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Posted: 15 years ago
Happy Birthday dear.
amazing part.loved it.
continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi just few days ago came across ur ff. Read it from start as i like it. Thanks 4 pm. Wish u a very Happy Birthday. Ur idea of celebration by writing 3 - 4 parts is really appreciative n amusing.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 39

Maan is discharged from the hospital the next morning and is not happy seeing that Geet is not around to take him. He wonders, 'Geet mujhe lene nahi aaye, aisa toh ho nahi sakta. Woh raat ke beech mein chali gayi tab hi mujhe ajeeb laga tha. Dev se pouchta houn.' He turns to Dev and asks, 'Geet kaha hai aur woh kyun nahi aayi?' Dev replies, 'Mujhe nahi pata, Bro. Woh subah kahi chali gayi. Maine poucha toh bas itna kaha ke main aapko pick up karloun. Sab theek hai na.' Maan nods and thinks, ?'Yeh toh ghar pohoch kar hi pata chalega na? Kuch sahi nahi hai.' Geet's hesitant eyes come in front of him and he leaves with Dev in a hurry.

Maan enters the room and finds the lights are switched off and there is just one candle lit up on Geet's dressing table. He switches on the light and goes towards the table. Geet has placed a photo of Maan with Dev and Dadima along with a letter for Maan. He rushes around the room and looks for her everywhere. He sees the cupboard and is confused to see that her clothes are still here. He is upset and opens the letter quickly so see what she has said.

Maan, kal aapne apni jaan par khelkar Naintara ka gira hua khel kamyaab hone diya. Main nahi janti ke aap kya karna chahte hai lekin agar aapka iraada yeh hai ke ek baar phir meri zindagi se khushiyan chali jaaye toh main aapka saath nahi de paoungi. Aapka maksad mere liye badla lena hai aur mera aapko zinda rakhna. Aapne itna bada faisla akele le liya aur mujhe ek baar bhi nahi bataya ke shayad kal subah ke baad main aapko dekhne nahi wali thi. Bharosa karke dekhte, Maan. Main aapko nahi rokti. Kal mera darr wapas aa gaya aur iss darr ke saath main kaise jee sakti houn?

Maan does not continue the letter and just takes it in his hand and rushes out. Dev and Dadima insist that he stays but he firmly says that this is important and leaves. He gets in to his car and hits the steering wheel, 'Matlab Geet ne Aditi aur meri baatein sun li. Dammit. Woh sunkar toh woh darr hi jayegi na. Maan, tera dimaag kharab hai. Socha bhi nahi ke Geet aas paas hi toh thi kal shaam. Lekin main use dhoondounga kaha?' He goes to Rajji in the outhouse, Sameera and Aditi's place but they do not know where she is and have not heard from her. He is disappointed and angry that she just left. He is driving around looking for her and goes over their moments together from their wedding night to them on the hospital bed. His eyes are welling up with frustation and he continues to drive.

Yeh Ishq Ki Hai Raah Mein Jin Pe Chal Raha Hoon
Is Aag Mein Na Jaane Kab Se Main Jal Raha Hoon
Main To Hoon Tera Deewana Tune Mujhko Na Pehchaana
Dilbar Mere Aisa Na Kar Chahat Mein Tu Ruswa Na Kar
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

He suddenly remembers that he has not checked at Pinky house. He turns his car to go to her. Geet is sitting with Pinky crying and telling her, 'Samajh nahi aata, Pinky. Babaji kya kar rahe hai. Mujhe pyaar diya toh kis ghar main. Waha jaha par dadima ke ilawa koi hamare aane se khush nahi hai. Maine jo kiya hai woh sahi hai, hai na? Tu bata na Pinky.' Pinky is about to answer when the doorbell rings. Pinky tells Geet thhat she will check since it might be her dad. Geet thinks, 'Aap mujhe maaf nahi kar payenge, Maan. Lekin mere liye meri aapki maafi nahi aapki zindagi zaroori hai. Main yaha se chale jaoungi, Rajji ke saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karoungi. Agar meri zindagi mein bhaagna hi likha hai babaji ne toh main yeh akele karoungi, Maan, akele.'

