mayur os.. those 15 seconds..

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actually i hav written in my os gallery ..... but i wanted to share it with everyone but they are not in my buddy list.......... so i posted it here also...........😊

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THOSE 15 SECONDS



i still remeber the day wen we got maried..... i nupur mayank sharma got married to my luv mayank.... yes mayank......

wen in the college we announced that we both are in relationship everyone was lyk........ wat??1@#$%&*

hmm....... obviously...... we used to fight a lot................ and rather they did not believe ki mayank can ever approve a girl frnd....... he was not that kinda guy you know...... he was in those days considered as studious, rude, sincere, rude, teacher's pet, rude, unromantic, rude, mamma's boy, rude, angry young man, rude....... (thats wat others thot...... and yeah pehle mein bhi yehi sochti thi)

wen we told the college that we are boyfrnd girl frnd our frnds stood still, oops sorry not our frnds only my frnds...... bcoz mayank ka to koi frnd hi nhi tha...... except my little sis gunjan..... yes gunjan aur mayank ki bahut banti thi....... both of them studious...... gunjan ki to sabse hi banti thi........ but you know why uski mayank ke saath frndship huyi.... kyuki gunji mein knowlege koot koot ke bhari gyi hai...... ek din library mein dono ko ek table pe bethna padaa kyuki seats nahi thi (library...... uff mein kabhi nhi jaati thi..... dono padaaku.. kitaabi keede) and mayank was amazed by gunjan's knowledge (aaakhir behen kiski hai)...... and both started dicussing their problems.......

once gunjan told me abt mayank and i was lyk oh god tu uss akdu aur sadu se baat karti hai...... usne mujhe ek weird look diya and all was over.......... uske baad mene kisi se bhi mayank ke baare mein baat nhi ki thi,....... gunjan se karti to mere hissaab se wo mayank ko apnaa idol maanti thi aur mayank ki buraai uske saamne to nhi kar sakti thi..... aur mayank ki buraai koi aur karne ki himmat karta nhi tha........

kabhi mein aur mayank saath mein cantween mein nhi gye, kabhi library mein nhi mile, humaare subjets alag the, parties mein mayank aata nhi tha to hum wahaan nhi mil paaye, to hum millee kahaan aur pyaar kese hua? yehi sawaal tha sabke man mein......

aisaa to hai nhi ki ek din subah uthkar hum dono ko ekdum se jhatka lagaa aur humme pyaar ho gya.............

to ab mein sunaati hoon humaari story..... mayank aur nupur ki........ ki actual mein hum milee kese and pyaar kese hua..... and sabse weird propposal kesaa hoga.......

yeh baat bahut kam log jaante hai ki 8th standard mein mayank mere saath padta tha..... keval 8th standard mein hi...... na uske pehle na uske baad.......... keval ek saal...... mayank ki mom ka transfer hota rehta tha isliye....... yeh baat mujhe college mein pataa nhi thi ..... baad mein pataa chali..... bataati hoon kese

haan to mein kya keh rhi thi..... haan....... 8th standard mein......... 8th mein bhi wo aisaa hi tha.... padaaku,........

mujhe uske paas bithaaya gya tha.... can you believe??

but phir wo mujhe accha lagne lag gya....... ek baar jab hum 8th mein sab truth and dare khel rhe the tab mujhpar dare aaya tha ki mayank ko kiss kaoon......... dont get shocked....... hum london mein padte the.... and wahaan yeh sab iss normal....... maaynk was lyk "excuse me"

jab mayank ne kiss karne se manaa kar diya to mene kahaa koi aur opiton de do plz,,,,, bahut request ke baad ek ladke ne,,, mujhse kahaa ya to mein mayank ko manaa loon kiss karne ke liye and usse kiss karoon ya phir.............. ya phir 12th standard ke boys toilet mein jaaoon.........

i was lyk......... shit......... NOOOOOOOOO

12TH KE BOYS........ OMG,,, those cheap blurts......... and toilet mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai and agar kuch hua to mein complain kisse karungi...... bcoz pehle sab poochenge mein gyi hi kyu thi........ mein soch rhi thi kya karoon tabhi kuch 12th ke boys ne sun liya

one of them: come on.... aa jaao......... u will have fun.......

