(MG) FF~Jab Sparks Flew *Part 12,Page 40*

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Hi people...I am Shaila...
I was bored at home wasting away,trying to kill time as I was,I mean I am hungry!!!!
Anyways,that's not the point...
The point is that I feel like writing...actually,it is kind of stupid...I had this idea since a long time but I never thought I'd post it on IF..It was originally an idea for my FF but i wrote something else for my FF so I am...okay,okay I should just start...Sorry,I bak bak too much 😳

PS:Not all the characters are in the same roles...however,that isn't so importnant...Hope you enjoy😉

The prologue

''Maan, aap itna bhi nahi karsakte apni choti behen ke liye?NT ka dill toot jaye ga agar aap hamare saath Dev ke ghar nahi gayye...Aapko pata hai na,ki aapki behen ki Dev ke saath shaadi kitni mushkilon ke baad ho rahi hai?Usko kaisa lagega agar uske pyare bhaiyya uske saath nahi jayenge shagun leke!'' pleaded dadima.

Maan had made up his mind.He was NOT going to Dev's house,not even for NT.Dadi knew the reason why he was refusing to go.It was Dev itself. Dev was the reason itself.Maan wasn't very fond of Dev,in fact he hated Dev.If not for NT,Maan would have killed Dev long time back.

Why all this hatred? Of coz,he was MSK so he had a reason for everything.Behind his tough exterior was his dark past which caused him the same horrendous nightmare every night.What was his dark secret?How did it involve Dev?Could Maan ever break out of the walls that he had built in all these years?Could he finally open the doors to his heart?Could he ever live again?Could he ever breathe again?Could he ever love again?


So fellow Maneetians,how is so far?
Should I continue?
I will write a few more parts(2 or 3)so please tell me if I should continue it....
I really need your input so please help...
Thanks 🤪


INDEX
Part 1 - Page 4
Part 2 - Page 5
Part 3 - Page 9
Part 4 - Page 11
Part 5 - Page 15
Part 6 - Page 22
Part 7 - Page 29
Part 8 - Page 29
Part 9 - Page 29
Part 10 - Page 33
Part 11 - Page 36
Part 12 - Page 40
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..Naina.. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣Maan and NT siblings?! haha that sounds greatt :) and😲 Maan's past and secrets....wonder what they are :) this sounds awesome...do continue soon! and thanks for the pm!

~Naina
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Glad you liked it...Yes i will continue soon,actually not that soon...If Ii don't do it today,it is only going to be on Saturday or Sunday coz tmr is Eid so I don't think I will be able to...Anyways,thanks for liking it and also commenting 😆

Originally posted by: Naina2127

🤣Maan and NT siblings?! haha that sounds greatt :) and😲 Maan's past and secrets....wonder what they are :) this sounds awesome...do continue soon! and thanks for the pm!

~Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg Dear it really sounds interesting nd something Different. Maan nd NT are siblings🤣. i hope Dev nd Geet were siblings too 🤣well jokes apart i really liked it pls continue it soon nd add me to ur PM list
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LMAO, Maan and NT, brother and sister?🤣🤣 I just can't help myself by reading that ....No offence, do continue, dear, it sure looks promising, all the best...let me know, when ever possible I will read and let you know my views
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OMG NT is Maan's Sister..................
Thats very Interesting
Pls Update Soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting twist .... i wanna know more ...do continue!!!

love,
niha
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Wow...looks like everyone is shocked by the fact that Maan and NT are siblings in the story....Well,there's much more that will surprise you...So sit back and enjoy...Thanks a lot for liking my idea...Really shocked...didn't expect this much of response....thanks anyways guys...thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

Wow...looks like everyone is shocked by the fact that Maan and NT are siblings in the story....Well,there's much more that will surprise you...So sit back and enjoy...Thanks a lot for liking my idea...Really shocked...didn't expect this much of response....thanks anyways guys...thanks

We just Love ur Idea
Eagerly waiting for the next Update😍
So Pls Pls Pls Update ASAP
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Posted: 15 years ago
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do continue...btw maan n nt siblings.. 🤣

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