Ki Galiyon Mein Na Jaana, Ishq Bada Badnaam Hai
Ishq Toh Mera Khuda Hai, Aashiq Mera Naam Hai..Ho…
Ho..I.Shq Ki Galiyon Mein Na Jaana, Ishq Bada Badnaam Hai
Ishq Toh Mera Khuda Hai, Aashiq Mera Naam Hai
Aashiqui Ke Har Qadam Pe, Husna QatlEAam Hai
Eh Aashiqui Mein Jaan Lootaana Aashiqon Ke Kaam Hai
( Oh Saaki…Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki )… (2)
Maikade Mein Aane Waale Maikashi Toh Seekh Le
Hampe Hasne Waale Pehle Tu Hasi Ko Seekh Le…Oh…
Hey…Maikade Mein Aane Waale Maikashi Toh Seekh Le
Hampe Hasne Waale Pehle Tu Hasi Ko Seekh Le
Har Khushi Hai Door Tujhse, Gham Tere Nazdeek Hai
Haay...Tere Diwaane Ki Haalat, Bin Tere Bhi Thheek Hai
Oh Saaki Saaki ( Saaki Saaki Saaki )
Aa Paas Aa, Rahe Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki
( Oh Saaki…Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki )… (3)

The song ends and everyone starts clapping for them. Kripa jumps down from stage and goes to the bar.
K: give me one beer
The guy that was singing comes next to her
G: no bear for u…give her a coke..
K: what im not going to drink coke…(wines) I want my beer
G: ur not allowed to drink beer
K: said who…
G: said me…
K: who are u to tell me not to drink this
G: ur baap
K: u wish…by the way we are same age and if u want to be my dad u need to get old
G: kripa plez don't drink
K: plez Raj…listen we are friends right
G: yea
K: so plez let me
G: no…
The waiter gives kripa her beer
Kripa picks up the glass and was about to drink Raj takes it from her hand
K: rajjjjjj plezzz
R: drinks it him self) no
K: why are u drinking then
R: becz I could and u cant…
K: why not…
R: listen if u drink beer u will get drunk
K: so. doesn't everyone
R: and later when the gang comes to beat u up u won't be able to fight back
K: they could never beat me….
R: correct and that's becz u where never drunk
K: oh C'mon today I turned 21 I could drink when im 21
R: shut up….
K: I hate u (stakes her tongue out)
R: I know u love me
K: what kind of brother are u…
R: the kind that will not let her sister drink
K: im leaving…my head hurts
R: same dream again
K: u always guess right…
R: by the way…Raja said there is a new person who is coming and u have to lead him to where her wants to go….
K: yea im going to go and see him anyway and I will see who the stupid person is this time
R: good luck
K: say hi to babi from me (runs from there)
R: why u…she is not ur babi
K: shouts) yes she is…


Kripa knocks on the door and no one answers. She gets pissed off and kicks the door
K: do I have to always knock
P: sit down
K: are u deaf
P: no but soon will be if u ruin this project again…
K: I don't want to take this person
P: u have to
K: but raja
R: shouts) how dare u take ur bosses name
K: puts her finger in side her ear) im not deaf..chill man
R: listen I want u take this person every where he want to go…
K: u know I will take him to hell if he wants to…all I need is my money…
R: very will…we have a deal..u guide this person for 2 months and reach him to his target and u will get paid as much as u want
K: is this person a cop
R: no he isn't
K: u sure..becz I don't want to spend a day in jail again
R: we searched about him he is not a cop
K: ok so when is he coming
R: tonight at 7
K: ****
R: why
K: thats when im singing
R: yea so…he will watch u and then after when ur finished ur job will start….
K: where is he going to stay
R: ur house
K: get up and shouts) my house?
R: sit down
K: sits)I don't want to take him to my house
R: u will get paid double
K: im cool with him….ok I will leave now
R: by the way…he is looking for Zaib to…
K: shocked and turns around facing him) what u say?
R: u might get to zaib from him….
K: angry) is he zaib's man
R: I don't think so..becz he is after him to so he cant be zaibs man
K: so that's why u give this persons responsibility to me
R: winks at her)
K: thanks..I own u…
R: no need to be thankful…take car
K: smiles at him and leaves)

It 7 clock a car stops by the same place and steps out a guy. Raja runs up to him
R: welcome…this way I will show u ur guider ..plez come this way
U see the guys face and its none other then angad.


