(MG) FF~Jab Sparks Flew *Part 12,Page 40* - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Loveeeeeee the part.
It is sooo funnyyyyyy.
Plzz continue soon.
Next time update longer part.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

really awesome

loved it
very beautiful.........keep writing



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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Firstly, I'm glad you put a recap..it jogs your memory so you can enjoy the update to it's full potential 😃😃😃

A suggestion...it may be easier for you to write a smaller recap i.e. 1 or 2 lines 😊

Back to the update...

This was really good! Already Maan is thinking about Geet 😉😉😉

The entry of Rajji was hilarious! And Maan's reaction 🤣

Please do continue asap and don't forget to PM me when you next update ⭐️

P.S. I understand you were sleepy and school tomorrow, so I'll let you off for not PMing me this time 😛😛😛

Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
wow loved it yaar can u plz add me in pm list for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Lol! Really nice ff!
Hilarious!!
Please add me to the PM list and update soon!
Thanks!
Take Care =)
Nupur
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
She'll be disclosed about after a few parts..I was going to put her in this part but it would bring in too much drama in the beginning of the drama...so it'll be coming up after a few parts...

Originally posted by: arthirajendiran

oh man ur r really hilarious.i am literally laughing. my stomach is aching . u mentioned abt pari were is she

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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
hehehehe totally luving daadi!!!! tryna fix up maan's rishta as well!!
hehe ooooooo wats this pari chakkar - hmm i have a few ideas but i prefer to let the suspense unfold in case im horribly rong!!!!!
cnt wait for the next update
luv the title
plzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hi galz....Really really really SORRY for not having updated in all these days..Please forgive me...
Was just being lazy....sorry...

Anyways,here's the next part~~~

Recap ~ Maan meets Rajji and Rajji goes into a 'HOT' daze.Geet comes to her rescue.

Part 4

''Rajji!!!!(shaking her violently,really annoyed)''was all Geet could say. Geet was embarrassed due to her immature sister who was putting her sanity in jeopardy. But that fool was oblivious to her surroundings,more importantly Maan's fast-forward mind which was buzzing with all types of absurd thoughts.

Maan had mentally decided to get an appointment with the physiatrist for the silly girl in her teens standing before him,having a major crush on a 28 year old man.He was about to voice out his suggestion when he saw another crazy girl doing something totally absurd.Yes,of coz,that was Geet.

*Splash*Rajji was drenched. Crazy kudi Geet had emptied a bucket of freezing water onto Rajji.''DI!!!!!!!Aap pagal ho???Yeh kis liye tha??''screamed Rajji,depicting the perfect immature girl.

Her shrieks made everyone regain their senses.

''Shukar hai babaji!Thank you so much!Kam se kam yeh ab hosh mein toh hai.(to her babaji)..(turns to Rajji)Arre Rajji tu bheeg kaise gayi?''smirked Geet.

''Di!!!!Aapko mazak soojh raha hai???Aapne aisa kyun kiya??''said Rajji.
''Tujhe kya ho gaya tha?Iss NOT-SO-HOT idiot ko itna kyun ghoor rahi thi?''retorted Geet.
Maan gave her a glare which she totally ignored.

She continued.''Ab jaa apne kapde badal le!!(Rajji wan't willing to budge)so Geet took the bottle of Coke near her and removed its cover,ready to empty that on her stubborn sister.''Dekh main yeh tujhpe daal dungi!(still no response)Main mazak nahi kar rahi hoon..main sach mein daal dungi!''threatened Geet

Geet was just about to empty all of the contents of the 1.5 litre bottle of sugary liquid when her mom intruded in the spectacle that they had made of themselves.Rano(mom) just dragged Rajji into one of the rooms when Dadi burst into laughter as Maan's shoulder and face where the samosas landed and to top them,was some chutney.

Despite the glare that Maan gave her,she didn't stop laughing,In fact,soon the entire hall was filled with roars of laughter which were eating Maan's head as he was the laughing stock.He SO regretted ,having ever agreed to come to this crazy place.

After 5 mins,Rano returned with a towel in her hands.She handed him the towel and told him to clean himself.He smiled at her like a 5 year old who had just gotten new clothes and snatched the towel from the motherly figure and wiped his face and shoulders.

''Arre yeh sadu hasta bhi hai???Not bad huh?''said Geet to herself but that comment didn't go unheard.Everyone heard it and was again laughing.A pang of jealousy hit NT.''Why is Geet di stealing all my limelight??Isn't it my day?''

However, that only worsened his appearance. The chutney has smeared across his face and Geet burst into fits of laughter, was close to rolling on the floor.Maan was bewildered by her innocent laughter but he was also puzzled at the same time as he didn't know about his appearance.Geet decided to pity him and dragged a reluctant Maan to the bathroom in her room.

''What the hell is she doing?Whose room is this?''His question was answered as he saw the princess-style(no pinks,only rusty golden,antique looking stuff) interior design of Geet's room,with a picture in a huge,majestic-looking frame with a picture of her and Rajji.

Geet pushed open the door of her pearlie white bathroom and showed him his face.He was flabbergasted.He got the shock of his life.The MSK was covered in some silly chutney.She isolated him,allowing him to remove his shirt to wash his face as it would wet his shirt.After 5 mins,he came out.However,there was still some sauce left on his lips.Geet saw that.

Geet indicated him to clean his face properly but he just couldn't get the right spot.Geet leaned forward and touched his lips.That moment was totally picture perfect.Full of bliss.It portrayed what one would do for her husband.If any stranger had walked in,he would've thought that they were a typical husband-wife.

They were in an eyelock (imagine MAHIIII!!!!!) when Geet slipped onto the towel which Maan had dropped.This added to the romantic aura in the air.Just then, Dadi walked in. She was about to call Maan when she saw her potential bahu in her grandson's arms.They looked perfect.

I think that's it for now.I'm kinda tired..will continue soon..I know I should stop at such a place but I am really tired.

So how was this part?Is it getting boring in here?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
nice part...................but i'm not getting pms....😔
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
😍😍DREAMY(THINK LIKE PARI SAY'S😍) UPDATE YAAR👏PLZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST AND SEND NEXT PART SOON😊

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