AR FF ~~ Somebody To Love ❤️ ~~,Part 5 pg:21 27/05

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Hey guys,

 

I recently joined India-forums and came across the Fan Fiction forum. And I had this urge to try my hand at writing an FF, never done this before. so bear with me...

I have written the first part and wanted to share it with you guys. I hope you like it...

No character sketch as I still do not have the whole story materialized in my head so we will just go with the flow...

As I am new here so haven't read a lot of FF already, so no idea if a similar plot already exists..

Let me know if it does actually...

Alright I will stop blabbering now...Hope you guys enjoy reading the part. And don't forget to comment. Criticism is more than welcome =D

-Sareena


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Index


Part 1: Page 1 (Scroll Down)

Part 2: Page 3

Part 3: Page 9

Part 4: Page 15


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******************    Part 1    *****************

 

Rajeev Malik opened the door to welcome the guests in the house with a huge grin on his face.

 

"Itni deer laga di yaar, kab se tera intezaar kar rahe hain" and he pulled his best friend, Shashank Gupta into a rib crashing hug…. "haye thand pe gayi…kaisa hain mera yaar".

 

"Bas dekh le badiya hoon, aura abb dost se mil kar tabiyat kush ho gayi", Shashank smiled full heartedly.  Breaking out of the hug Rajeev greeted the other members of the family. "Nameste bhabhiji, kaise hain aap, aao baccho, meri bachiyain kitni badi ho gayi hain, kaise ho baccho??"

 

*Wow I did not know pa and uncle are such good friends, pa always tell us their college stories but I thought after uncle moved to Canada 15 years ago, they friendship must have distanced but guess I was wrong, they still seem like they share a very strong bond…..Anyways what a nice house yaar, the house is as mesmerizing from outside as it is from inside*, Ridhimma came out of her chain of thoughts as she heard a women speak

 

"Bas abb sari batein yahi karoge ya ander bhi anne doge" everyone turned towards to see Ananya Malik standing at the door.

 

After an emotional and a heart felt greeting session everyone was settled in the living room…

 

"Ananya, bacche kaha hain, its been 7 years since we have seen them…abb to bahut bade ho gaye hoge…call them na", Padma asked cheerfully.

 

"Padma, Rahul and Armaan to tumhe abhi nahi milenge, Rahul had to leave for office early this morning and Armaan bhi college gaya hain. Mini was on the phone last I checked. I will just call her."

 

Ananya asked the servant to go and call Mini.

 

"Bhaisab aur inki to baat hoti rehti hain, Ananya you tell me how are you doing? Shashank was telling me Rahul is a CA now, what firm he is working with? and what is Armaan and Mini doing?" Padma asked.

 

"yeah  Rahul just got his CA degree this year, he got hired with Deloitte then And Armaan he is in his second year Engineering. And Mini she is grade 11…." Ananya spoke proud of her children….

 

Their talks were interrupted as they saw Mini coming down the stairs…She looked gorgeous wearing a purple summer dress. She came down and greeted everyone. Padma got up and hugged her "God bless you my child…you are so beautiful, kissi ki nazar na lage, Padma iski aaj nazar ootar dena. She was two when you guys left and now look at her, how time flies…" Padma lovingly patted Mini on her head.

 

Everyone got busy chatting again over tea. Ridhimma chatted with Mini for a while and talking with Ananya in between. She was the one in the family who would take sometime getting comfortable with people, whereas everyone else could easily talk to everyone and anyone. Shashank and Padma was so excited to see their old friends after so long that the excitement took over their tiredness from a 21 hour long flight. On the other, Anjali was busy talking with Mini and Ridhimma was dozing off sitting on the couch

 

Rajeev noticed Ridhimma heavy eyes, struggling to keep herself awake when the tiredness was taking over. He smiled at her innocence, and spoke "Ananya abb inhe rest karne dete hain, humari baatein to khatam nahi hongi aur Ridhimma beta yahi so jayegi"

 

Ridhimma turned red embarrassed at being caught " Wo..umm sorry uncle, wo I am just a bit tired, wo I didn't realize"

 

Rajeev lovingly gave her side hug " Oh no beta you don't have to be sorry, we should be sorry but you know na how we old people are…we love to talk…Now you go and have some rest"

 

"yeah we should get going now…Hum log phir sham ko milte hain", said Shashank standing up.

"Tu kaha ja raha hain…Bhabhiji abb app isko samjha lo…..Dost ke hote ve ye Hotel main rehne ki zid kar raha hain…Jab tak app log ke liye paas me ghar nahi dekh le aap sab humare paas rahenge…Have I made myself clear abb baar baar gussa mat chada…varna maine baat nahi karni", said Rajeev and he pretended to be angry and turned his back towards Shashank….

 

Shashank didn't want to be a burden on his friend, but seeing his friend get serious he thought he will hurt him if he would not stay with them and after all if they would have come to India and stayed at a hotel he would have felt bad as well. So he agreed, deciding he will try and find a home at the earliest.

 

"Yaar abb tereko naraaz kar ke main marna thodi hain, chal abb room to dikha..badi nind aa rahi hain" and Shashank pulled Rajeev in hug, in a way apologizing, if his actions have hurt him….

 

Rajeev finally broke out in a smile. Ordering the servant to take their luggage from the car to their respective rooms. He asked Mini to show Ridhimma and Anjali their rooms, while he showed Shashank and Padma theirs.

 

Ridhimma and Anjali room was on the third level with the other kids whereas the elder people had their room on the second level.

 

Mini took them upstairs, "So this will be your room and the room next to yours is Rahul Bhai's and the one opposite is Armaan Bhia's and the one next to his mine. So I am right there if you need anything. Rest well, I will see you guys later", Mini left closing the door behind.

