TU JO NA AYI--MJHT OS! (not by me)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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(hello all this is avi.i was listening to one song and I thought abt using this song for gang'.the scene is not related to mjht current story but pls read it and tell me hows it...if u don't like it thn I m very sorry to waste ur time.)

Note: I have some net problems so my frend is posting this part on my behalf.

TU JO NA AYI

the scene is of airport....one cool dude is coming bouque of flowers in his hand....and he is very happy...from other end...two more guys come having gifts in their hand...from behind thm one more guy comes with flower in his hand...who r all those????.....these r our cool dudes....samrat...mayank...benji...rohit.....why thy all come to airport????? let them ask each other...

samrat and mayank are going together.

S: hey mayank...tum nupur ke lia kya laye ho?????

M: waise muzhe nupur ke lia kuch lane ki jarurat nahi...magar mai to nupur ke lia uski favourate mayapuri laya hu....jaha wo gayi thi waha to milati nahi hogi....so ye dekhke wo bohot khush hogi...waise tu gunjan ke lia kya laya hai?????

S: chashmish ko simple hi gifts ache lagte hai...to mai uske lia ek cute sa teddy laya hu...as usse teddy bohot pasand hai..with my everlasting love for her.....waise nice choice dude....nupur bohot khush hogi.

M:thanks dude...waise tune bhi bohot acha gift laya hai....ab ye rohit kaha mar gaya?????

R: hey dude...mai yahi hu....wo ash ke lia gift lene mai busy tha.

S: tune kya liya hai ash ke lia?????

R: wo boss...muzhe kuch samaz nahi aa raha tha...ash ka choice bohot hi different hai...to mai bohot confuse ho gaya...to mai ek red rose hi leke aa gaya...kash ye usse pasand aa jaye????S: cool dude...kyu nahi pasand ayega...tu tension mat le.

(as thy all were discussing with each other...one guy comes from behind and says in loud.)

G: hey sam...hows u????

Sam turns and looks at the person and is shocked to the core.....is not able to digest the situation...is the person in front of him is real or not. who is tht?????? He is none other but our own sweet ,lovable benji.

B: kya sam mai thodi der ke lia bahar chala gaya to muzhe bhul gya...buri baat hai...chashmish ke pyar mai apne best frend ko bhul gaya....(and makes sad face)

S: (runs towards benji and hugs him tight) sale mai tuzhe kaise bhul sakta hu...tu to mera sabse best frend hai....aur aaj mai bohot khush hu...aaj muzhe mera best frend mil gaya...waise tune ye roni surat banana choda nahi ab tak...waisa hi hai...bhale hi iss suit mai professional lagata hai...magar tu abhi bhi mera best buddy hai.

B: kaise change hota...ye to bahar ke changes hai...magar andar se to mai wahi natkhat sweet benji hu na....waise maine tuzhe bohot miss kiya yaar....kehte hai na...aap jab dur jate ho to aapko apne dosto aur apno ki bohot yaad ai hai....waise bata bhabhi kaisi hai??????

S: chashmish to achi hi hai...waise tu yaha kaise????

B: mai to kisiko receive karne aya hu..jab maine tum logo ko dekha to yaha aa gaya...waise tum log bhi kisiko receive karne aye ho?????

waise hiiii mayank...kaise ho?????? aur nupur kaisi hai????

M: mai to thik hi hu dude...but we missed u alot...in teen salo mai bohot kuch ho gaya...tum sab log higher studies ke lia bahar chale gaye...waise ab to tu yahi pe hai na??????? aur hum yaha teri bhabhi ko receive karne aye hai....waise tu kisko rceive karne aya hai...bol bol??????? koi mil gayi kya vilayat mai.

B: nahi nahi....mai to woh...diya ko receive karne aya hu....wo aaj ane vali hai....waise nupur kaha gayi hai?????

(he comes near samrat and ask)

B: waise dude ye naya banda koin hai...mai nahi tha to naya partner dhund liya?????

S: nahi dude...wo to new student hai humare excel ka...his name is rohit...and teri jagah koi nahi le sakata...to rona bnd kar.

B: hi rohit nice to meet u.

R: to aap benji ho...jiski boss bohot bate karte rehte hai...aap boss ke sabse ache frend ho na.

S: bohat acha nahi...mai usse apna bhai manata hu.....we r together from childhood'chuddy buddy frend.

B:yup.. sam mere bhai jaisa hai.uske lia to mai kuch bhi kar sakata hu.

