One Shot: Somersaults of the Heart - Page 2

Originally posted by: .Divya.

nicely written Kanky.. though I dont see PKYEK... from wht you have written... its very nice..

Originally posted by: natashu

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There are no two ways about it. This OS, like many of your other writings, was awesome! (:

And even though it was your first take on Abhay-Piya as a couple, you still managed to capture both of their characters beautifully.

He seemed so immensely normal that moment. My normal, a normal person's normal.

...This line really got me. I like how you've presented the entire idea surrounding 'nomal' through this OS. Your normal could be different from mine. What is 'normal' in the sense of the word? That is psychology all over. =P

One request though, you had this happening from Piya's POV. Could you do one from Abhay's POV?

I would really like to read that.

Once again, good job done!

Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: 0o.Leah.o0

Excellently written. Rarely do I see a FF where the feelings are captured so beautifully.

Its amazing how you managed to write all that in a beautiful flow.

For some very odd reason I loved this line of yours - My normal, a normal person's normal.

Incredible.

Leah

Originally posted by: -Humaira-

OMG, that was beautifully written! 😳

It had some awesomely explained emotions.

We have some.. not some...MANY brilliant writers here! 😃

Originally posted by: DulceAmor

Hey Kanky, thanks for the PM. Though I stopped watching PKYEK ages ago, this was really good and i thoroughly enjoyed it. You made Abhay seem so mysterious and captivating and you expressed Piya's attraction to him really well. You have a good knack for characterisation. You should be proud of this piece.

Originally posted by: Julybaby22

aawhh that was really well written 👍🏼

kanks it was awesome

i love the way you use words to describe things.....

Originally posted by: arti_4ever

kanks it was awesome

i love the way you use words to describe things.....

Originally posted by: Ritz93

You know what Kanky, there should be a love button on the IFs. I just loved it. Beautiful expressions, beautiful capture of feelings, beautiful thoughts. Just amazing. I re-read the whole thing today to write the comments.