New poem on Raga-Once more in love....

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  • It was like .......... I suffered in hundred years of grief. Pain and fury that was all in my life. My heart was red, So, profusely I bled. To Pihu, all the things that I said, For them, though sorry I so dearly paid. Pihu left, Gauri came, softly she held my hand, Gave me her warmth, fulfilled all my demand. No body cared for me, so for them ,why should I care ? The only thing, that my life has , is a friendship truly rare. Who chooses our true mate? Is he God, or is he fate ? Is every thing really predestined ? Is she my friend , or is this true love, Walking by my side though the road's rough. Speak out, destiny, what's really in your mind ? Is she connected with my by your invisible chain ? My Sangini by chance , who says love can't happen again ? .........Sanjog se bani Sangini, Kaun kaheta hai ki pyar doobara nahi hota .......... P.s. 😎 This is another one, very close to my heart. Wrote it just now, earlier had lost a lot of poems due to my own carelessness, so posted it in a hurry. Read , feel, dream, soak in the magic that is Rudra-Gauri love epic. I'll be most glad , if you give me your feedbacks. Thank you.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow this poem is so lovely. I love it. and my favorite line in your poem love can happen again sanjog se bani sangini. aww that's so sweet. yes love can happen again. for me too. 😍
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Originally posted by: Artemis678

wow this poem is so lovely. I love it. and my favorite line in your love can happen again sanjog se bani sangini. aww that's so sweet. yes love can happen again. for me too. 😍

Thank you, Nici. Last time also, you're the first one to see it , n comment on it. 🤗
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Again very wll written.And it touched my heart.Really beautiful.
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Originally posted by: -JONAKI-

Mac-You are multi talented.

Hugs n kisses to my Jo. Jo tumi khub bhalo, tomake ami tai khub bhalobashi.🤗
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Originally posted by: OrientalDancer

Again very wll written.And it touched my heart.Really beautiful.

Thank you, buddy.🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww mac. 👏 👏
Its a great poem. So touching. So sweet.
Really awesome!!
Can't wait to read more poems by you!!
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Originally posted by: rkath

Aww mac. 👏 👏
Its a great poem. So touching. So sweet.
Really awesome!!
Can't wait to read more poems by you!!

Thank you so much for your appreciation n encouragement. I'm a very humble writer. It matters a lot to me when my friends appreciate my work.😳
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Thank you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMacbeth

Hugs n kisses to my Jo. Jo tumi khub bhalo, tomake ami tai khub bhalobashi.🤗

Lady M... tumi kintu bangla te likhe ke mone karo ke amra bhujite paribo noi...!!!! Khub bhalo bhujite pari..
Lady M tumi satti khub hi bhalo likhe chho aamar khub bhalo legeche... Akhon aami office te acchi kintu badi te giye details likhibo.. Dhanyabad tomar talent je tumi share kare cho

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