Pyaar ka Naasha - AR epilogue pg 17

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey guys! I've been a silent reader here! I was thinking about writing
an AR FF, but i don't know if you all will accept it! Here's an
intro/glimpse at what it will be like. Let me know if I should continue
or not!

Also my hindi is not too good, so forgive me for any mistakes!

please comment! criticisms are welcome too!

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Scene opens to a girl crying in a bedroom. We cannot see her face yet, only her back.


Girl: Guys Anji di is getting engaged in 1 hour and the airport lost
all my luggage with all my clothes! Muski, Nikki do you have anything i
can borrow? mere di ki engagement party mein yeh churridar to nahin
pensakti...


Muskaan: yaar meine to sirf ek lahenga le aiyee. sorry ridz!


Nikita: Haan ridz fikr mat kar. I have a lahenga you can wear, but...


Muski: but fut ke liye hume time nahin hain. bas jaldi lekaar aa


Nikki: teek hai, lekin don't tell me that I didn't warn you Ridz.


3 Min later


Nikki: ye lo ridz, jaldi karo!


Ridz goes and changes in the bathroom. when she comes out Muskaan begins to whistle!


Muskaan: wow ridz! tum to bohat sexy lagreho!


ridz: guys i dont know if i can wear this in front of everyone. I feel so self conscious!


(For all that are wondering she is wearing a red lahenga - like then one Aish wore in Kajra re)


Nikki: koi baat nahin, tum voh simple ghanda churridar penlo..(with sarcasm)

tumhe aur koi option nahin hai, pehna hoga!


Suddenly Anji speaks up from the other side of the room.


Anji: GUYS mere engagement hai aur tum log abhi bhi vahaan ho? Muhje help karo please!!


rest: oops sorry anj!


ON THE OTHER HAND:


Atul: Armaan im so excited! lekin muhjse suhaag raat ke liye bohaat nervous lag re hain!


Armaan: Champ, pehle engagement to kar lo! suhaag raat ka bohat time hai!


Atul: oh right. acha voh larki ke bare mein baata.


Armaan: kaun larki? *blushes* - which didnt go unnoticed by Atul


Atul: plane waala jiske liye tumhe zindigi mein pehle baar blush karte dehka.


Armaan: mein... mein...are yaar what do I say? she's so simple, so
beautiful! we sat next to each other on the plane and even spent our
stopover in Dubai together. She is so understanding and sweet! This
little boy was crying and you should have seen her calm him down! I
dont know how but i feel like i've known her my whole life! There's
something that pulls me towards her! Yaar im in lovee! love at first
sight! I dont have her number or anything. I need to find her!


Atul: naam kya hai uska?


Armaan: paata nahin, lekin mein use 'Basket' pukara, kyun ki pehle baar
jab usko dehka airport mein toh phone pe basketball ke baare mein baat
kar re thi.


Atul: hahaha tum bhi na... ab chal yaar Anji will be coming down any minute. I can't believe you havent met her or anyone yet!


Armaan is about to respond when Anji begins to come down the stairs followed by Ridz, muski, and nikki...


armaan: "basket"


atul: TUM MERE ANJI KO BASKET KAHAN! I'll kill you!


Armaan: stupid! usko nahin, voh dulhaan ji ke peeche


atul: oh then its okay


Anji sits down next to atul, armaan is about to talk to ridz (who hasnt noticed him yet) when music begins.


Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra


Rahul steps out from behind a group of girls and starts to walk towards muski, nikki, and ridz, while singing:

Come around' it's time to baby

Come around..

Come on now' come around'

It's time to baby' come around (grabs ridz and spins her around him once before taking her center stage/on the dance floor)

Come around' come around

(singing to ridz while dancing around her)

Khwaabon bina, nigahen meri jee rahin thi

Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

Ohhh yehhh'

Khamosh tha honthon pe baatein nahin thi

Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

(points to ridz - whose back is towards everyone else from the group)

Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan

Tum mile toh har pal hai naya

Tum mile toh sabse hai' faasla

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya' hai khuda

(Ridz winks at him and then starts dancing with him - they look like the perfect couple)

Come around' it's time to baby

Come around..

