Maine Pyaar Kiya : Nothing can come between You an

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I am no good writer..but had some good thoughts with me.. ..and putting this through this series " Maine Pyaar Kiya".. Hope you all will like it..
This is the first one..
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Maan had just entered Indian Paints office.. First thing he wanted to see was Geet's face,, to assure himself that she is still around.. He is so used to her being in his life, he cannot think of single day with out her.. He waited eagerly for her to come to his cabin.. but where is she.. He could not control himself.. he rang her.. no response.. he felt restless.. straight way to her cabin.. She was not there.. He saw PandeJi coming.. "where is Geet ? Is she in ? " Yes,, she must be in washroom...

Maan waited for her to come out.. but why she is taking so much time.. why she is not coming out.. He couldn't control.. he entered.. inside.. where is she.. ? He couldn't see her.. heard her voice.. To Whom she is talking ..? Here in this place..this girl... He followed her voice... her voice becoming more clearer.. Still he was not able to see her.. Then suddenly he saw her.. seating on the bench there.. talking to whom ? He could see her back only.. who is there ... He was curious and verry jealous....Maan can hear more clearly now...

Geet was seating on the bench,,, with legs folded and one hand on her stomach.. she can now feel the baby... her only companion, her life.. ..the only one with whom she could share all her thoughts, all her pains.. ''' I promised you I will never let anyone come in between us.. not even me.. But then I forgot my promise.. I thought Maan ne hum donoko dil se apnaya hain... aur main sab bhool gaye.. aur dekho kya ho gaya... Lekin ab maine sabak liya hain..Ab hamare bich koi nahin aayaga ...I will not let anyone come between us.. Aur tumahri mummy.. tumhare liye sab sahegi.. Maan ke jyadatian bhi.. Main aise himmat nahin haar sakti.. Agar main himmat haar gayi.. to main tumhe is duniya main kaise laoongi.. " and she cried loudly... For last few days.. her life was like a hell.. she didn't have any one. to share her grief.. and she felt all pain coming out.. Last time she remembered she has cried so loud was when she had burnt her marriage clothes..

Maan .. completely stunned.. He wanted to go and hold her in his arms.. but then he felt so guilty.. He couldn't dare to go in front of her.. She didn't remembered her promise.. but what he has done.. He forgot all his promises; about his responsibilities... and he is stressing her so much.. He felt like hell,, and came out..

He wanted some time to think on what he is doing.. what he wants to prove to Geet.. she cannot live without him.. ? or he cannot live with out her.. He had won her with so much persuation.. She was not ready to commit.... but he forced her..to confess her love.. and now he is letting his ego come between them.. Just to prove his point,,, Why don't he let her go...and he assured himself ... If she feels for me.. she will come back to me.

He saw her coming out.. he called her.. She came.. her eyes were red and he could feel the pain .. He wanted to punish himself for that,, but he controlled...

"Geet.. for next few days.. I will be busy with KC.. You can send your reports to me everyday through Pandeji"'' and he left..

To be continued ..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice yaar continue soon😊 yesterday i was actually thinking there shud be a scene where Geet talks to her baby & Maan over hears her. well we didnt get it in the original show bt it was good 2 read it here😊
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Well written. Plz continue.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice..........👏 waiting for another part
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Its very nice dear.... Do continue.....
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nice yaar plz do continue soon and add me tour pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi

like your thoughts .............. i was also thinking that cv should do something like this ............... proceed soon .thanks . pm me too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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liked it dear.....Nice start.....
Continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gud one yar...pls do continue...
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hey lady it was really touching i want them to include this scene

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