~crzy li'l thing call'd luv~

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Hey its KINNARI here AGAIN!!😆

Well, I juz cant help but put down the ideas tht hit me, into words, however lame they are!! So I'm here again wid a new FF on AR again'cz I juzt cant picture anyone elz in my stories!!

Please do make tym and read it and lemme me know how it is, all negative and positive criticisms are wholeheartedly welcome'..i knw I hav 2 other FF'z running presently in IF on AR! Not to worry they will not be overshadowed by this! I will finish them for sure'but mayb I'll take a li'l longer and tht'z all'

Now I guess I have chattered enuff, please read on and DO tel me how it is!!

PROLOUGE:

"and this is the next best thing tht ever happened to me'.. meet my sis"

She turned as she heard her brother mention her, but she was floored by what she saw! Or should she say WHO she saw?

That somebody's eyes widened as he saw her as he exclaimed to her brother "DUDE, did u juz call HER your SISTER??!! "

Her brother looked at him and then at her, raising his eyebrow as she just managed to give him a small smile

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INDEX:

PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2-PAGE 6
PART 3-PAGE 10
PART 4-PAGE 16
PART 5-PAGE 22
PART 6- PAGE 28
PART 7- PAGE 32
PART 8-PAGE 37
PART9- PAGE 45
PART 10- PAGE 49
PART 11- PAGE 51


~ my other FF'z~

you are my everything

spark's fly

Edited by kangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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faaab...
continue soon n me in da pm list........plzz..ok....
thx 4 da pm
AMOON
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woww!!
Update sooooooon plzzz....
jst loved the prologue!
waiting to read the ff :)
Love
Rhea
Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 15 years ago
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UPDATE 1:


" yeah! Yeah! I'm gettig ready babe! Cant u lyk give me my freakin 5 min'z to dress in peace??" yelled a majorly pissed riddhima into her phone, as her friends cum room-mates just rolled their eyes at her


They just smiled as they saw a small tornado called riddhima gush through their dorm


Rhea: late as usual isnt she?


Samantha: yup! She is! Idk why the gal suxx so badly at packing?


Rhea, samantha and riddhima were room-mates and bestest friends , they shared almost all classes! Rhea and riddhima were indian'z whereas, samantha was a total gal of the states, they'd bonded quickly and were like sisters!


During their 3 years in westwood , they'd had loads of fun, they were always there for each other and were known in the college as the "TROUBLESOME TRIO"''.


Her room-mates chattered as they heard her frustruated shreik again


Ridz: rhee, sammy are you even gonna move ur asses and help me pack or sit there gossiping when I'm about to get into trouble?


Sam grinned at rhea and they both chouroused : you know the magical word, don't you ridzyyyyyyyy'..


She looked at them annoyed, taking one look at their smirking faces she knew that she had no option but to surrender! She threw her hands up in frustruation


Ridz: F-I-N-E! hav it you way'.. pleaasssseee help me guy's!!


Sammy: kay!!


Rhee: lets get this done den!! *grinning*


Ridz: and wipe the smirk off ur face, I'll find a way to get even


She stuck out her tongue at them childishly and went on to bury her head into her messy wadrobe again! But as she heard them sniggering, she couldn't help but smile'..


1 HOUR LATER:


The trio stood and surveyed their always dirty room which was tidied for a change, the packing was all done and the room which was usually bursting with liveliness and energy, looked so quaint!


Sammy: goodness sake! FINALLY! We finished! This whole cleaning stuff is killing me babe!


Rhee: I agree sammy! And ridzy from where in the hell did you manage to stuff so many things into your wadrobe? It took us forever to pack your stuff


Sammy: and our packing hardly took more than half an hour!!


Ridz: ummm'well honestly I have no clue either! Gawd I never knew I had so much! My arms are aching *groaaannn*


Rhee: serves you right, now get up and treat us to some insanely awesum cold coffee and marco's doughnuts!


Ridz: yeah let'z go! I can juz feel the C.C calling out to me!!


Sammy: nautankkiii letz go!!


Rhea and ridzi laughed over sammy'z heavily accented hindi and together they left for their treat!!

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Marco's cafe:


" MARCOOOOO" screamed the trio as they stood at the counter to see a visibly disgruntled marco come from the kitchen area


Marco was a man of 50! He owned the marco'z caf that was just situated outside the college campus, he had been in this bussiness for almost 4 years now, the trio that stood in front of him were his fave bratty kiddo's, basically everybody loved the sweet, old man and he loved them too, but these 3 were more like family


Marco: yes!! What is all the noise about?? Are you 3 planning to put me outta bussiness girlies? By the amount of noise you make I'm sure my customers will run away very soon'.