M: waise diya kis flight se ane vali hai???

B: 9.15pm ki flight se...wo US gayi thi....kuch seminar attend karne ke lia....malum hai ek month ke baad wapas aa rahi hai woh....uske bina ek month maine kaise kata hai muzhe hi pata hai. L

S: holy freak...chashmish,nupur & ash bhi to kisi seminar ke lia US gayi hai....wo bhi aaj issi flight se wapas aa rahi hai...waise romeo...humari bhi halat kuch alag nah hai...chashmish ko har din dekhne ki habit hai...so jab wo chali gayi thi...tab humesha uski yaad ati rehti..har jagah usse miss karta..aur jab bhi usse phone karta to miss ko apni study se fursat nahi hoti...magar jab bhi time mile wo muzhse bate karti...aur tab lagta jaise waqt wahi teher jaye...ab usse ane do....mai usse kahi jane nahi dunga.

M: mera bhi hal kuch aisa hi hai...jab wo ghar pe hoti...to ghar bhara hua lagata hai....usse tang karne mai bohot maza ata hai....jab bhi zagada hota to lagata ye mere sath nahi hoti to meri zindagi kitni shanti hoti...magar jab wo mere sath nahi thi....tab usski kami muzhe bohot khali...uske sath kiya hua har zagada...har baat yaad ati...ghar katane ko daudata...uska muzhe sadu kehke chidana....sab bohot yaad ata hai...ab muzhe wait nahi hota ki mai usse kab milu.

S:to chalo hum ek sath milke unka wait karte hai...waise tune dia ke lia kya laya hai?????

B: woh woh maine uske lia ek dress lia hai....tuzhe pata hai na diya ko nayi nayi fashion ki dress kitni pasand hai...apne coll ki diwa jo thi....bas usse acha lag jaye.

S: candy ko acha lagega re...tune itne pyar se jo laya hai.

(at 9.15 pm flight landed and all r desperately waiting for their partners.....all the passengers came...but thr was no sign of our angels.)

S: ye chashmish kaha reh gayi....flight to sahi thi...to wo kaha hai....kahi hum galat time to nahi aa gaye na...kahi wo pehale hi nahi aa gayi.

M: nahi sam...flight ka time to sahi hai...hume late nahi hua...magar ye sab kaha reh gayi...kahi innone flight miss kar di????

B: wait i call diya...agar wo yaha aa gayi hogi to cell uthyegi....tum bhi try karo.

all r trying but no one responds....our boys r waiting thr for more time....many flights came...as soon as fligh came...all runs to see their loved once...but thr was no one.....all come in waiting area....all 4 r tired and sad...and tensed...whr r their angels...thy r missing them like hell now and thy sing following song.

(tu jo na ayi song from F4 band )


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VbnitVg_yIM[/YOUTUBE]

(sam starts missing his chashmish): Yuun Sharmaayi

(Benji follows):Yeh Tanhaayi

( Mayank sings):Aankhein Bhar Aayi,

(Rohit sings looking at door):

tu Toh Na Aayi Teri Yaad Aayi

( All sing in unison): tu Toh Na Aayi Teri Yaad Aayi

(Sam walks and sings):Yuun Tarsaayi,

(Benji going in other way): Yuun Tadpaayi

(Rohit standing near pole):Shaamein Judaayi

(Mayank sings followed by whole gang):

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

(Sam takes out pic of chashmish from his wallet and looking at it sings)

Tasweerein Teri Deewaaron Pe,

(mayank sings)

Dekhate Hai Hum Hasraton Se

(benji comes towards them and sings and all sing)

Tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

Tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

(Rohit coming to group sings):Yuun Tarsaayi,

(S):Yuun Tadpaayi

B:Shaamein Judaayi

(M and all):

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

(mayank sings remembering nupur and had tears in his eyes)

Paigaam Toh Kuchh Bhejati,

(sam keeps his hand on his shoulder and sings)

Hai Kuchh vajah ya Yuun Hi Bewajah

(now all sings)

Tu Jo Na Aayi '.

Tu Jo Na Aayi'.

(Benji sings)

Paigaam Toh Kuchh Bhejati,

(Rohit sings)

Hai Kuchh Vajah Yuun Hi Bewajah

(al sing)

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

tu Jo Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

(all very tired and very sad'coming towards the bench and sings following)

(sam)Yuun Sharmaayi Yeh Tanhaayi

(mayank)Aankhein Bhar Aayi,

(all)

tu Toh Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

tu Toh Na Aayi, Teri Yaad Aayi

(sam ends song with tears in his eyes'.keeping the teddy for his chashmish near his heart..)