and fir to commenting start ho hi gyi thi.......... sab kuch na kuch bol rhe the........ aur jab bhut der tak mein kuch nhi boli to sab LOOSER bolne lag gye...... and nupur ko koi looser nhi bol sakta........


i with last hope turned at looked at mayank ....... he was looking at me only..... getting no response from him i turned to te corridor....... as i was movig everyone was following..... i did not look back for once also....... i was almost in tears..... but i did not shed........ coz nupur never cries......

finally i was in front of the toilet.......

students whisteling, hooting................

wen one of the 12th boys took my hand and asked "may i?"

and i was feeling very ashamed.... wat to do now........... i was almost at the end of my life........

in london if you guys know people also do *** in the toilet..... and now i was moving....... rubbish how bad i felt........ i had lost hope from mayank.............

you guys must be thinking where the teachers were? so let me remind you it was teachers day that day and they were enjoying the programm on the ground flloor and we were on the 5th floor........ our school had seven floors........

wen i was abt to enter the toilet................ mayank called : stop there.............

i looked at him and a tear rolled down my cheek.......... i was thinking wats gonna happen nect........ i mean kissing was far better than this going to the toilet...... and kissing never cums in the issues and breaking news ,, and between he was my first crush afterall,,,, bcoz there are far better things to talk abt or rather far rubbish things to talk abt........

he was cuming twowards me...... and i was thanking him under my breeath.....

m: f9 i m ready.........

i smiled hard............ a big smile was there on my face.......... 12th boys were cursing mayank....... wen one of them spoke up: heyy dude we did not mean a simple peck on lips..... it shud be deep...........

m $ n: wat???????????

boy: yes..... now nupur wats yur choice..........

i lookd at mayank once again.......

there no body knew hindi ///////// ohk...

n: gyi bhens paani mein.......... (i did not know ki mayank was an indian and had cum from india and he knew hindi... i told this thing loud bcoz i thot no body knew hindi)

mayank started smiling........


n: ab yeh kyu hans rha hai,,,,,,,,,???? (still thinking ki he does not know hindi, obviously i did not get a dream ki india se itni door i wud meet an indian.......)

m: kyuki mujhe hindi aati hai.......... i m indian.....

i was lyk wat.............??!@#$#@

n: kya......... indian??

and everyone was wondering that wat are they talking.......

n: tabhi mein sochu tumhe ek kiss karne mein itni problem kyu aa rhi hai/

m" oh hello mujhe koi problem nhi hai....... infact i was shocked how can YOU an indian gal dare to visit boys toilet....... isliye mujhe taras aa gya aur mein kissing ke liye maan gya..

n: tumhe kese pata mein indian hoon?

then again he was smiling ans i was getting angry on him......

n: kya hai?

m: hmm...... mein tumhaar epaas beth ta tha shaayad tum bhool gyi,........ wo jo tum lectures ke beech beech mein hindi mein teacher ko gaaliyaan deti thi na ussi waqt mujhe pata chal gya tha..... aur tum bahut saari baatein bolti thi mujhe........ hindi mein......

my jaw dropped............. shit crap........ no.................... i was shouting in my mind............. NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII,,,,

OHH LET ME remind my self mene kitni baatein bataa di isse........

rewind

"iss teacher ko to mein itnaa sataaungi na ek din...... aatmahatya karke bhoot banke daraaungi..........." jab nupur yeh sab khud se bolaa tha tab mayank ne uski taraf dekhaa tha...... aur wo hans rha tha....... ....... ahennnnnn

"tum kitne acche dikhte ho....... kya body hai....... by god........." jab nupur ne mayank se yeh kahaa tab mayank ne apni aankhein badi kar ke kahaa with a little smile on his face "wat"...

tab nupur ne kahaa "nothing,,,,,, just thinking of sumone good.............

phir ek baar science ke lecture ke samay nupur ne kahaa

"mujhe na bilkul tumhaare jesaa pati chahiye...... pataa nhi mein tumhe apne dil ki baat kab bataa paaungi......." mayank was lyk yeh ladki paagal ho gyi hai........... sacchi.......

mayank was blushing hard....... ki yeh ladki ko mein kitna pasand hoon..... while nupur was thinking.........

