ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11) - Page 53

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Most probably tomorrow i may update guys............
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Originally posted by: suha_hasini



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U will update "MAY Be" tomorow??? Dear u hv'nt updated ths ff since so long n stil u hv doubt tat u may update tomorow, tats nt fair ,huh! Plz update asap we all r waitin eagerly.
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Definitely i'll post today.........even though im not satisfied with the update but for u guys im giving it.....but may be after 2hrs...........i just want to write some more............today pakka.............
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Guys im saying before only this part may be not as interesting as before updates but i tried my best......

Part 10

Maan's Pov

I opened my room door and looked it……. which is arranged beautifully the way it has to be decorated for a special night where two souls unite with love……….then my eyes landed on her who made emotions love, feelings everything a sport…….immense rage filled my body once again seeing the figure ………..seeing her all the sadness, all the trauma which I and my family went through came into my mind….. I would probably forgive her for what she did to me but my family... no ways...

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Flashback

'Its ok Maan but I have one condition……….?............' Sameera said seriously making everyone turn………..

'I will leave to NewYork tomorrow…..Please bauji don't stop me or say anything….and please Maan you too…..' ….'But Sam….' Maan was cut by Sam 'I can't stay here Maan please understand………I can't see my love marrying my sister…. why can't u all understand…..' she blurted her anger…'Please papa u have to agree for this condition…..And please everyone I beg u all don't try to stop me…..' Sameera said and rushed out of the room……..

Maan went out and stopped Sam 'Sam look at me…' he held her shoulders and turned her towards him..Sam instantly hugged him and sobbed in his arms……..he caressed her head to lessen the pain but she held him more tight and cried…….'Sam roo math I can't see u crying…please Sam don't…..' he said and wiped her tears….'I am sorry Maan….' She said and wiped her tears which are still flowing…..'that's like my Sam…..' she smiled faintly ….'Saju please don't leave us please….and I m sor…' Sam placed her palm on Maan's mouth and said ''Dnt be sorry for others mistake Maan….and please don't stop me if u really lov…..i mean if u really care for m….' before she complete Maan hugged her tight…….he felt guilty for making her cry and suffer for someone else mistake…but he couldn't do anything to reduce it…….now he hates Geet more than before…………

'Don't u want to ask why I am doing all this……?????' Maan asked Sam….

'NO……I won't….whatever u do i'm with you….if u dnt want us to marry then too im with u…….' both hugged….Maan 'thanks Sam for understanding…..'

Next day as said Sam left India and Maan Geet married next week………

Flashback Ends

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Maan looked at her with unending rage….she is the only cause for Sam's sorrow….i won't leave her……

He saw her sitting on his bed covered with veil…..She has no right on any of my things or on me…. but I have all the rights on her…………now I should show her how the hell looks like………no one can be in peace playing with Maan Singh Khurana……..so Mrs.Geet Maan Khurana lets c how ur going to survive with me………i'm sure u will see hell……i'm not Maan Singh Khurana who loved cared melted for Geet the princess but Maan Singh Khurana who will make life hell for Geet the Backstabber…………

Manaotho padega Geet ur one hell hot girl I had ever seen………..u look perfect with exact curves……….so lets Start the game in my style…. Maan Khurana Style………..its totally hell for u and heaven for me……….and Geet I promise you one thing that u will pay for every tear u gave to me and my family……………….

I came to her side and kept my head on her lap……….Knowingly or unknowingly my head touched her stomach and felt her stiffen……..i know my effect on girls Geet is no special to deny it…………..i started rubbing my face on her stomach making her each and every muscle stiff with endless pleasure………….she is melting in my arms………I kissed her navel sensuously I know im loosing into her……….she is jus awesome…….

Then I heard her saying 'Maaannnnn…….pl…plssss…….leav….leave mee mee…..'…..i kissed her more passionately by digging my face into her stomach after hearing her please……I seriously want to make her hell……I want her to plead me like never……… 'Why???? ur not liking it Geetttt….?????hmmmmmm' i asked and kissed her navel sensuously……..'but im loving it Geeett……….and u know I love ur skin on my lips …….' I slowly got up and looked into her eyes which are fully filled with fear…….i like her eyes now……I saw her trembling lips which are inviting and making jump in my heart………..suddenly I felt her hand raise to my cheeks and caress them………that's it everything faded my revenge my anger my hate……..and kissed her hand which is on my cheek and pulled her towards me and kissed her cheek desperately……

I saw her closing her eyes enjoying my kisses…….it made me feel good…….i kissed her closed eyes……and then my lips caressed her chin then slowly went to her throat making both fell in the moment……I heard her moaning slowly which made me look at her lips……I saw her still with closed eyes……and kissed her at the end of her lips making her desperate for my kiss…….i saw her trying to catch my lips but I didn't touch her lips deliberately making her to beg him……..i saw her and smiled knowing well what she wants now…….

