Poem:: Sunset's Whisper!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: marisol45

that was a beautiful poem sharmila

nowhere close to horrible

loved reading it😊

thanx a lot for the pm

maria.

Originally posted by: Pianofied.

Lol, you are so not a horrible writer... this poem is beautiful. I liked this line the most: They'll frown a humble hue

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

well in dat case tiny lil slap for u from dis side....😆😆
dont u dare call urself horrible cz ur not.....

plss write one on my darlin premeer...😉 im gonna imagine them in watever u write anyways so 😆😆 its ok but plsssss write something for them

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

*Ouch* The slap effect! ... 😉 😆

Ok Nadini Di.... will find another adjective! 😛

Sure... will write more.... Have an idea in mind.. So.. will be updating soon!!

Originally posted by: -Aish-

Resvd!

*Edited*

OMG Such a huge comment!! ... Thanks a ton Aishu!!

Sharmi Di, Sunset's Whisper is one of the BEST poems I've EVER read, you get that?

Yes dear.... I totally get that !! 🤣 (How well I lie under pressure!! 😆)

Point number 2, you say you're a horrible poet and I say I love your poem. Does that make me a person with bad choice? I don't think so. Raise your self-esteem, di. It's very important. I realised that because I don't possess that.

Totally agree wid you on this one!!

Point number 3, you're a wonderful poetess, and I want you to realise that, and SOON! Puh-leez stop thinking that every work of yours is going to invoke criticism, cuz you're good at what you do, you see?

Even great poets await criticism.. not that I'm great ... but I do have a chance to improve na?

Point number 4, I really wanna slap the person who told you are a bad writer. I mean, that's pretty rude of that person. And I think he or she is going to get it from me, REAL BAD. *Angry, VERY angry*

Gosh, why do all of u want to slap me?... Pehle Nadini Di.... and now even you!

I loved this line in the poem. 'They'll frown a humble hue'. It was the most profound line, according to me.

Please continue writing, POETESS DI. I love your style of writing. It makes me want to read more and more..

Love ya loads,

(Missing you)

Aishwarya

Thankz for this wonderful comment! .... Will pakka continue!

Miss you loads too! 😕

<3 <3 <3

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

Yes dear.... I totally get that !! 🤣 (How well I lie under pressure!! 😆) You shouldn't lie. That's BAD! 😭

Gosh, why do all of u want to slap me?... Pehle Nadini Di.... and now even you! So you're criticizing YOURSELF? Weird! 😆