New FF MN: Crossed Paths

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Hi guys i am starting a new ff, i know i already have 3 pending ff but what can i do. I got inspired for this ff by a song and the show Kitni Mohobbat hai.

Character Sketch

Mayank Sharma: Rudra and Shilpa Sharma's son. His dad does illegal business, and he follows his dad's instructions. He loves his parents a lot. His nature is of prideful, he thinks he is always right and no one can change him. He is in second Year College studying legal business. He is 22 years old.

Nupur Bhushan: an independent girl, Navita Bhushan's daughter. She hates man despises them, because of her dad. She is very studios, believes in love, but never hopes to fell in love. All in all she is very happy, cheerful girl. She is in second year of college and is studying doctor. She is 20 years old.

Samrat Shergill: Nups cousin brother, he loves Gunjan and is marrying her soon. He loves his sister Nupur a lot can do anything for her, since she is his princess. Most of all he wants to change her view on men. He wants her to get someone very special who loves her very much. He lives with Nups nani's house, because his parents abandoned him. He is like a son to Navita (nups mom). He is 22 years old has almost completed his business studies, since he is an achiever.

Gunjan Meheta: Nups best friend, they had been friends for 6 years, they share everything with each other. She is 21 years old and is currently studying law. She deeply respects Samrat, but doesn't love him. She seems to have better relationship with Mayank.


Kitne hi door door hon hum donon ke raaste
Mil jaate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise aankh hai darpan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise barkha saawan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek sajni ek saajan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Us rab ne jab dil diye
Dil ke do tukde kiye
Dono mein ek naam leikha
Ek radha ek shyam likha
Ab ye dil dhadakte hain
Milte aur bichhadte hain
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Chapter 1: Sweet Start

It was nice new morning. A girl of about 21 years old stepped out of her bathroom wearing a nice blue kurti with black slacks looking adorable. She walked to her dresser wore her light weighted earings and few bracelet. She was putting her eyeliner on when someone entered her room.

Nani: "hai mai marjawa Kuriye ena tyaar shyaar hoke jaandi ta vi tenu koi munda nahi labda". Nups went to hug her nani. They had a very special bond.

Nups: "Nani tusi meri shaadi karan de peeche kyun ho, main haje vyaah nahi karana".

Nani: "chal shaadi na kar par koi laadka ta lab tenu 2 saal hogaye college jande hoye abhi tak koi laadka nahi mila".

Nups:" nani aap kyun tension leti hain aap janti hai main shaadi nahi karna chahati".
Nain: "kyun".

Nups: "app janti hai I hate men, papa ne jo mama ke saath kiya I can never forget that".

Nani: "Beta har koi laadka tere papa jaisa nahi hota".

Nups: "Likin har laadke ka dimaag ek jaisa hota hai, Okay nani I am late for college bye". She hugs her nani and run downstairs only to bump into Samrat.

Sam: "hey hey princess watch where you going". He said catching a hold of Nups hand. "you okay".

Nups: "yah I am fine, whats up with you looking dashing today".

Samrat: "don't I always look dashing".

Nups: "not really just today have a date with Gunjan ?(sam blushed hearing Gunjan's Name) "oh wow Samrat knows how to blush".

Sam: "Shutup you ready for college".

Nups: "yup, how do I look". She said twiling around for Samrat to see.
Sam: "just like my little princess".

Nups: "oh please Bro I am a adult now".

Sam: "so you want me to stop calling you princess". He said teasingly, nups thought about it.

Nups: "No not really, but promise me even after your love Gunjan comes into your life, I wil still be your princess". Nups looked sentimental which was a rare thing Sam got to see.
Sam: "umm you know I am not sure about that". Nups felt bad she loved the attention from her cousin-brother Samrat they had a really special bonding.
Nups: "Fine, go to your future wife (nups said angrily and was about to walk away when Samrat caught a hold of her arm.

