Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) - Page 18

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thanx for postin !! will wait for d continuation !!
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thank you su! please finish when you are feeling awake.
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Sunainaji

Your story is not.......................................................................😔

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Shravan stood just behind Sachi . His hands ruffled though her hair. He lifted two-three stands so that her white silky neck and and back were revealed. He unpinned her hair and put the gardenia clasping it with a hair clip to Sachis hair. He immesed his face into the black msytery of Sachis hair breathing in the mixed fragrance of gardenia and her hair .
"Shravan ji aap bhi na" Sachi said shyly .
They walked in sillence towards the Doctors cottage . Sometimes silence is more desirable than constant chatting.
Welcome back Mr, Shravan Jaiswal?," Hemant was on the steps .
"Hello Sachi - you must be very very happy!!!"
Sachi smiled and winked naughtily.
Shravan was feeling a bit uncomfortable witnessing hoe so close with Hemant.. He did not want to share Sachi 's laughter and smile with another person. Sachi should only laugh at his jokes.
"Shravanjo aap aankhken bandh ki jiye " Sachi quipped .
"Kyun?"
"Ki jiye na"
"ok, ok"
Shravan closed his eyelids as sachi held his hand and led him insode the house.
" Ab aap aankhen khuliye"
As shravan opened his eyes only one word came out from his mouth .
"Tara "
He closed his eyes tightly once again and reopend them . He thought it was an illusion but it was not .
Tara was in front of him sitting in a wheel-chair. She was much paler than before and there were dark shades beneath her eyes. But she looked beautiful in a pink dress and her smile was much softer.
"Tara tum yah..."
Shravan was interrupted by Hemant.
"Shravan , meet Mrs Hemant Ahuja "
Shravan was so much overwhelmed by this unexpected meeting that he could not speak . He looked back to see Sachi still smiling.
Shravan , as usual sought for Sachis help to face the situation.
" Shravanji , main jab Tara ji ko yahan pehli bar dekhi , main bhi aise chauk gayi thi "
She walked towards Tara and held her hands.
Tara looked up at Sachi thankfully and said ," Shravan , sach me sachi mujhe bahut help karti hai"
"Let us go to the dining room, dinner is ready ." Hemant announced.
All through the dinner time Shravan was quiet and hardly commented . Hemant was telling about how he had met Tara for the first time in medical school and fell in love. He was 2 years senior to her and helped her in her study. But he never told Tara that he loved her. so they did not keep any connection when he graduated and followed the career of psychiatrist in Delhi. As he came to Mussorie , his dad - a friend of Prataap Jaiswal wanted him to marry Sachi . So Hemant and Sachi met when Sachi told him about Shravan and how she would never leave Shravan . During that time Tara was also in Mussourie and they met once again . Within six months they got married but unfortunately pregnancy and child birth had left Tara traumatized and bedriddem . Since then Sachi had helped them to take care of the baby.
Soon the dinner was over . Sachi and Shravan said good-bye to the Ahujas. Shravan drove Sachi to her cottage. Before Sachi got down from the car, she patted Shravans hand and looked at him . She found Shravns eyes not looking at her but far away .
What was shravan thinking . Had not he forgotten Tara ?
Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago
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Su why r u writing in bits and pieces? its killing me😔
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What was shravanji thinking ?
Had not he forgotten Tara ?
Does he still have feelings for her ?
Is he sure he wants me back?
Such questions kept Sachis mind busy while she unlocked the door. She had expected shravan to follow her but he did not . He had backed the car and driven away without even saying a proper goodbye to her. Her eyes filled up with tears. She threw her purse on the table hard that it dropped to the floor.
She could not stop the sobs that shook her whole body . She threw herself on the bed and cried her heart away .
All these two years , she had waited and waited and waited for this day when once again she would see shravan , have him beside her , feel him, touch him .
But he is again gone . Sachi was not even sure that he woud come back .
Shravan was driving basedt on his reflexes as his attention was somewhere else. He was as if in a trance - sleep-driving through the roads of his home city .
Mr. Shravan was handsome , rich, powerful , has a good sense of humour and kind at heart - what every woman desires.
But he had never messed up with any women except for two .\
Tara and Sachi .
For few years both of them were out of his life and he never even thought about women. His only passion was to prove to the world, to his family, to his dad that "Shravan can also be someone in this mean world"
And now - he was here facing both the women in his life within a couple of hours.
He did not know whatt he wanted to do.
Laugh?
Cry?
Dance?
Sing?
Shout?
or
Make love?
He only knew that he wanted to get lost somewhere .
He only knew that he wanted to feel the warmth of that love and understanding that he he had missed these two years.
He only knew that he had to go back.
Scre-eeee-eeeeeeeee-eeeee-ch!!
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The car stopped suddenly and swiveled as Shravan pressed the brake hard and turned the car.
Exhausted from the surprises, hopes and despair of the day , Sachi had given herself away to the solace of all miseries, natures own balm to heal our wounds - sleep. She had forgotten to lock the door behind her. So she did not know when someone had entered her room, locking the door behind him , came towards her and lay beside her , taking her into his arms and planting kisses all over her face . In her sleeping trance , sachi also hugged him closer and rubbed her face on his cheek before giving away her lips to the seeking lips of his .
Shravan knew that all this time - he wanted to do something he had never done before.
He wanted to make love.
He wanted to make love to his wife
He wanted to make love to Sachi..
Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago
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😕😕 why is shravan thinking about tara now??? 😲😲

su you told that saavan consummation will be the next part in mr.jay story... hav u changed your mind??
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Posted: 15 years ago
GADDHA!! Tara is married with a kid, forget her.

Su continue please!!!
Edited by momma1128 - 15 years ago
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awwww su... thanx for the pm.. please update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sunaina02

continue -18

He wanted to make love.
He wanted to make love to his wife
He wanted to make love to Sachi..

Thank you for updating Su!

FINALLY! Man up Shravan and get down to business or you will self combust!

Keep going please!!!

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