And kept my warm hand on her cold waist surface and started rubbing it sensuously…..and with other hand moved her hair to one side and pulled her blouse down exposing her bare shoulders and bite her shoulder passionately awaking her senses……..and pulled her blouse more down to kiss her flesh which is making me more and more wanting her……… I kissed her breast outside her top and caressed it softly and bite it which awakened her deeply and she moaned my name making me crazy for her………

Suddenly I came into my senses……Uggh what happened to u Maan Khurana ur loosing to her……..it shouldn't happen……….then I pushed her making her free from my arms……..i looked into her eyes and saw her craziness towards me..i smirked at her…suddenly causious about her blouse she adjusted and looked at me with confusion……..

I pulled her towards me harshly by catching her chin and said 'Nice to see u loose anything to me sweet heart but u are not worthy of it …………'..and pushed her nearly making her fall on the ground…………for some reasons I don't want to look into her eyes……may be I hate her more than ever…..because she made not only my family but her own family also suffer so much for her heartless game….

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Maan and Geet Pov

'Why did u marry me?? i know u don't love me and u also know that I..I don't love u then why this marriage…..tell me Maan why u spoiled my sister's life……..' she shouted…..but there is no reply……..'I know u just want to take revenge….but why r u making my parents and sister suffer for my mistake….' She asked Maan by gripping his collar……..

Maan held her wrist tightly which is on his collar and said 'Ur right I married u to take revenge…..and I want u to give life long hell for ur stupid prank on me Maan Singh Khurana…..u need to learn what u get in return for playing a prank on me..………..' he said while seeing into her eyes... he is so close to her as there noses are touching…..Geet tried to relase her hand from his grip but he held more tightly and said 'And about making ur family suffer is common Geet u made my family suffer so inreturn I played same with u and ur family……………'

'And Sam did nuthng wrong except being ur sister……….and marrying u giving u all the pain in the world is the only aim for me and that is my priority, for achieving my aim I don't care for anyone….' He said by pulling her hair back harshly making her moan with pain…..'Geet tumne mujhe bahuth takliff diya…..u have to pay for all the pain u have given……..u don't know what u got into……..and don't think u will win over me in anyway…..and i'm not interested in u nor in ur buk buk….now move down i'm sleepy…..' he said and went to closet to get his night clothes……he turned towards bed after taking his clothes 'why r u still on my bed….get away from it…..' he said and Geet looked at him like 'what he has gone mad or what….'…he came to her and held her shoulders and lifted her from bed and said 'this is my bed…….u better make ur bed on floor because I hate u on my bed with me….did u get it….'

'What the hell Mr.Khurana do u think I will sleep on floor….are u insane…….i think ur mad…..listen I can't sleep on floor and u better sleep on floor if u have any problem me sleeping with u on bed…..' she said in same tone…..'Oho so u want to sleep on my bed with me….smirk…..good that's what my charm is Mrs.Khurana….but I don't want u in my bed…I hate u……' he said smirking at her………..

'Yeah I too don't want to be in ur bed Mr.Khurana but I don't sleep on floor never…I mean I can't…' she said in frustrated tone thinking how much he is irritating on her first day then what will be later on……. J……….'Exactly u have to sleep on floor..and I know very well that u can't sleep on floor or any where except on a comfortable bed that's why I made this arrangement so that I can make ur nights more horrible without sleep for u…..by making u sleepless I can sleep happily..' he winked at her…….'U U….' she pointed her finger and shouted……'yes mee mee…..' he held her pointed finger and turned it and said 'Ahhh.leave my finger idiot….' She cried 'Goodd…now go and take ur bed from that corner and spread it on floor sleep……..actually Geet u have to thank me for giving u atleast bed……..' he smiled sarcastically……..

She looked at him angrily and looked at other side of room and asked 'There should be a couch here where is it????' she asked him…Maan smiled and said 'so u still remember everything about my house….good…and yeah couch used to be here….but not anymore I moved it into study room so that u can sleep on floor happily………' he smiled and moved towards washroom…..'I know u moved it so that I couldn't sleep on that also…ur idiot…moron….jerk……I hate u hate u…….' she shouted……..

