Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :) - Page 60

Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Is it too early to Ask rather beg for an update. I'm dying in anticipation. Maaneet r alone in he house, they've just broken away from the kiss n r ready to dive in the past... Geet's memories n then if all fails at mohits end but his dreams n the girl infront of him. ... Ahhh save me plzzz. Update soon.

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

hey . . . battling my eyelids and making a puppy dog face . . . can i request an update . . . pweej . . . pweej . . . pweej . . . but only if ur exams are done

Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

If you'll be so cute, I cant help but not give you an update. But, right now, I'm just soo busy with things.

Till then, I think I'd give you a poem. One which i wrote. I hope that would do. 😛

Its nothing great, I just wanted it to share it with you guys. 😊

I wrote it very recently, the title is:

All In A Day's Hope...

Of all the things i guess,
my life's a total mess,
and an emotional turmoil,
i cant decide, and i dont want to recoil...

What do I do, when he comes
to me and holds me with tender care,
And when he makes the promise
that he'd always be there
standing right by me, here beside
on the edge where i stand
ready to save me from the fall,
With a whisper he calls
onto me, such gentle love,
In a hope, that some day i'd rise above
the agony of my past,
and perhaps, this time, it just might last...

But i find myself retreating
back into my shell, cuz i'm afraid,
Though a million times he's said...
He asks me to place,
my failed trust on him..

And I assure him that it aint he,
For i do not want to create a whim...
I might lead him to nothing,
cuz its myself, who i lack faith in...

But when he hugs me ever so lovingly,
All I can do is melt into his arms,
and give into his charms...

And when he looks deep, so deep into my eyes
I cant not look away, I shy..

Its as if he can read my soul,
like one watches a fish,
through the water in a bowl...
I cant help but feel butterflies,
each time he warms me with his touch
And its then that i come to realise,
That he means so much...

I wish there comes a day
when i dont have to push him away
because of my antagonist, my darned fear...

I hope there comes a day
when the lost trust upon myself, I regain,
And I'll have him near
without any doubts, without the scare
that i might, just might cause him pain...

So, how's it? 😳