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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

A Big HUG to dolly🤗 mere os corner pe char chand lagane k liye

Hello Guys 🤗 how r u all?? hope u all r doing good. U guys dnt know me as im not a FF writer & honestly I dnt think this is wht I cn do well but im here with an one shot & that's only bcos of dolly18 aka our doll🤗 who is not only a gr8 siggy maker but also an amazing FF/SS writer 😳this is my 1^st attempt to write something & that's only for dolly so if u find it useless then pls forgive me & blame dolly for this 😆

Banner Credit one & only dolly🤗 my dollu ~A Dream Wedding ~ (Sajan OS) finally the day has arrived for which we hv waiting for long..we lost our mother in very young age & after her death I tried to raise my lil sis as a mother, love & care her as a friend & her wedding day is kind a dream of mine & cnt believe tht she agreed to get married & its her wedding day thinking about it Nupur Bhushan Sharma remember how they make Gunjan Bhushan her little sister make agree for her marriage Flashback Y not gunjan?? Nupur saying lil angrily. Now its high time u should u should forgive samrat.. Mayank : I agree with Nupur Gunjan you both love each other sooo much then y u r making distance?? Gunjan: Di &jiju who told u I didn't forgive samrat? & y I would forgive if he didn't do any mistake its me who did all the mistakes its me who punished him for 3 long years for a mistake which wasn't his fault.. Saying this gunjan broke into tears & fall in the ground . I was about to go to hold her but mayank stop me& asked me to look samrat was there to hold his chashmish & make her stand. gunjan was unable to meet her eyes with samrat but samrat make her to see into his eyes Samrat wiping gunjan's tears from so many days I was thinking where I went wrong y my chashmish is angry with me??& today I got to know she is not angry with me but with herself "in 3 salo mein jo dard mujhe mila usse kahi jiada dard mujhe aaj ho raha hai. please chahmish dnt do this to us dnt blame ur self it wasn't ur fault if I would b in ur place I might do the same so please forget everything jst start a new life(holding hands) Gunjan: u hv a big heart so u cn forget everything easily but im not like u & I dnt deserve u(crying) Samrat : yes u dnt deserve me bcos u own me chashmish. im all yours & will b till the end of my life Gunjan cant control her emotions anymore so she jst hugged him tightly so that no one cn separate them Clearing our throats we were the 2 to interrupt them, then mayank start Samrat gunjan ye tum kia kar rahe ho hum abhi bhi yehi hai kuch to sharam karo Samrat jst glare at him but didn't say anything then we all start laughing on that night samrat sit on his knees & propose his chashmish in filmy hero style & this time it was YES!!!! there was no bounding of our happiness & it was decided after 3 days it ll b the wedding day - - - - - - - End of the flashback After fixing the mang teeka of her sister nupur bent to her side &look at the mirror saying :just perfect!! By god looking beautiful kisi ki nazar na lage wh'ile saying this nupur put a kala tika on the back of her sister's ear. On down stair Mr.shergel was getting impatient to see a 1^st look of his bride Mayank could sensed it so he was consoling him saying " Dude have patient,savar ka fal meetha hota hai ,hearing this samrat felt lil shy & smiled a little.Intezaar khatam hua as nupur bring the bride & with a one glimpse of her samrat get lots in her beauty those eyes which are looking little nervous, she could feel her heartbeats & can understand her condition as he was also feeling the same Ankhiyan Milaike Channa Aavi Na Judai Veee Gunjan is coming downstairs there r mix feeling that seen in her face she was happy & also lil nervous unable to meet her eyes with samrat who was staring at her siting in the mandap Tare Hai Barati,Chandani Hai Yeh Barat Nupur make gunjan sit beside samrat Saatho Fere Honge Abb Haatho Mein Lekar Haath Samrat hold Gunjan's hand & now she is looking into his eyes Jeevan Saathi Hum Diya Aur Baati Hum None of them speak but their eyes were talking all the time Re Jeevan Saathi Hum Diya Aur Baati Hum There was lots of happiness & dreams in their eyes which they ll live through this wedding Tare Hai Barati,Chandani Hai Yeh BaratSaatho Fere Honge Abb Haatho Mein Lekar HaathJeevan Saathi Hum Diya Aur Baati Hum Tare Hai Barati,Chandani Hai Yeh Barat Now the priest ask to stand & take the 7 phera's Ganaga Jamuna Se Bhi Pawan Tere Mera BandhanTera Prem Phoolwari Aur Mera Prem Hai AganJanmo Janmo Ka Hi Sajni Tere Mera SaathSaatho Fere Honge Abb Haatho Mein Lekar HaathJeevan Saathi Hum Diya Aur Baati Hum While doing this phera's they were also taking the vows they promised to keep till the end of there life Tu Hai Jeevan Mein Jo PreetamAur Nahi Mangu Duja Samrat put sindor in gunjan's forehead & tied the mangalsutra she close her eyes to feel this precious moment Arthi Teri Karthi Hoon Man Se Teri PoojaMein To Dharm Hi Samjhu Teri Kahi Hui Har BaatSaatho Fere Honge Abb Haatho Mein Lekar HaathJeevan Saathi Hum Diya Aur Baati Hum From Now samrat is belongs to gunjan & gunjan is belongs to samrat no wan can part them away from each other Seeing her sister's happiness nupur cant control her tears to fall, resting her head on her husband's shoulder she said "Just Perfect" hearing this mayank gave her a big grin & said jst like us