 

As soon as Mini left, Ridhimma slammed on the bed. "Finally…..bed"

 

"Ridizii…could you atleast take off your shoes….How tired are you really?", spoke Anjali.

 

Ridhimma sat up on the bed pouting. Taking off her shoes hurriedly,  she adjusted the pillow and got into the comforter and spoke yawning, "You have no idea di…how hard I was trying to keep my eyes open downstair…."

 

"Oh yeah I have an idea….", she chuckled remembering how Rajeev Uncle caught her little sister dozing off. "By the way, did you see their family pictures on the stair wall…I must say both the brothers looks damn handsome"

 

Ridhimma who was already half asleep now, replied in her sleep, "No did not see the pictures properly, guess we will find out in the evening".

 

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"Yes bhai I will get home on time. I know dad's friends are over from India today…I don't understand he is dad's friend so why do I have to get home early. Anyway, I will be there in an hour.…", a drop dead gorgeous guy talked on the phone as he drove his Lamborghini home.

 

"Armaan, an hour means an hour. I will be home in 10 mins. I don't want mom to keep instructing me to give you a call.  So get home on time." Rahul spoke instructing his kid brother.

 

"yeah bhai I am on my way. Trust me I will be there. By the way bhai, how long would they be staying with us?"

 

"I think what mom told me was they have moved to Canada now, so dad is going to insist they stay with us until they buy their own place. So may be a month or so..", Rahul moved the phone away from his ear hearing Armaan, shrieking at the other end.

 

"No FUC**** WAY ….You are kidding me right??", Armaan asked hoping.

 

Rahul, "Omg Ammy could you not swear please and try to control your language in front of the guests. They have two daughters for god sake."

 

"Holy smokes, I have no idea how I will survive in my own home. One month no privacy and plus two girls. I am sure you know they will be like the girls they show in the Indian TV shows which mom watches. Backward thinking types. And on top of all that….mom tantrums when guests are staying at our place. Beta do this, beta don't do that, Beta come on time…ARGHH,…..I think I will have to move with Atul for some weeks now", says Armaan frustrated, just with the thought of having guests over for a month.

 

Rahul on the other hand could not stop his laughter hearing him whine like a little girl, "Serioulsy Ammy you are such a girl, its just a month dude…. You would not even realize it and plus I have heard they are fun people. So stop being judgmental and wait until you meet them. Alright I will see you soon, I am outside home. And come on time."

 

"I am not being judgmental for god sakes…you wait and watch bhai who is right….and yeah stop being mom I will be thr..ok bye now", spoke Armaan irritated, ending the call.    

 

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Anjali woke up hearing some noise from downstairs, she checked the time finding her watch,

"6 pm, wow…. guess everyone else is up…wonder why noone came to wake us up yet" She looking at Ridhimma sleeping peacefully beside her…..

 

"Hey sleepy head get up, its 6' o lock….everyone is up….I am hungry….get up lets get fresh and go downstairs", Anjali said trying to wake Ridhimma up, when there was a knock at the door. She got off bed , fixing her hair and went to open the door.

 

As Anjali opened the door she saw a handsome guy dressed in crisp off-white shirt and brown pants. She remembered he was one of the guys from the pictures.

 

*Wow…not bad…he is quite hot…guess staying with Malik's will be fun*  She smirked thinking to herself. Seeing him starting at her with a slightly open mouth she smiled and said "Hey?"

 

Rahul was in surprise, he probably believed what Armaan said and was expecting a girl dressed in Indian outfits and shy and all, but the sight in front of her was something else….A talk girl dressed in pink top and shorts which reach till her upper thigh was not what he was expecting…He got embarrassed realizing he was probably staring at her for too long, cursing Armaan in his mind. He would not have reacted in such a way, if he didn't have different expectations.

 

Anajli not able to break his gaze, waved her hand infront of his eyes, "Are you okay?"

 

Rahul gave an embarrassed cough, "I am sorry, I just….umm…, I am Rahul" He extended his hand.

 

She smiled taking his hand, "Hi I am Anjali"

 

"Nice to meet you Anjali, Hopefully I didn't wake you up?", Rahul asked feeling kinda guilty of waking them up. He knew how tiring the flight from India is, but he was just eager to meet them he told himself. His curiosity took over and he volunteered he will go check on them when Padma was coming upstairs to wake her daughters up.

 

"No no don't worry about it, we were just coming downstairs.", Anjali said.

 

"Oh alright. I guess I will give you girls some time to freshen up and will see you downstairs?", Rahul said smiling.

 

"Yeah, give us 5-10 min", Anjali said.

 

Rahul went down stairs while Anajli went in the room to wake her sleepy sister up.

 

Rahul smiled to himself thinking, *Ammy you are in for some surprise, I can wait to see your reaction. It be fun!*

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hey Sareena
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first of all welcome to India forumzz na
hope u have amzing time here=D
n haan congratzz on ur first FF na
I realli realli loved reading the whole thing na
u described everything just amazingly na
n lol Armaan is choo cutee na
really love his character to the core
cant wait to read more
of the surprise na
do continue soon
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It was awesome!😊 excited for armaan & riddhima's reaction 2wards each oder....😆
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hii Sareena.. i'm Preet.. :)
welcome to IF and Congrats for ur new ff..:)
man.. i luv ur concept.. :) itzz soo cool and outgng type.. :)
itss gonna be fun to read further and plus AR bis here sooo of course it'll romantic.. (hopefully if u r willing for AR's lovestory.. ahaa)
anywayz great start.. luved this part and plzz plzz add me to ur PM list and do pm me... ")
if itz possible do u wanna let us know how r u gonna update like once a week.. everyday or whenever is it possible for u.. :)
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