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Posted: 15 years ago
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MANEET FANFICTION

TWILIGHT

(CHARACTER SKETCH)

MAAN:He is the typical example of an angry young man who is happy being aloof from the world. Maan doesn't talk much and prefers to keep his distance from everyone, especially girls.He is very handsome that's why girls attract to him but because of his anger,girls stay away from him.He is focused on his career.

GEET:She is 21 years old beautiful,educated girl.She lives a happy,cheerful life.She is bit immature.

CONCEPT

While coming back from Hoshiarpur,Maan is beaten by the bat on the arm and he becomes unconscious.When he comes to his senses,He finds a man who told him that he is actually bitten by the cursed vampire.From now onwards after every sunset he will become like vampire(Like edward in twilight).That person also told him that this curse can be ended.So how maan will end the curse????What will happen when he comes to know that the solution of his problem is related to a girl????Will he manage to break the curse in time???

POINTS TO BE NOTED:1:The story is same as of drama geet.

2:Actually maan is coming from Hoshiarpur after saving geet from brij.

3:All the other characters are same as in drama.

4:Maan looks will be same as in drama.

NOTE:I was watching twilight again yesterday.When an idea came to my mind.I know that it is kind of weird ff but i hope that u guys like it.If u like the concept.Plzzz leave ur comments so i will continue this ff.Otherwise sorry for taking ur time.

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NOTE:Soooooooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy *Holding my ears*.I don't have time for updating my fanfiction due to studies.Now i will update (if u like) on every weekend Inshallah.

I hope u guys like this.

TWILIGHT

Part 1

Maan was going back to Delhi in night.He had gotten late because he stayed at the hotel while coming from Hoshiarpur.Suddenly his car stopped with a jerk.He tried to start his car but no vain.

Maan(Angrily hits the steering wheel):Shit!!!!! Mujhe subha hone se pehle Delhi pohanchna hai because kal mere meeting hai aur yeh stupid car rook gaye rooke bhi tu iss weird sa jungle ka pas.Chalo torch se dekhta hoon ka kya problem hai.

He started to check his car.When he heard some noise.He had felt something weird.

Maan(Loudly): Anyone here?????Lagta hai koi janwar hai.I should be careful.

He saw something on his arm and that thing bited him.He had never felt that much pain before..

Maan(Shouted with pain and beated that thing):aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Get off me.

He couldn't handle the pain and before fainting a picture of a girl came infront of his eyes.

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Far from that place a girl was sleeping in the bus.She opened her eyes.

Geet:Kitna dorana khwab tha.Pata nahi aisa kyu lag raha hai ka koi dard main hai.Lagta hai ka kucch bura hone wala hai.............Tu bhi na geet aur kya bura hoga jo hona tha woh ho gaya.Ab tu sochna band kar.So ja kuch daar baad hum Delhi pohanch jayein ge.

She closed her eyes a boy's picture came infront of her eyes.she ignored it.

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Maan opened his eyes.He was still feeling pain but less than before.He started to get up but a person came to him.

Maan:Where am i?????Who r u?????

Person:Hi !!!! my name is Carlisle Cullen.As profession i'm a Doctor.I have found u in the forest.U were fainted so i have taken u to my home.

Maan:Thanxxx For help.Now i have to leave.

Carlisle:U can't go like this.I have to tell u something.

Maan:I have to go NOW.

Carlisle:U r not getting it.Its veryyy IMPORTANT.

Maan(Started to get up):Ok tell me.

Carlisle:U have to listen to me veryy carefully.U have bited by a bat.

Maan:So that thing was a bat.

Carlisle:That was not only bat.That was CURSED BAT.

Maan:What cursed bat?????

Carlisle:A cursed bat had bitten u.Now u r not like other people U have changed into a vampir.From today onwards after every night u will change into vampire.U can't sleep at night and also feel the same pain like at the time of biting.

Maan(Rolled his eyes):Nice one.Now may i leave.

Carlisle:Stop!!!!!U think that i'm joking.

Maan:I don't believe in these things.

Carlisle:I'm going to tell u the solution so that when u will get to know about it u know the solution of it.For breaking the curse the girl u fell in love must confess her love before next year's lunar eclipse and she should know that problem of urs.If it doesn't happen till next years lunar eclipse then u will become fully vampire means not only for nights.

Maan(Under his breath):Looks like dadi has hired him for getting me married or he is mad ... Curse on Maan Singh Khurana.Nice joke.(to Carlisle):Thanx for help now i have to go.

Carlisle:its ok son.I know u will believe me soon and i hope u will break the curse.BTW i have fixed ur car.

Maan thanked him and left.

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Geet had reached Delhi.Her friend Pinky and her father was there to pick her up.While coming to Pinky's house she was constantly thinking about her future life.She didn't want to become burden on them.She asked Pinky that what was she doing nowadays??

Pinky(While eating chips):Main aik company main receptionist hoon.Array kal tu mujhe jaldi company pohanchna hoga.Kal boss ke meeting hai aur woh office zaroor aayein ge aur kal tu interviews bhi hain na.

Geet:Interview????

Pinky:Haan kal boss ka liye scretary ka liye interviews hain.

Geet(While thinking something):Acha.

Geet thought that she would work in some office so that she wouldn't become burden for Pinky and her father.

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PRECAP:Geet goes to pinky's office.Maan to believe that he is vampire now.

Edited by pickachu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That topic has closed.
I have opened new one.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Twilight ! I thought you are talking about the movie. sad....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg...this is cool
Please add me to ur pm list
really looking forward!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it is cool dear
i loved it

scary thou
updated soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@CID_HD: Sorry for taking ur time dear.
@bluedreamz953:Thanxxx for liking and commenting.U r already in my list.I will pm u next time Inshallah.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Pick R u from Star one forum ?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one.. very interesting... do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@CID_HD:Yeah i like starone shows so mainly i visit starone forums.But i also like few shows from sony and star plus.



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