Come on now' come around'

It's time to baby' come around

Come around' come around

Palken moondein chaahat meri so rahi thi

Khushboo hawaaon mein thi

Maine nahin mehsoos ki

Mmm mm.mm

Jaane kahaan bahaaren meri khil rahi thi

Khushboo hawaaon mein thi

Maine nahin mehsoos ki

Tum mile toh mehki baarishen

Tum mile toh jaagi khwaahishen

Tum mile toh rangon ka hai silsila

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra

Tune duaaein suni

Dil ki sadaiyen suni

Tujhse main maangu aur kya

Tujh bin adhura hun main

Tere sang poora hun main

Karta hun tera shukriya

Kaise kahoon, kaise kahoon'

Kaise kahoon'kaise kahoon'

Kaise kahoon lamhe mujhe choo rahe hain

Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai

Ohh hooo

Kaise kahoon dil mein nayi aahaten hain

Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai

Tum mile toh mera dil gaya

Tum mile toh sab kuch mil gaya

Tum mile toh logon se kya vaasta

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Come around' it's time to baby

Come around..

Come on now' come around'

It's time to baby' come around

Come around' come around

Come around


Suddenly Rahul gets down on one knee, winks at Riddhima's parents and ridz then says "Riddhima, will you marry me?"


Thats it! Lemme know if i should continue! This part was kinda boring,
but it will be a passionate AR love story mixed with some comedy and
thriller!


If I get enough comments/feedback, I'll prob post the next part today!


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part 3-page 2
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you have posted this on DMG blog too right?

rahul proposing ridz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heyy dear
nice part
cont soon
n plzz pm me whenever u upddate
thx
dhrvuvika

awesome


pls continue soon


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Kamal

Hey guys! here is PART 2!

Sheena - yes of course! how can i have nikki but not abhi? i think all of our old dmg gang will be a part of it :D

also everyone that would like a pm please add me to your buddy list so it will be easier :D

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Part 2:

Riddhima: *looks around and sees everyone staring at her waiting for her answer* YES! of course i'll marry you!

Shanshank, Padma, Nani, Anjali, Atul, and Nikki come running up to the two and congratulate them!

Suddenly lights go dim and Armaan is seen with a guitar in hand on the dance floor/stage
only atul notices that his eyes are brimming with tears...

Everybody's lookin' for love, oh, oh
Ain't that the reason you're at this club, oh, oh
You ain't gon' find it dancin' wit' him, no hoh
I got a better solution for you, girl, oh, oh
(he's looking directly at ridz, but she doesnt realize his truely meaning every word)
Just leave wit' me now
Say the word and we'll go
I'll be your teacher; I'll show you the ropes
You'll see a side of love you've never known
I can see it goin' down,goin' dowhown
(he remembers there time on the plane/airport)
In my head, I see you all over me,
In my head, you fulfill my fantasy
In my head, you'll be screamin', ooooh
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head, yeah, in my head, oh, yeah
(looking at rahul)
Some dudes know all the right things to say
When it comes down to it, it's all just game yeah
Instead of talkin', let me demonstrate, yeah
Get down to business and skip foreplay
Ay yeah
(goes over and pulls nikki and muski)
Just leave wit' me now
Say the word and we'll go (And we'll go)
I'll be your teacher; I'll show you the ropes (You the ropes)
You'll see a side of love you've never known
I can see it goin' down, we're goin' down
(walkiing towards riddhima)
In my head, I see you all over me
In my head, you fulfill my fantasy
(her heart is racing but she can't pinpoint why - is she nervous that he'll pull her onstage too?)
In my head, you'll be screamin' ooooh
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head,
(he walks right past her without glancing back at her and pulls ANJI, padma and nani in!
Break it down
Ayooo ayooo ayooo
You singin' to me, baby, in my head right now
Ayooo ayooo ayooo
She'll be screamin' out when it all goes down

Just leave with me now
Say the word and we'll go
I'll be your teacher; I'll show you the ropes
You'll see a side of love you've never known
I can see it goin' down, we're goin' down

In my head, I see you all over me
In my head, you fulfill my fantasy
In my head, you'll be screamin' ooooh
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head, it's goin' down
(rahul pulls riddhima and they dance near muski and armaan - who are now dancing together)
In my head, I see you all over me
In my head, you fulfill my fantasy
In my head, you'll be screamin' out
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head, it's goin' down
In my head

Riddhima: OMG Rahul yeh to Armaan hai! Meri Plane buddy! the one i told you about! lekin yeh yahaan?
she is about to run upto him when suddenly..rahul asks
Rahul: Bare Pops kaha hai? i havent seen him for quite some time....