He said waggling his eyebrows at them as he stood with his hands on his waist, tryiong to look strict but failing miserably


The girls caught a sight of his twinkling eyes and grinned their fullest at him, marco was a sweetheart they all knew it and mrs.rachael was the same'


Ridz: so marco where is rach?? *looking around*


Rach: right here girls


She came from the kitchen and stood beside marco, smiling fondly at the trio!!


Sammy: her rach!! Zup??


Rach:the roof sammy, wht elz could be? *innocently*


Rizy, marco and rhee were in splits as they heard this as sammy pouted and rachael tried to quiten them with fake stern face


Rhee: marco we wanttt


Marco: 3 C.C'z


Ridz: and


Rach: special doughnuts!


Ridz: yup!!


Racheal left to get the order as marco was busy with the other customers, the girls were buttering sammy


Ridz heard marco calling her order and went to get it, as marco smilingly handed her the order, her hand banged against someone elz's almost getting her to drop her order, she glared and looked up to see those grey-blue eyes, in an instant she knew who it was'.


"from when do you let blind people in rach?"


She heard him ask as her blood boiled, her friends spotting the disturbance reached her and knowing who it is, glared their best at the person


Sammy: lets go ridzy! Don't waste ur breath on such wasted people!


Ridz: JERK!!


Seeing the commotion marco intervened to see the usual duo standing ready to attack each other, he never really understood what problem they had! But they for sure fought like two dogs fighting for a bone, shaking his head he went towards them


Marco: ok you two break it up!! Lets move ppl, no show here!


The crowd that had gathered moved away, he looked beadily at them and said


Marco: why do u fight? I hav no clue, but u do know rite that it upsets me and rachael when we see both of you fight!!


Riddhima gulped and looked sideways to see rachael entering


Rach: OH GoD! Don't tell me both of you were fighting AGAIN?? I really do not understand why!! You're both lyk my children and you fight lyk enemies


Both looked at the ground ashamed


"sorry rach" said the person


Rachael smiled fond and said " its allrite armaan! Its juzt all of you are leaving and even two days before u leave us you wanna get into meaningless fights"


The trio felt so guilty as they saw rach in tears and went to her giving her a group hug, pulling disgruntled marco into it too


Rhee: we're so sorry rach n marco


Sammy: v promise no more fights!!


Rach: U DO?? *surprised*


Armaan went to her and uttered an "YES" as he hugged her fondly, marco looked at ridz who nodded


Marco: good then! Go to your tables and enjoy your orders! off you go! And armaan here come ur buddies liam and dave!


The trio moved away, as they saw armaan being joined by his friends! Ridz sighed as she sat down at their usual table


Sammy: think u can keep it ridzy?


Rhee: no chance, armaan gets 0n her very last nerve!


Ridz: ugh he does! But I cnt see rach n marco upset, so I guess atleast not in front of them!


Sammy: but seriously I dnt see how riddhima can stay without getting into a row with armaan'.


Ridz: sammy we know u have a crush on the arrongant jerk!


Samy: who wouldn't ridzy, I mean cumon! He'z mr.popular, BB champ, smartie with killing good looks and those mesmerising grey-blue eyes!


Ridz: UGHHH' stop it!!


Rhee: ok sammy keep your thoughts in your mind and ridzy quit it we are here to have our treat letz not spoil it!!


Agreeing they let go of the subject an engaged themslves in their usual banter and gossiping'.

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Edited by kangel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
interesting start
loved it
loved armaan entry
cant wait 2 c why AR hate each other so much
dieing 2 read more
plz do con
and do pm me
thanksssssssssssssssss
Edited by ARMAANKSGFAN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amona

faaab...

continue soon n me in da pm list........plzz..ok....
thx 4 da pm
AMOON



thnx sooo much amoon
yup! u're on d LIST!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: RheaKSG4eva

Woww!!
Update sooooooon plzzz....
jst loved the prologue!
waiting to read the ff :)
Love
Rhea



abb padho aur mujhe ek accchhhhaaa sa baddaa sa cmmnt do!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

interesting start
dieing 2 read more
plz do con
and do pm me
thanksssssssssssssssss



thnx soo much!!
yup sure....😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OH MY GOD !!!!!
i dont believe this!
You actulally used MY name ???
Awwwwww....
like i told u a hundred times while txt'n , i dont mind saying it again!

I LOVE YOU!!!!

And yay!!!! my nick-name also :P
love u yaar...

ok enuf of names ki tareef! ;)

Awesome start!
I'm sure this is gonna be fun!
well mera naam aata hai isme toh ofcourse it has to be awesome just like AWOTB ;)

hehe...
you knw wht ?
i LOVE this FF =)
I Love you!

Muahhhh!!!
Update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon !!!!!
hehe....

Love
Ms. Jallad !

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