Tu Toh Na Aayi

(because of tiredness all sleep there only'.on the bench.)

(now its morning'all r sleeping till now'when someone shakes samrat)

Girl: utho samrat'.samrat utho.

S(sleepy mood..looks at the girl'its chashmish'but thinks its dream and says cutely)

Chashmish ab tum mere sapno mai bhi ane lagi'.waise mai bohot angry hu'tum ne apna wada tod diya'tum nahi aai'ab mai tumse kabhi bate nahi karunga...and sleeps again.

(same thing happens with mayur also)

N: gunjan ye aise nahi uthane vale'ruko mai hi inki neend uda ti hu.

And nupur bring a bucket full of water and throws it on all the 4 princes sleeping quietly'

As soon as water falls on them'all wake up and starts making noises..

(mayur)

M: Kisaki itni majal jo hume pani dalke aise utha diya'samne to aye'hath tod dunga'itni achi neend ayi thi.

N: mai hu wo nachiz jisne aapko apne dreamland se uthaya hai'kya kar loge.

M: (looking nupur)ye sach me tum ho nupur ki meri aakhe dokha kha rahi hai'..koi muzhe chimati nikalo.

Benji pinches him hard.

M: aarh'.benji itna jor se kisne pinch karne ko kaha tha'.ab pata chal gaya ye sach hai.

Waise nupur tum thi kaha'kuch samaz nahi ata'hum tumhare wait mai yahi par the raat bhar'tum ane vali thi isiliye maine ghar pe tumhari fav khana banaya magar dekho'sab kuch waste kar diya'aura b pani se bigoke meri neend bhi kharab kar di.

N:woh mai'woh mai'wo kya hai na humari flight chut gayi thi'so hum subah ki flight se aye'humane tume phone karne ki koshish ki'magar bad weather ki vajah se network kharab ho gaya tha'.mai kya karti'.waise I m sorry na'.waise bhi tum gussa hote hua'ache nahi lagate'.to thoda has do'.pls'(saying this in cute childish way)

M: flight to chutani hi thin a'tum time pe tayyar nahi hui hogi'.to sab ko late kar diya.

N: nahii'mai thik time pe tayyar thi magar waha ka traffic ke kya batavu'.hum 1 ghante tak traffic mai fase the...isiliye late ho gaye'.ab chodo na'ab to mai aa gayi na'waise ye tumhare hath mai kya hai'and she takes it from his hand.

M: dekho tumne tumhara gift bhi kharab kar diya.

N:wah'.meri pyari mayapuri'pata hai maine isse kitna miss kiya.

M: aur muzhe miss nahi kiya??????????? (shocked)

N: mai apne SRK ko kaise bhul sakti hu'.pulling his cheeks.

M: ok ok'.ab chalo.

( sajan)

S: (is not paying attention to gunjan at all and asks others)hi candy bohot dino ke baad mili ho'kaisi ho????? And ash tumhari trip kaisi thi???

D: hiiiiii Sammy'.kaise ho????? Bohot din ho gaye tumse mile..and hugs him.

A: hi samrat'humane to bohot maza kiya US mai'magar aap sab ko bohot miss kiya.

S: humne bhi tum sab ko bohot miss kiya.

(in all this he is continuously ignoring gunjan'and gunjan is not liking it at all)

Diya noticing all this'..asks Sammy.

D: Sammy gunjan ko nahi puchoge'wo kaisi hai???

S: nahi candy'.wo to thik hi hogi'..chalo hum chalate hai.

(now gunjan doesn't take it anymore)

G: samrat tum kaise ho???

S: kaisa lag raha hu'.thik hi hu.

G: aise kyu bol rahe ho samrat'..i m sorry na'wo flight miss ho gayi na'..aur maine tumhe phone karne ki bohot koshish ki..magar tumne phone nahi laga'mai kitni tensed thi'ki tum kitne tensed hoge mai nahi ayi hogi to'aur yaha mai kya dekh rahi hu'tum muzhe hi ignore kar rahe ho.

(and tears come in her eyes)

S: (even though he can get angry on his chashmish but he can't see her chashmish cry.)he goes to her'cups her face'chashmish pls don't cry'are mai to majak kar raha tha'mai tumse naraz nahi hu'pls aise mat ro'tum roti ho to muzhe dard hota hai'kya tm yahi chahti ho ki mai bhi rone lagu????

