Mini AR FF: Cross connection End pg 17 - Page 14

Thanks for the PMs and hope to read more from you.

Coming to the ff, it was really a very very sweet story dear. Very new and interesting concept and I loved it to bits. The best thing is that I got to read the whole story at one go. I have read your earlier creations too and I think you should write more.

BTW, where have you disappeared nowadays.....haven't heard from you since a long time.

Love,

Richa di

just crossed the way of cross connection and the name intrigued me to read the rest !

very nice concept ..flow was smooth and realistic ! the stalking thingy intrigues very much ...loved ur style ...the way ridhima replayed the msgs fitting herself into simran's shoes and finally realizing she so wants to be simran ~ liked the way...the particular msgs fitted into the situations !

quite a research on msgs eh ! liked it ! as well loved the pranks and tamanna sid scene ! using mahi way touch ! fantastic !

but m afraid ..that i might upset u at the end of this comment ! cause it was evident that u posted the last two parts in jiffy ..quite a hurried ending ! it wud have better if you had taken sweet time to let armaan linger a tad bit more..and their finale encounter a lil later ...i sincerely hoped that simran never existed ...that wud have better ....hope u dont mind me adding this bit .. this is not to offend you at all...!

however !

liked the entire concept ..please keep writing ....and please hold the flow ..!

regardz

lost !