Sam: "hey I am kidding (he said giving nups a side hug) You will always be my princess, Gunjan holds a different part of my heart and you hold different part, and anyways she is your best friend".

Nups: "I know you can't get me upset or else your wedding with Gunjan will only be in dreams (nups said laughing, while Samrat admired his younger cousin-sister)".

Sam: "SO can we go to college now I don't want to be late to class again".

Nups: "Late to class or late to meet Gunjan".
Nups looked at Samrat teasingly then walked out of the house Samrat followed her.

At Excel College
Gunjan rushing towards Dia and Benji.

Gun: "Dia have you seen mayank, I have been looking for him everywhere". Gunjan asked breathing heavily.

Dia: "relax Gunjan he is the basketball court".
Gunjan ran towards the basketball court, she looked around finally spotting Mayank a guy of about 23 years old in his second year of college. He smiled seeing Gunjan. She walked up to him.

Mayank: "hey jaan what's up".

Gunjan: "where have you been I have been looking for you for the past one hour". Gunjan said angrily.

Mayank: "relax you found me now right so tell why do you look so upset".

Gunjan: "Why I am upset, Mayank do you realize I am getting engaged in one week and you don't seem to worry about that at all".

Mayank: "Relax jaan just tell your parent you don't want to marry the guy".
Gunjan: "yah tell them that I don't want to get married in a good family but with Mayank Sharma from a gangster family right".
Mayank was Rudra Sharma's son not exactly a gangster but not from a nice family either. Mayank's was adopted by Rudra and Shilpa. He loved his dad for giving him his new life so he did everything his dad asked. They just did bad things like illegeal business. Though, mayank had never threatened anyone, because everyone was already scared of him. However Gunjan has seen the soft side of Mayank and had fell in love with him. He loved Gunjan too, because she had seen the human being inside him. (Arjun form kitni mohabbat hai)

Mayank: "Not a bad idea".

Gunjan: "Mayank do you realize how serious this is I love you I can't marry someone else".

Mayank: "relax jaan just let your parents do everything they want okay, I will handle the rest, I love you too". He kissed Gujan's forehead and left the court.


I would like to say that mayank's character is based off of Arjun form kitni mohabbat hai, i couldn't describe his character throughly so people who know Arjun's character would understand mayank's character easily in this story.

Guys please please do tell me if i should continue or not, I will try my best to give time to all of ffs.
Do leave your comments/critcism😊

Also if you guys do want me to continue, please do tell if you guys want a character sketch to clarify thing.

Thanks
Ria 😊
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Chapter 11: Coming Soon❤️
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mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept. lekin ye mayank gunjan kyun? mayank nupur hona chaiye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting concept dear!
would love to read this one
eagerly waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice concept n continue soon.
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Congrats for uer new ff riya... The concept looks rlly interesting, so gunjan and mayank.... Interesting cont. soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congo ur new FF dear it seems verry interesting but i hate that mayu in love some1 alse n i feel bad for sam update soon plzz n don't forget ur other ff's ok 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyc concept ria!
thou i have no idea abt d kitni mohabat hai story.. so dis appeals me!
continue soon!
& Congos 4 ur new FF
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Ria
Ye kya hai
myank and gunjan- no wayyyyyyyyyy
kabhi nehi
i dont want majan pair
mayur r d best-------- dkeho meri mayur ko alag maat karo - samjhi
btw first art is veryyyyyyyy interesting
loved it
do update next part soon

and lz update ur others ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh nice concept ria.....infact i dnt knw abt dis arjun cz till now i only like mayank....lol....well i really want u to cont da story.....such a unique one n i want to c da twists n turns of dis story..how mayur n sajan will b together.....cont soon sweety.....n dnt forget ur other ffs too......u r going a bit too quick...lol.......i hope ull manage dem equally....


tczzz
laods of love....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome starting
n seems interesting..mayank n gunjan
luved nupur n her nani convo...
cont soon

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