Poem:: Sunset's Whisper!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
You're not a horrible poet..i could really visualize the sunset and the narrator of the poem just standing there...looking sadly..or maybe it was just my vivid 😍 😆 if you write any more...do PM me...😊

Thank you sooo much !!

Will surely PM you the next time!! 😊

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#12

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
ok so firstly, WHO CALLS U A HORRIBLE POET?!?! i wanna smack dat person in to two cz ur an amazin poet with gifted talent!!!! seriously choti sis, im in awe of ur fab work..... especially cz i LOVE poetry and literature....

i love dese two lines...
Tho' twinkling stars will dare smile through
While you are far away from me

for some weird reason while readin ur poem i imagined aditi gupta our heer in da beach waitin for harshu, our prem 😍😍😍 i guess i miss dem too much....

awesome stuff lil sis plssssssss write more......

big hug 🤗

I call myself a horrible poet!... So.. you'l smack me?? 😲 😆

Thanks alot Di.... i'm honored! .... I really am! 😳

Wow! ... That would be sucha romantic scene na... Heer waiting for Prem!.... Whoa.... !!

Will definitely write more!

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#13

Originally posted by: shalini01
correct that horrible poet.you're really good. loved it.and that picture is amazing.really beautiful.do post more.

That's very sweet of you!

Thank you!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
ok first u tell me from which angle are u a horrible poet?😕
that was simlp amazing

it was expressive

full of emotions and feelings

really a wonder full poem

listen to the sunset its saying

that we've got a poet between us

who is amazing.....

really a awsome poem👍🏼

Whoa! ... Thankz alot for such an amazing comment! .... ⭐️

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Resvd!

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Sharmi Di, Sunset's Whisper is one of the BEST poems I've EVER read, you get that?

Point number 2, you say you're a horrible poet and I say I love your poem. Does that make me a person with bad choice? I don't think so. Raise your self-esteem, di. It's very important. I realised that because I don't possess that.

Point number 3, you're a wonderful poetess, and I want you to realise that, and SOON! Puh-leez stop thinking that every work of yours is going to invoke criticism, cuz you're good at what you do, you see?

Point number 4, I really wanna slap the person who told you are a bad writer. I mean, that's pretty rude of that person. And I think he or she is going to get it from me, REAL BAD. *Angry, VERY angry*

I loved this line in the poem. 'They'll frown a humble hue'. It was the most profound line, according to me.

Please continue writing, POETESS DI. I love your style of writing. It makes me want to read more and more..

Love ya loads,

(Missing you)

Aishwarya

<3 <3 <3

Edited by -Aish- - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

OMG!!! Such an awesome, fabulous, fantastic poem re!! Agar tu horrible hai toh main toh unbearable hongi. . ..Tune mujhe kabhi bataya kyun nhn?? LOLx! :P :P

Jokes apart. . .Its simply wonderful, magical, charismatic re!!

Thanks thanks thanks a lot for dedicating it to me!!!

@Kanky. . Thanks dear! :D :D

Love,

Nidhi. =)

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#17

Originally posted by: --Angel.Nidhi
OMG!!! Such an awesome, fabulous, fantastic poem re!! Agar tu horrible hai toh main toh unbearable hongi. . ..Tune mujhe kabhi bataya kyun nhn?? LOLx! :P :P

Jokes apart. . .Its simply wonderful, magical, charismatic re!!
Thanks thanks thanks a lot for dedicating it to me!!!
@Kanky. . Thanks dear! :D :D

Love,
Nidhi. =)

Happy Birthday Nidzi!

I'm sooooo glad you like it! .... Thanks for such a wonderful comment Angel!! .... and haan tu bahut hi accha likhti hai.. So don feel OFF :P

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maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

that was a beautiful poem sharmila

nowhere close to horrible

loved reading it😊

thanx a lot for the pm

maria.

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#19

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

I call myself a horrible poet!... So.. you'l smack me?? 😲 😆
Thanks alot Di.... i'm honored! .... I really am! 😳

Wow! ... That would be sucha romantic scene na... Heer waiting for Prem!.... Whoa.... !!
Will definitely write more!

well in dat case tiny lil slap for u from dis side....😆😆
dont u dare call urself horrible cz ur not.....

plss write one on my darlin premeer...😉 im gonna imagine them in watever u write anyways so 😆😆 its ok but plsssss write something for them