(actually rahuls parents are no more, so his grandpa - bare pops, raised him with the help of the guptas. Bare pops is very old and owns the business and private hospital, as well as most of the mumbai!)

Everyone starts looking for 'bare pops' when suddenly the lights go out for a split second.

Suddenly they flicker back on and Shubanker is seen running down the stairs yelling "koi doctor ko buloy! jaaldi! police police!"

Suddenly keerti, shashank, rahul, anji, atul, nikki, (who are all doctors in the same hospital) and padma (a nurse in the same hospital) yell out together: Kya hua DR. Shubankar? tum bhi to doctor ho!

Then Riddhima notices that her pyaara Shubankar uncle is out of the sorts! so she runs to him and calmly asks kya hua? sub kuch teek hai na? (actually Riddhima is also a doctor but she works in the US - in maryland. At John Hopkins University)

Subhankar: woh woh Bare Pops, mein upar gaya tha usko dhune, aur woh library mein hai, lekin bohat saara blood hai har jaga... aur ek knife be hai uski stomach mein....i think kisne uska murder kiya...please jaldi chalo mera saat.. shayad use save kar paloon?

They all rush up to the library to see Bare pops

meanwhile - Mr. Khanna, a close friend of the Gupta's, Garewal's, and Joshi's, had already called the police a was greeting a VERY hunky looking police officer with various tattoos on his arm. (Any guesses who it is Sheena? ITS NONE OTHER THAN Officer ABHIMANYU MODI - he's not a doctor in my ff - sorry guys!)

Abhi: No body leaves the premises. NOBODY. Now where is the body?

Mr. Khanna takes abhi (and his team) up to the library, but not even Abhi the homicide inspector was in for what he was about the witness.

The scene was in fact much worse than what Subhankar had described. There was blood all over the place, Bare Pops was stabbed multiple times and it was clear he died on spot. None of the doctors had been able to go inside.

Rahul was inconsolable he was on the floor crying like no other while everyone was trying to console him - though the rest of them were crying too.

Atul on the other hand had passed out on seeing the scene and Anji was trying to revive him!

While Abhi's team began searching the scene and gathering any possible evidence - like the knife and fingerprints off walls/doors/ect ect., Abhi was busy staring at Nikki. She too was crying and though due to his job he was used to seeing people cry for the first time in his life his heart ached seeing someone else cry. He wanted to go up to her and "kiss away her tears" - he thought this to himself, then realizing what he was thinking he got back into his 'working mode.'

The medic on the team looks at the body and says that it could not have happened more than 20 minutes ago.

Abhi: Where were all of you this past half an hour?

They all explain that they were all downstairs for the festivities and that anyone can downstairs can vouch for them.

Abhi seems to believe them but decide not to rule anyone out - except for Atul because a man who fainted at the sight could not have commited the crime.

The medics take the body up and tell them they can have the library cleaned as they are done taking evidence - and statements from everyone downstairs.

Meanwhile Muskaan was busy consoling Rahul. while riddhima decided to take her nani downstairs as nani was already very weak.

Since they were all staying at the Joshi Mansion, nani had a room downstairs. After leaving nani in her room, Riddhima ran out of the room and began crying. She had no idea when she bumped into a pair of strong arms who caught her immeadiately. Without thinking twice she hugged this mysterious muscle man and began crying on his chest. He was about to say something to her when she fainted.
The strong man carried Ridzy out to the garden.

Who is this mystery man? who killed bare pop?

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That's it for now guys! 2 updataes in one day is pretty good:D
i need to study now so i'll be back tom or maybe saturday!

woah
nice twist dear
cant wait to read more
cont soon
n thx for pm
dhruvika

amazing parts

Awesome.....and thanks for bringing in Abhi!

nice part