"yeh chemistry ke reactions ko dekh dekh kar kitna khush ho jaataa hai...... isko bday pe mein ek chemical reaction gift karungi" and you know mayank ne yeh bhi sun liyaa tha,.........mayank burst out laughing....... and nupur was confused,,,,,,,,, kyuki nupur ko mayank ka sirname bhi nhi pataa tha to usse koi idea nhi tha ki wo indian hai......... aur bachpan mein itnaa kon dhyaan detaa hai,,,,,,,,

ek din games ke period ke baad sab bahut thake huye waapis aaye,.......

"tum na itne handsome dikhte ho ki kya bataau.......... khelne par to meraa aadha dhyaan issee wajah se nhi rehta..... uff teri adaaaaaaa haai mein mar jaavaa ud khaake" obviously mayank usse humeshaa dekhtaa tha and hanstaa tha.........

ohk ohk ab waapis

PLAY

abhi kiss ki baat thi....... nupur wese bhi itnaa embaarased feel kar rhi thi ki mayank ne uski saari baatein sun li thi..... usse hindi aati thi..... usne apnaa kitnaa badaa faaludaa banaa diya tha........

m: aur wese bhi mein kal yeh skul chod ke jaa raha hoon..... aur jo poore saal tumne meri tareef kari aur teachers ko gaaliyaan deke meraa entertainment kiya to mujhe tumhe koi gift to denaa hi tha....... to yeh kiss..... ek farewell gift samjh ke lelo.....

he came forward and kissed nupur.............. all were seeing them,,,,,,,,,,,,

one boy: yur 15 secs start now.......

and they started the countdown

everyone was shouting

1.......... (mayank's hand were trying to grab her waist.. but he thot if it wud look gud or bad.. or wat will nupur think)

2........ (nupur was thinking how sweet mayank is...........)

3........ (mayank was dying to grab her waist......... but he controlled)

4......... (nupur thinking mayank is sumwat feeling uncomfortableee... )

5.......... (mayank was damn upset...... the most beutiful moment in his life and he cant enjoyy)

6......... (nupur thinking sumthing is missing in our kiss......... and so she put her hand on his neck)

7...... (mayank thinking i cant take it nymore...... and he harshly pulled nupur closer by her waist,,, to which hooting started once again)

8........ (nupur was startled at the sudden act...... but then made her self comfortable in his grip)

9....... (mayank made his grip tighter ,,,,,,, making nupur's leg move upwards.... and she was in his arms now and not on the floor ;;;;; bcoz mayank was taller than nupur...)

10........ (as mayank pulled her upwards....nupur grabbed his hair and her fingers were moving thru his hair)

11....... (both were enjoying lyk anything....)

12...... (wen all said twelve mayank and nupur sensed that only 3 secs are left now..... and their kiss bcame more passionate.....)

13........ (nupur had a tear rolling down her cheeks and so do mayank...)

14....... (both understood that the other was crying bcoz they will be separated the next day.... as mayank was leaving........)


15...... (the sadness of leaving the other was visible in both of their eyes....... the pain was seen)

they slowly broke....... mayank calmly put down nupur......... they were looking in each other's eyes..... mayank's hand was still on nupur's waist........

and everyone started shouting nd teasing which brought mayank back......... and he took his hand off from nupur's waist..... and he left......... leaving a note in nupur's locker.... it said

"nupur........... i love you... aur wo 15 secs mere life ke sabse acche 15 secs the...... hum agli baar jab bhi milenge i wud lyk to repeat those 15 secs///////////// yurs mayank"

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ohkkk to hum aisee 8th standard mein milee the,...... uss din ke baad mayank ko mene dekhaa hi nhi..... wo chalaa ga tha apni mom ke saath.....

phir college mein padaai ke liye mein mumbai aa gyi thi....... kyuki dad ab mumbai mein job karte the...... excel college mein admission liya.......

sab accha khaasa chal rha tha....... phir meri mulaaqaat phir se mayank se huyi.... par iss baar wo kuch zyaadaa hi badal gya tha...... bahut rude ho chukaa tha..... chidchidaa and all that..... mene sapne mein bhi nhi sochaa tha ki yeh wahi mayank hai.... wo 8th class waala......