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Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Wow that was wicked!!! I loved it! Cont. soon! Great story line 2!

ok dis iz a suspenceful story plz cont. 😃

gr8 story line!! jus one ? r zaib and angad the sam ppl?
cont soon
himani 😃

angad is looking for zaib.............right???

and is kripa like a goondi or what???

great story.....and a unique one too. keep it up and continue soon

wow, cool. kripa the bad girl hahah. nice

Kripa come on the stage and starts singing (from movie aashiq)

La la la
Lai la lai la lai lai lai lai la - 2
Lala lala lala lala lala lala lala lala ay!
Gore gore gaal mere baheki baheki chaal hai
Dekh meri patli si kamariya har aashiq behaal hai
Haan, Gore gore gaal mere baheki baheki chaal hai
Dekh meri patli si kamariya har aashiq behaal hai

--CHORUS--
Parda utha, zara parda utha
Mehfil mein aaye sab ko maza
Parda utha de zara parda utha
Jalwa dikha de zara jalwa dikha

Angad sits in one table and watching kripa dance

--Kripa--
Gore gore gaal mere baheki baheki chaal hai
Dekh meri patli si kamariya har aashiq behaal hai
Meri resham waali chunar
Mera boote waala lehnga
Koi mol chuka nahin sakta
Mera husn bada hai mehnga

--CHORUS--
Sar se chunar sarka de
Lehnga ek baar ghuma de
Jo mangegi hum denge
Aankhon se jaam pila de

--kripa--
Kaanon ki yeh baali doongi
Honton ki yeh laali doongi
Gaalon ki jawaani doongi
Koi to nishaani doongi

--CHORUS--
Parda utha, zara parda utha
Mehfil mein aaye sab ko maza
Parda utha de zara parda utha
Jalwa dikha de zara jalwa dikha

--kripa--
Gore gore gaal mere baheki baheki chaal hai
Dekh meri patli si kamariya har aashiq behaal hai
Baheke hue armaanon ko
Mehboob sambhal jaane de
Jalwa tujhe dikh laaoongi
Kuch raat to thal jaane de

--kripa--
Tadpa na humko aise
Baahon mein zara bharne de
Denge tujhko nazraana
Jo dil chaahe karne de

--kripa--
Thoda tadpaaoongi main
Thoda tarsaaoongi main
Sej pe chhaaoongi main
Pyaas bujhaaoongi main

--CHORUS--
Parda utha, zara parda utha
Mehfil mein aaye sab ko maza
Parda utha de zara parda utha
Jalwa dikha de zara jalwa dikha

--kripa--
Gore gore gaal mere baheki baheki chaal hai
Dekh meri patli si kamariya har aashiq behaal hai

--CHORUS--
(Parda utha, zara parda utha
Mehfil mein aaye sab ko maza) - 2

The song ends

Kripa runs out from there. She comes out few mints later wearing her same black cloths will chewing gum. Raja goes up to her and points at angad who was sitting at the table and was watching her dance all the time. Kripa smiles and goes up to angad.
K: chewing gum) hi
A: stands up and offers his hand) hi
K: looks at his hand and slaps it) lets get to the point
A: sure..plez have a seat
K: im ok with standing
A: can we go somewhere where no one is
K: looks at him angry)
A: no..ur misunderstanding me…I mean somewhere there is not much noise….
K: lets go to my house
A: ur house?
K: u got problem with that
A: no of course not
K: fallow me…
They get out of the salon and kripa sits on her car will angad sits on passenger seat. Kripa drives toward her house. There was silence between them and angad wanted to break it
A: so what do u do
K: -------
A: how old are u?
K: ------
A: do u always sing between those people

Angad kept asking her question and kripa didn't answer any of it. Kripa stopped the car in front of her house and got of. Angad fallowed her with his big bag on his left hand. Kripa unlocked the door and stepped in. angad just stood there.
K: u wane come in or die outside
A: oh sorry..(steps in the house)

Angad looks around and see only a bed and a cup board.
A: this is where u live
K: u got problem with that
A: no not at all
K: so….
A: so..
K: shut up and tell me what u want me to do?
A: can I have a glass of water first
K: looks at him angry) wait here

Kripa stand in sinter of the room and there was a knot hanging. She puts the knot and a stair comes down. She goes to the stairs and comes back down after few seconds holding a glass of water in her hand
K: here (hands him the water)
A: thanks (looks at the water)
K: drink it its not poisoned
A: oh…(drinks the water)
K: so tell me whats my job
A: can I sit first
K: go ahead
Angad throws his luggage on the top of the bed and sits on top of it. He like it and starts jumping
A: nice bed
K: whatever…
A: come sit….
K: sits in the corner of the room with her knees in front of her) im ok here…now tell me
A: can I…
K: shut up and tell me what should I do?
A: ok ok chill…are u always so hot temper
K: that's it im out of here (get up and goes close to the door and stops facing him) the kitchen is upstairs if u want to eat anything and u could sleep on my bed..I will be back in few hours
A: so where are u going to sleep….
K: ignores him and leaves)

gr8 part..... itz funny!!! 😆
cont soon
himani 😃