Hearing her say that he turned to her and moved towards her fastly and held her and pinned her to wall and said 'Now u hate me because i'm giving u pain which is so negligible but what about the pain u gave me when u left my house without informing and the pain knowing that u fooled me all the time u are with me…..tell me Geet…. tell me……..' he shouted totally in aggressive tone………..she flinched in fear seeing his eyes blood red eyes…….somewhere in her heart she felt pain seeing him in pain………'do u know how much I searched for u and how much i cried for u….do u…know….' He said griping her wrist tightly on wall……'aaaaaa….' she creid in pain……then Maan saw her hands.... blood is oozing out due to his grip on her hand where the bangles crushed…he immediately released but gave deadly glare and went inside the washroom……..

She looked at her hand and winced in pain and looked at disappearing figure and cursed him under her breath once again and said 'What he is thinking about himself……how rude he is…he made me cry the first day of my marriage itself……and he also seen my blood…….great husband………and what he said I have to sleep on floor hmmm never……I will sleep on bed let him do what he want…….but I'll sleep on bed only…….' She said to herself and made comfort on bed and slept turning other side…………..

'Oyeeeeeeeee maaaaaaaaa……ahaaaa……..my butt……….mummyyyy…..' Geet screamed when she fell on the floor with thud……after composing her shrieks she looked at him…there he is smirking like idiot…….'tumne mujhe gira diya…..how dare u Mr.Khurana…..' she flared and asked him trying to get up but 'Ahhh its paining…..' and saw Maan laughing uncontrollably …..'Idiot he is smiling while i'm in pain..…..how cruel he pulled the bed sheet which is on the bed as a result I feel down….'Geet pouted while rubbing her butt……….

'Ur scream sound good Geet…it is music to my ears…..like that sound…can u once again scream..' he winked at her and saw trying to get up from floor but again fell back as she slipped…..'ahhhaaaa mummmmy…..' she cried one again making Maan happy………'Thanks sweet heart u really love me…….i just wished u too scream and u did it….ahaaa so sweet of u…..anyways I'll make sure that scream never end…..and I'll personal look after this job of making u scream in pain……..' he said last word seriously………

'I cant sleep on floor Maan……we will adjust on bed…….' She said pleadingly but didn't melt his heart and he said 'No….he said and covered himself with sheet…….'Maan please……' she said and tried to get on the bed……..he griped her wrist which she tried to put on bed and said 'Don't dare to sleep on my bed with me….i know u cant control my charm…….smirk…and soch na math Geet about sleeping on bed with me….. If I see u sleeping on my bed surely I'll make love to u…….i'm not warning but telling truth baby…' by saying he pushed her on floor and slept on his bed like king………….

Geet cursed him 'Duffer Moron Idiot Jerk………surely one day I will kill u…'…'Thank u sweet heart now will u shut ur mouth and let me sleep in peace…..she cursed him one more time and arranged her bed on floor and slept……..

'Ahaaaaa….' Geet screamed when she felt someone biting her neck and instantly she opened her eyes and there the Maan Khurana biting her neck and shoulder like she is bread……. 'What r u doing get off from me….' He didn't react for scream or shout in his ear…..but still keep on kissing her cheek and nibbling her ear lobe making her hiss…….'Maan plea….sss leave me…..' she tried to push him but he pinned her hands on bed and started nuzzling his lips on her throat making her totally uncomfortable………..'Maannnn pleaaaaaaaase…..' she said but 'I said that if u sleeps on my bed I'll make u mine and so i'm………' he said and kissed her cleavage passionately….

'If i m on ur bed u said u will do it but im on floo……..' she stopped in middle as she saw herself on his bed………'omg when I came in to bed….???' And thought how she slept on bed…..then remembered when she went to washroom in middle of night she returned and slept on bed as she always does in her house…….she totally forgot that she is in Maan's house and she has to sleep on floor as per king's order………'Maan seriously I for....got…in …sleep…next time it doesn't happen…please….leave me……' she spoke shakingly as his hands are snaking on her body touching each and every part……

But he didn't stop 'U know me Geet if I say something I'll do it….' And he kissed her stomach while still pinning her hands on bed…….'Ple…….please Maan im sorry '….'NO I wo………' he stopped when he saw her eyes welling up…then composing himself he said 'Last time……..next time if I see u on my bed then u can't stop me did u get it…' he huskily said and bite her ear lobe and rolled on his side…..she immediately sliped on her bed which is on the floor………

Next Morning

At 9 am

'Maan beta….Maan….' Naina knocked on door but both Raja n Rani didn't bug to open the door……'Maannn…..Maan…..' this time Naina literally shouted as they didn't peep out from there rooms after 9 also…..