mayank aur meri ladaai hoti thi..... bahut ,....... bahut bahut bahut......... ek baar wo mere ghar aaya tha.... project ke liye....... wo uss waqt bhi bahut akad rha tha.............

par to my goodluck uss waqt samrat gunjan dia benji aur uday bhi mere ghar aa gye......... kyu?? bas yuhi....... holiday manaane......... gunjan to mere saath hi rehti thi but wo kuch dink ke liye dia ke yahaa gyi thi.... dia meri cousin....

hum games khelne lag gye......... gunjan mayank ki acchi frnd thi to usne usse bhi manaa liya game khelne ke liye....... humne gunji ko manaa kiya tha par wo kahaan sunne waali thi......

dia" accha guys konsaa game khelein??

samrat: truth and dare

mayank and nupur shouted together: NOOOO (seriously bahut tez chillaaye the....... samrat ke haath se paani ka jug bhi gir gya tha)

samrat: thik hai...... daraao mat.....

gunjan: ummm............ apni lives ke baare mein discuss karein......

jee haan aisaa boring game meri boring sister ko hi yaad aa sakta hai.....


sam: thik hai............. (of course wo to haan hi karega......... gunji ka bf jo hai)

dia: haan haan accha hai...... (dia....... jo sam pe lattu hai........)

benji: yes yes........ (benji jo dia bolegi wohi karega... aur uday ka opinion chahiye hi nhi tha.....)

unknowingly mene aur mayank ne bhi haan bol di...... dont know why,,,,,,,

sab ne apne life ke baar mein kuch kuch bataaya.......

samrat: accha ab sab bataao unki life ka best moment kitne din ya kitni der tak rha......... (i know kitna wierd question hai but samrat indirectly gunjan se quesstion pooch rha tha..........wo sunna chahta tha gunjan se 3 saal kyuki usse aur gunjan ko mille huye 3 saal ho gye the...........)

par isse pehle koi aur bol paaye mein aur mayank saath mein bol pade,........ "15 SECONDS"

aur sab jane humme dekhne lag gye............. aur hum ek doosre ko..........

dia: 15 SECS...... bas........... tumhaari life ka best moment bad 15 secs ka tha........ oh god tum kitne unlucky ho....... bas 15 secs..... not even a day........ or not even an hour......... and not even a minute......... oh god........


aur mein aur mayank zor zor se hasne lag gye................ tab bhi mein yehi soch rhi thi...... ki kahiin yeh wohi mayank to nhi hai........

benji: but tum dono ke same to same 15 secs kese hai?? i mean tum kahaan the..........

m $ n: london....

mayank and npur looked at each other......... in disbelief......

m $ n: we need to talk........... (again together.....)

and they left to terrace.....

on terrace,,

m: nupur are you.....

n: ummm.......

m: were you with me in 8th standard??

nupur heard it................. she closed her eyes..........

and ran towards mayank and literally jumped on him.......

jumped....... her complete weight was on him....... she hugged him tight......

then they both looked at each other and smiled.......

then again that 15 secs ..........

they broke.............

m: i love you......

n: i love you too...........

and they hugged..........

and phir kya tha..... sab ko humne bataaya and smarat ko to heart attack aate aate reh gya.....

phir humaari shaadi ho gyi.......

and i m waiting for my lovey dovey.....

and here he cums........


they ate dinner and lived happily ever after.......

THOSE 15 SECS WERE THE MOST BEUTIFUL MOMENTS OF OUR LIFE....... agar wo 15 seconds na hote to aaj mein ar mayank saath na hote........

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ohkkk now here is another os,,,,,,,, i worked hard on it......... plz comment..... and jahaan bhi aapko lagta hai ki koi mistake hai plz let me know,,,,, use the lyk tab also....... and if you want to visit my os gallery then here is the link........ here i hav written 12 os.....

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1311395


luv

pari (an if you are interested in reading ff;s then below are the links... send me a buddy req. if you want to recieve pms....... do comment)....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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these are my creations..............😉 hav a look if interested.😊

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Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was jst superb..
d kiss was jst killing!!😃
nd thnx for d links of ur other fanfics

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pari!!!
that was superbbbbbbbbbb os !!!!!!!!!!!
love the concept of 15 seconds too good buddy!!!

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komal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i have already commented on this OS.. but still, its a lovely OS

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