NIVREN ROMANTIC SCENE PART: 4 (NIVI'S SURPRISE)

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Hi All….

Here I'm back with my fourth NIVREN ROMANTIC SCENE. This time I wanted to make it a bit different. Every time Viren gives surprise to Nivedita , so this time I thought Nivi should plan a surprise for Viren. My this creation also includes moments that Swetha(sv003) wanted to experience. I hope that all nivreniacs and Swetha will appreciate this one as they appreciated my earlier scenes. So, here is Nivren Saga….

Sood family is out of town as they all went to attend a wedding of a relative. But Viren and Nivi could not accompany them because Viren is working on a project and he has to complete this project on time and project deadline is near to come. So he decided to skip the wedding and because of him, Nivi also decides to stay at Shimla.

Viren leaves for the office early in the morning and informs Nivi that he may be late at night. Nivi is alone in the house, she finishes all the daily chore . She enters in nivren room. She looks at the collage that viren gifted her, then she reads again the greeting card. She smiled and recalls viren's smiling face. Then she takes Viren's photograph and gazes at him and says to the photograph," Tum kitana kuch karte ho viren mere liye, tum Itana pyaar kyo karte ho mujhe, meri ek muskurahat ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho tum, chalo phir aaj mein tumhare liye kuch karti hoo, kuch special….jisse tumhare chehare par bhi muskurahat aaye…."

Its 8'o clock at night, viren is still in the office. His phone rings, Its Nivi, He receives the phone and asks," Haa nivedita bolo, kaise phone kiya…..maine bataya tha naa tumko mujhe der ho sakti hai…" Nivi replies with a fear and anxiety in her voice,"Viren tum jaldi ghar aa jao." Viren asks," Nivedita tum itani ghabarayi hue kyo ho…kya hua, sab theek hai na waha…" Nivi," Viren mein phone par nahi bata sakti , tum bus jaldi aa jao." Viren assures her,"Tum ghabarao mat, mein abhi aata hoo." Viren immediately leaves for the home.

Viren enters in the Sood house. He sees that, the whole Sood mansion is decorated with candles and flowers. The whole house is scented with the aroma of flowers. Then he observes that some "Rose petals" arrows on the floor are pointed towards certain direction. He is thrilled and excited. He follows those rose petals arrows. He reaches to the terrace of house. He then finds out that there is table for two, with some candles and bouquet. He is just looking at the table and says to himself, " ye sab hai kya….par jo bhi hai bahut accha hai.." he is lost in his thoughts, suddenly Nivi comes from behind and says, "Kaisa laga mera surprise…." Now Viren is really surprised. He asks Nivi, " Tum theek ho naa, kuch hua toh nahi , aur tum phone par itana ghabarakar baat kyo kar rahi thi…" Nivi says," Hmmm…..maine tumko phone isseliye kiya tha, kyoki main theek nahi thi, mein tumko bahut miss kar rahi thi , aur tumko bulane ka mujhe yahi tareeka sujha, phir meine socha ke tum meri ek muskurahat ke liye itana kuch karte ho toh mein bhi tumhare chehare par khushi laaon."

Viren smiles and says," Tumse mein ye expect nahi kiya tha…jo ladaki mujhe office mein acche se kaam karne ke liye kahati ho, woh mujhe office se iss tarah se bulaye….Hmmm…ho naa ho Viren Sood ye tere pyaar ka hee jadoo hai… aur mujhe tumhara surprise kaisa laga, toh kahna padega tumne acche se seekh liya hai mere se surprise dena.." Then he winks at Nivi.

Nivi says," well…surprise abhi baaki hai, Viren…" Then she gifts Viren a rose n kisses her on his face. Viren is amazed and bewildered. He looks at Nivi and says, "Nivedita, ye tum hee ho naa…yaa mein koi sapna dekh raha hoo…." Nivi pinches him and says," ye sapana nahi hai…aur mein nivedita hee hoo…ab kya karoo, Viren Sood ke jadoo se mein bhi bach nahi payi.." Then she laughs at Viren. Viren hugs her passionately. Both have a romantic candle light dinner. Then viren plays the flute and nivi hums a tune,"LaLaLa Laaa….LaLaLa Laaaa…La La LaLa…".

Suddenly breeze of fresh air comes and all the candles blow out. Now there is only moon light. Viren looks at nivi, she is looking gorgeous in this moon light. Viren comes near to her and caresses her lips, then takes his face near to hers and whispers in her ear," Thanks for the surprise….aur haa bus itane se hee mere chehare par khusi nahi ayegi…" Nivi asks shyly," toh aur kya karna hoga mujhe…." Viren hugs her and says, "Chalo mere saath batata hoo…" Then Viren takes nivi to their room and both get lost in the world of romance.

Nivi's Surprise for Viren….

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WITH LOVE …..

Yati…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice and romantic fan fare 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg Yati😲 u did this for me...😲😭😭😭😭😭 arree dnt get shocked jaana😆😉... these r the tears that came in my eyes coz of happiness u gav to me jst now in ur update😳.... love you🤗🤗🤗..........
will write my comments later aftr readin ur ff.....😳
love
swetha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a lovely scene Thank you sooo much... And keep writing more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita99

Nice and romantic fan fare 👏

Thanks dear....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sv003

omg Yati😲 u did this for me...😲😭😭😭😭😭 arree dnt get shocked jaana😆😉... these r the tears that came in my eyes coz of happiness u gav to me jst now in ur update😳.... love you🤗🤗🤗..........

will write my comments later aftr readin ur ff.....😳
love
swetha
p.s will like ur post later.....😳 currently its givin me error😡

waiting 4 ur comments.....darling...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aysha1989

That was a lovely scene Thank you sooo much... And keep writing more 😊

Thank uuuuu soooo muchhhh...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks shanthi....u r so sweet darling...u always appreciate my efforts....a big hug 4 u.....🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my oh my wat a scene man.... 😍 i felt as if i was nivi.... ahhhh im in a dream land pinch me pinch me.....

wonderful work jaanu.... 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waw yati love it yar romantic in different way great sweetheart god job keep working

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