Lazily Maan opened his eyes and rolled on the bed to see his wife who is sleeping like khumbkaran…..he traced his finger on her cheeks…'hmmm….u look so pure and innocent which is not u……..but still u look so innocent like my bachaa….why????' he said and traced his finger around her lips 'hmmm these are so tempting Geet cant control if ur my princess I would have feel everything of urs…..but ur not mine anymore ur just Geet Handa……….opps sorry dear u r Mrs.Geet Maan Khurana……' she blushed unknowingly when he parted her lips with his thumb….'Geet can't u become my princess…..no…u can't... I know because u are never my princess that's just an act to fool me……why u did dear…..hmmmm????' he asked unknowingly telling all his love which is held in him but revenge and hurt are covering his feelings……Mostly they are ruling him now…………and he slowly traced his finger from her nose to lips to chin to throat making her blush even more in her beauty sleep………….

Knock…knock…………

Maan came into senses when he heard knock on the door and shaked Geet hardly as he know Geet is heavy lazy sleeper in morning…..she never use to get up morning unless someone bugg her….he smiled thinking about her bacha……….'hmmmm maa let me sleep……' Geet said in sleepy tone…….'oho madam ji is thinking that she is in her home….' He said to himself and shook her hard but no use then he came near her ear and shouted 'Geeeeeettt snake on ur bed….' She instantly got up 'Kahaaaaa kahaa….' She said and jumped on her bed………'kaha Maan kaha snake…..tell me' he showed his finger down she didn't look at what he is showing she just saw his hand down that means on her bed then instantly she jumped on Maan's bed on to his lap and said 'Maan kahaaaa I cant see…and why are u sitting go n kill it…' she said…….

Maan just looked at her and at her madness…he smiled and said 'I think it may have died….i don't need to do any thing to kill it…….'….'how do u know it may have died…..tell me Maan….''because u jumped on bed like small elephant so it may have died for ur weight…'he said and smiled….'u mean that i'm fat…..how dare u say it…….i'm not fat I just put on 3kgs weight that also due to u duffer….thinking about ur idiotic marriage proposal….' She said still sitting on his lap keeping her both legs on either side of his waist….'Acha how is my fault if u put on weight…' he asked by circling his hand around her waist enjoying every moment with her…....he is seeing his princess once again……'because I worried about ur proposal…..and I started eating heavy to forget ur proposal and u…omg omg wait I think this is ur stupid paln to make me get up right…...' she said and Maan smiled listening to her words…Maan after many days smiling whole heartily…….

Geet just looked at him after many days she is seeing her best friend……….Maan used to be comfortable with only her……he had very less friends and he is not that comfortable with that few but with Geet he is very casuall very caring very lovable very mischievous…….

'I MISSED U MAAN…………..' she forget everything and kissed his cheek

Maan looked at her face lovingly……'Maan what ru doing?? its 9 beta……' he came into his senses and pushed her down on the floor…..'Ahhh Maan are u mad from yesterday night u pushed me to floor like 3 times…….' She complined and pouted………'So cute…' he said and hide his smile….'What…..' she looked at him……'nuthing…….just take the bed from the floor and keep it aside im opening door..' he said and moved towards door…'Oho aur ek drama….' She mutted and rolled bed and kept it under Maan's bed……

Maan opened door 'Finally opened the door beta…' Naina said and kissed Maan cheek and looked at Geet who is still on the bed sitting in her bridal wear…..'Ur still not yet ready……do u know whats the time is……' she asked in her angry voice……Geet is taken back by her question and her voice……Naina is always lovable with her but today she is yelling at her…….'What r u looking at Geet….after what u have done she would be obviously going to be angry with u……..but i'm sure I'll make maa and bauji smile again with me….i promise………but u Maan Khurana I won't leave u in peace……' she thought to herself and said and nodded her head and turned to washroom but stopped by Maan……

'Ok ma we both will be down soon……' he said and closed the door and called Geet 'Geet……..' she turned and looked 'hmmm….'

I forgot to tell u one thing……' he came towards her side and secretly told something in her ear…..'WHAT……………??NO WAY……..'

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Edited by suha_hasini - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Liked the part
Maan was loosing himself but got grip soon
Their nok jhok was fab
Naina is hell angry wit Geet
Lets c how Geet makes them smile
Now wat Maan said that she shouted agn
Maan making her fall down n Geet shouting was damn funny
Awesum
Update soon plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey

Why were you so worried? 😃 You are seriously your worst critic 🤗

This was a very good part. It is very logical. I think Maan is the more involved of the two because he genuinely loves Geet and now his feelings are all warped in this revenge stuff . Geet has no feelings for him. She just hates him. She is the more selfish of the two and misses the fact that he pampered her. Wonder what it will take for her to realize her love for him?

Poor Sam. She is the injured party in all this and I hope she finds someone to love in New York. Only then can Maan and Geet move forward.

Thanks for the PM
Jhan

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