Kasamh Se FanFic 4 Jai & Bani Updated!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi ppl well i am new to this forum 😃
but a very huge fan of kasam se especially mr walia!
this is my second fan fic which i am writtin the first one i wrote in kaisa yeh pyaar hai forum😛

so here it goes i will start from where jai marries bani and holdes her hand and grabs her from the mandap after the marrieage is over😭

jai grabs bani in his car and goes away after some time he stops his car in some dark place where there is no one except both of them 😉
jai comes out of the car and tells bani to come out aswel ,as bani comes out he starts shouting at bani saying
jai--bani yeh kya mazak hai pia kaha hai
bani is speech less as she herself dont know where she is?😕
jai-- bani mein janta hu tumhe pata hai pia kaha hai
bani in slow voice --mein nahi janti woh kaha hai
jai becomes very angry and at the same time feeling very sad
then he holds bani close to him and says(in very caring and calm voice)
jai--bani mein janta hu ke tum pia ko bohot chahti ho lekin mein bhi usse bohot zyada pyaar karta hu tum please mujhe batawo woh kaha hai
bani looks at jai with tears in her eyes and says
bani--mr.walia mein nahi janti woh kaha hai mein sirf itna janti hu ke woh iswaqt hum sab ko chhorke chaligayi hai 😭
jai becomes very angry and says in very loud voice to bani
jai--mein pia ko dhund ke rahunga agar woh meri na hosaki to woh kisi aur ki bhi nahi hogi
bani is shock ,then jai goes back in his car and waits bani to sit as bani sits in the car jai drives the car strait to his home 😊
where everyone is waiting for them as they enter in the house dadi comes to welcome the new bride as dadi does the arti stuffs jai stops her and says ke apki bahu pia bhag chuki hai 🤢
everyone is shock as everyone is thinking if pia has run away then who is the bride with jai as she has covered her face with the duppatta
then jai himself openss the duppata and everyone is shock and speechless by seeing bani as the bride 😳

ok till now this is it i will continue it tomorrow
so plzz do wait for tomorrow to see what happens next in jai's rooms ooppss jai and bani's room😉


do tell me if u liked it or not

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks divya!!!!!!!! 😊
very well written- 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a kasamh se fanfic! i luv it so far cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u all for liking it i wil surely continue it tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW i loved it , its AWESOME yaar ......PLZ continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!! That was really good con't soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Divya

THAT was actually really good

Please do continue with pleasure.....I like the way you handled the scene btwn Jai and Bani.[in some dark place.....😉😆}

Love KP

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i didnt know that ppl would like it that much
i will just continue it in some time
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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recap-- jai openss the duppata and everyone is shock and speechless by seeing bani as the bride 😛

jai just walks off to his room leaving bani in the entrance bani is in tears as she is about to tell the whole story but jigyasa stops her and she herself tells everyone what happned with adding lots of rrich masala in it😡

everyone just leaves from there after hearin what jiyasa said only jigyasa and rano(she iust came to find bani there as she was missin but she listned what jigyasa said)😭

jigyasa then tells rano to take her sister to her room as no one is interested in welcome her sister in the house as bani and rano starts walkin jai calls bani's name from the stairs😉 and says
jai--bani kahi nahi jayegi ,by listnening this jigyasa is about to say sumthin but jai stops her and says that its his house and he will decide who will stay where.👏then he just says bani to come upstairs as he is waiting for her😳

jigyasa is red in anger but she cant do anythin so she just goes off to her room .😈
then rano wipes bani's tears and tells her to go upstairs saying jo hogaya usse bhuljao di ,bani goes upstairs slowly and a bit confused as she dont know in which room she has to go .
as she was about to enter in one room she saw jai openin the room door for her.she is very afraid to even enter in the room of mr.walia,but she enters in the room very frighten,
then jai tells her that -meine tumhe sirf apne room mein jaga di iska yeh matlab nahi ke mein pia ko maaf kardunga .mein pia ko kahi se bhi dhundluna aur usse aapne iss akman ka badla le kar rahunga😕
by sayin this he goes off to his bathroom for changin his clothes(as he weared heavy sherwani) bani is very upset as tears flow from her eyes continuously, she then sits near the mirror and starts takin off her jewelleries where se thinks of all the happy moments with her sisters and how she married jai😔
then jai comes out of the bathroom and sees bani in tears takin off her jewelleries then bani also sees jai from the mirror then jai goes near the bed and takes one pillow and goes to sleep in sofa which was in their room 😲
bani just watches jai doing this she doesnt utter a single word and goes to sleep in the bed.😃
in the morning
bani is all deck up wearing heavy sari she was just about to put sindoor on her forehead when she saw jai wakin up and jai also saw bani first as she was lookin very beautiful😉 but after some time he just
went to the bathroom for the bath and bani went down to get some tea for jai as she was comin back to her room with tea she sees jai comin out of the room as bani is about to say sumthin jai tells her that i am gettin late for the office see u at the office.after sayin this he just goes off😔
bani is sad and upset as she is about to go for the work sahil comes and tells her that jai uncle has left one car and driver for her which will take her for the hotel and will bring her back from the hotel after the hotel work is done
bani just nods her head and goes off😳

ok this is it till now

will conitnue it soon😃

do tell me how was it 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEy Nice JOb Once again

Keep it up

Will definitely be awaiting the nest part

Love KP

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