G: nahi samrat'.and she hugs him tight'maine tumhe bohot miss kiya samrat'uss anjaan desh mai bhale hi di aur baki ke log mere sath the'magar muzhe hamesha tumhari hi chinta rehti'.jab bhi tumse bate karti to aisa lagta ki ye sama aise hi chalata rahe.

S: muzhe bhi aise hi lagata tha chashmish'.waise maine tumhare lia ek gift laya hai'and he shows a red rose and sweet little teddy.

G: oh ye kitna sweet hai'bilkul tumhare jaisa'.and she kissed him.

S: (shocked seeing such behaivior of gunjan) chashmish tum thik ho na'tumhe fever to nahi hua na????

G: nahi kyu???

S: tumne muzhe abhi kiss kiya.???????

G: to nahi kar sakti?????

S: ha kar sakati ho'.ek aur do na.

G: hutt'ek din mai ek hi'.and she walks away with teddy in her hand.

S: chashmish ye cheating hai,agar ek din mai ek kiss to pichale month ke 30 dino ke kiss muzhe kab milenge????

G: sochna padega'.and she runs to mayur.

S:chashmish mai apne kiss leke hi rahunga'and runs behind her.

(benia)

B: hi diya'kaisi ho?????

D: mai to thik hi hu benji'magar waha rehke maine tumhe bohot miss kiya'..tumhari sweet natkhat bate'muzhe irritate karna'yaad ata rehta'.waha sab kuch tha'magar wo sab enjoy karne ke lia tum mere sath nahi the'..waise ab mai wapis aa gayi hu.

B: maine bhi tumhe bohot miss kiya'..waise maine tumhare lia ek gift laya hai'.khol ke dekho kaisa hai????

D: (loking at dress) chhiiiii kitni gandi dress hai'.tumhe isse achi dress nahi mili.

B: (got very sad as diya didn't liked it) oh sorry diya'tumhe pasand nahi aai'.kuch nahi'maine 100 dress reject karke ye dress choose kit hi'magar shayad meri taste bilkul achi nahi'.achi nahi'bakwas hai'chalo jate waqt mai isse wapas kar dunga'.chalo tumhara saman dedo'hum chalate hai.

D: (looking at sad face of benji'catches his hand) bemji'.tum naraz ho??

B: (he is but not showing it) nahi to'tumhe der ho rahi hogi'chalo chalate hai'aur muzhe wo dress bhi wapas karni hai.

D: magar muzhe wo dress wapas nahi karni.

B: kyu?????????

D: kyuki mere pyare benji ne itni mehnat se mere lia dress layi hai'aur wo muzhe pasand na ho'aur mere taste ko mere benji ke alawa aur koin pehchan sakta hai'..mai to bas majak kar rahi thi'.tumhe kya laga'tum hi majak karte ho??????

B: (hearing this a broad smile comes on his face) sacchi diya'tumhe ye dress sach me pasand ayi????

D: ha baba'muzhe ye dress sach mai pasand hai'.chalo ab chalate hai'nahi to late ho jayenge'sab chale gaye.

(this way all the pairs meet'end'.hope u liked my silly one shot.)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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res! m yet to read it!

U kno bhai this OS is simply amazing.........:D
I so loved it ki kya bataaon.👏👏
the usage of the song is just perfectly done and the way you used yor creativity is gr8⭐️
after reading the OS I thought of pressing d "kile" tab forgetting that its posted by me..... and den d edit thing open and I was like "wat d hell is dis" then I remembered...............🤣
the SaJan , MayUr and BenIa scenes were cute!!😃
and the SaYankBen with Rohit (thts rohan.......but who cares😆) getting gifts was so sweet!!:)
Now go comment on me FF!!! 🤣
and rply me here first!!:D

Luv , ur Sis 🤗
Edited by AttractiveAdya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sis u posted half part only....😔
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where is the full part dear???
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Originally posted by: achoose

where is the full part dear???

now the whole part posted.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry guys tht was My Bad!:(
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woow....that was a very cute os dear.....................
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arrg! I cant evn press d like tab!! bhai................
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

arrg! I cant evn press d like tab!! bhai................

no prob sis apna comment de do....kaisa laga os...bura..... avg...good.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww so cuteeeee OS avi bro loved it loved da concept u used it was so sweet n cutee n lovee da song u used lovee da all couple reunite n all so cutee da gifts by boys to der partner loved it to core do write more bro

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