Edited by -Liana- - 15 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

A beautiful banner thanks to dolly🤗 ---------------------------------------------

OS Title Page No.

1. A Perfect Wedding(Sajan OS) 1

2. A Perfect Life (Mayur/Sajan OS) 5

3. When I Met You(PremEer OS) 8

4.Love Is In The Air (PremEer/MayUr/SaJan)Part-1 10

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Dolly18 Shareen Ashlesha09 Waqas... rkmnsg Januable_sajan Additi10 Cute_eyes SM_317 Kiely hiiiiiiiiiii SaJan_Sana4ever nanditasingh Ashpush Tanya.dsouza ridi_onasis
if u want PM regarding my os update then pls press the like tab,if any1 in the list dnt want pm then kindly inform me

as my friends encourage me i hv dcided to torture u guys with some of my of my OS 😆 here ll b the Index & PM list😆

Edited by -Liana- - 15 years ago

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WAQAS...

@Waqas...

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Posted: 15 years ago

1st OS😲... Liana !!!

Okay Time To Unreserve...

First One to Comment 🥳🥳🥳🥳

By God Liana !!! Your First OS is Wonderful... 👏👏👏

Loved it...

You should Write More OS...

i was shocked at first, liana and OS... You did Wonderful Job Dear !!!😃

Now you have become Multi-Talented, Siggy Maker and OS Writer !!!

Writing i think is more difficult then Siggy Making, you did great job...

Thanks for the PM...

Edited by Waqas... - 15 years ago

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

re * edited*

awwwwwwwwwwww liana u r such a sweet heart na i tell u

n this os is small n yet soo beautiful so peaceful by god was seeing everything form my eyes u know???

the song n all those scenes with the song in the bg

hai marjawan gudh khake

amazing

aww liana mein vaise bhi kal k episode k baad itni zyada emotional huyi huyi hun

n after reading this

i am just

speechless

n by god dunno why but after reading it again now i dont feel irritated an angry as b4(u know i hate being busy😆isiliye was highluy irritates haa haa)

but now i am totally at ease

n this os is the most special one for me till date😳

lov u liana u r awsome girl

n simply amazing😛

n the best thing about u is k u put so much care n dedication in everything u do

whether they r ur mind blowing siggies or the first short story u have written

n teri isi dediction pe mein fida hun jana 😳

n banner pasand karne k liye thanks

pata nahi i wanted to make the most beautiful one for u

yeh ban gaya😆

but agar tujhe pasand hai so i am on the top of the world

hope u write many many many stories more😛

badiiiii saaariiiiiiiiiiiiii muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😳😳😳

teri

doll😳

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Liana!!!! ur first os!!! omg! n that also on sajan

luv u!

Res!!!

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Liana!! ok firstly toh thanks to dolly for forcing u to write an os

n bring ur one more talent front of us

n this os was simply amazing

i was imagining each n every scene..the song sequence was beautiful

n u showed the sisterly bond of gunur beautifully yaar

don't u ever say that u r not a good writer..k??

ur creations r fab n now ur writing talent has also been shown

sooo do write more os na!! will be waiting for ur pm

u completely rock liana!! 👍🏼

n thnx for the pm

luv

debo😳

Edited by Januable_Sajan - 15 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18
i edited janu muahhh

i hv read the edited 1 & ll give a big reply now go FF creation corner hv something for u😳

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

done that janu muahhhhhhhh

hai by god juts lov uu meli angelll

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18
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awwwwwwwwwwww liana u r such a sweet heart na i tell u

n this os is small n yet soo beautiful so peaceful by god was seeing everything form my eyes u know???

the song n all those scenes with the song in the bg

hai marjawan gudh khake

amazing

aww liana mein vaise bhi kal k episode k baad itni zyada emotional huyi huyi hun

n after reading this

i am just

speechless

n by god dunno why but after reading it again now i dont feel irritated an angry as b4(u know i hate being busy😆isiliye was highluy irritates haa haa)

but now i am totally at ease

n this os is the most special one for me till date😳

lov u liana u r awsome girl

n simply amazing😛

n the best thing about u is k u put so much care n dedication in everything u do

whether they r ur mind blowing siggies or the first short story u have written

n teri isi dediction pe mein fida hun jana 😳

n banner pasand karne k liye thanks

pata nahi i wanted to make the most beautiful one for u

yeh ban gaya😆

but agar tujhe pasand hai so i am on the top of the world

hope u write many many many stories more😛

badiiiii saaariiiiiiiiiiiiii muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😳😳😳

teri

doll😳

Awwww dolly🤗 u knw na ur comments really means alot love u too & i wrote it only 4 u na??otherwise me & writing?? ha mujhe simple rakhna para bcos dnt want to make it complicated aur about lenght i though one shot thor chota hoga to achha hoga😆 but im xtremely happy tht u loved it yaar u knw whenever i imgine sajan's wedding mere dil mein yehi song play hota ehta hai so its a dream to play as bg song in sajan's wedding & yes i really loved the banner & tujhe remake karneki zaroorat nehi & dnt b sad u ll get another chance to make me a banner 😉 u knw ll write another os but after ur semi gets over

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WAQAS...

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Posted: 15 years ago

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shareen

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Liana!!! 🤗 🤗 An OS from u!!! 🥳
I am on cloud 9 after seeing dat u've written something...Very very happy tht u gave the writer in u another chance and brought out dis talent in front of every1...
I'd been lucky enough to read one shot by u abt 2/3 years back which was on premeer and since then i always loved the simplicity and beauty of ur imagination....

And i dont know if many ppl know that u r BRILLIANT at writing poems too!!...
Yes i knw i'm leaking ur secrets nw! 😆 U can hit me later! 😆
Ur hindi poems r undoubtedly one of my fav ones!..Words rhyme beautifully n they just have some kind of magic in them!!!...

Now tht u've given OS writing a try again it's my humble request to u too brush up ur poetic skills as well as u'll do wonders!!! U r an awesomely tanlented girl..Multi-talented wud b the right word!..Not just an amazing sig maker,gud writer bt a great SINGER as well!!..oops did i leak another secret just now? 😆 Sorry! hehe...Bt seriously every1 SHUD know abt this talent too!!...U knw tht i'm just completely fida over ur voice n ur songs 😍 *puts kala tika* 😆

Now Coming to dis OS!..1stly perfect concept!!Sajan wedding!!!..Something dat's so speacial for each one of us who love sajan and always dreamt of it!..loved hw the story went into flash back and then into present situation..

We cud actually connect wid Sajan n their emotions dat u described..The simplicity of it toched my heart...Beautiful attempt wid the song while describing the moment...too BEAUTIFUL!..SO wish we see a beautiful wedding like dis...I'm awestruck by the last line where they mayank said just perfect like us..Dat was so cute!!...

I was smiling throughout while reading it and u've done a great job dear!!..As an initial attempt dis is fantastic...and I'll b eagerly looking forward to more OS from ur side and wud love to see u grow as a writer..U'll rock dear!!..Luv u a lot!!..🤗

And the banner by dolly is simply Mesmerizing!!!...Really love love it!! and thanks for making liana write again! 😃

Edited by shareen - 15 years ago