The door opens behind Geet and she says, 'Tu uncle se baat kar legi na, Pinky. Do din ki hi baat hai phir main Rajji ko lekar Mumbai chali jaoungi.' Maan hears her sadly and says, 'Aur mujhse se baat kaun karega Geet.' Geet gets shocked listening to Maan's voice. She gets up from the bed and turns around to see him. She says, 'Aap ghar se nikle kyun, Maan? Aapke zakhm bhi nahi bhare ab tak.' Maan says, 'Tum in zakhmon ki baat kar rahi ho, Geet? Aur uss zakhm ka kya jiski tum abhi baat kar rahi thi.' His pain is clearly reflected in his eyes. He conitnues, 'Yeh zakhm bhar jayenge lekin jo tum dogi woh toh mere marne par hi bharenge.'

Geet stops him and says, 'Please Maan. Aisi baatein mat keejiye.' Maan passionately replies, 'Main toh baatein kar raha houn, Geet. Tum ek khat peech chodkar meri zindagi se chali gayi. Kya samajhti ho tum? Mazaak hai, aaj pyaar, kal shaadi parson judaai. Main tumhe kahi nahi jaane dounga. Samjhi tum?' Geet helplessly replies, 'Aap samajhte kyun nahi, Maan?' Maan calmly replies, 'Toh tum samjhao, Geet. Kyun jaa rahi thi tum? Aur tumne kaise soch liya ke tum kahogi aur main tumhe jaane dounga.' Geet breathlessly starts off, 'Maan, aap ek insan ke liye char zindagiyan barbaad karne nikle hai. Yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai. Main kaise apne aap ko yeh samjhaoun ke mere liye ek bhai doosre ke khilaaf chala gaya. Main aapki zindagi mein aayi isliye aapko pata chala na, Maan ke Dev aur Naintara ne mere saath galat kiya warna aap kabhi nahi jante? Dadima ko yeh sab pata chala toh un par kya bitegi? Socha hai aapne? Pyaar mein apno ko kaise bhool gaye aap.'

Geet turns away from him and he pulls her back forcefully. He looks deeply in to her eyes and says, 'Geet, baat yeh nahi hai ke mein kya nahi jaan sakta tha. Baat yeh hai ke main kya janta houn. Tum yeh baat toh nahi badal sakti na? Tumhe kya laga ke tum chali jaogi toh main Dev aur Naintara ko maaf kar dounga aur Naintara chain se baith jaegi. Nahi Geet, tumhare jaate bhi yeh kahani ko main poori karounga aur agar tum yaha se chali gayi toh apne aap ko bhi.' Geet holds him closer, 'Kyun baar baar yeh kehkar mujhe takleef de rahe hai, Maan?' Maan sees her intently and says, 'Takleef tum de rahi ho, Geet, tum. Tum meri khushi ke liye balki apne guilt ke liye yeh kar rahi ho. Lekin main tumhe pehle keh chuka houn aur aaj phir keh raha houn, galati tumhari nahi hai. Toh apne aapko ilzaam mat do.'

She sits on the bed and cries looking at him. He kneels in front of her and says, 'Geet, tum mere saath chal rahi ho. Nahi, kuch bolna mat. Main tumhe kho nahi sakta, marte dum tak nahi. Lekin ek vaade ke saath. Aage jaakar tumne dobara mujhe chodne ki baat ki toh bohot bura hoga. Mere pyaar ko meri kamzori mat banne do Geet. Meri himmat bano. Sahi karne mein mera saath do. Main har cheez sambhal lounga, tum saath ho toh. Ek baar phir haath barha raha houn, Geet. Iss baar hamesha ke liye tham lo isse.' He puts his hand out and she looks at it. She sees the perseverance in his eyes and the pain that she caused. She takes hold of it and he pulls her into a kiss which she readily returns. She thinks to herself, 'Iss baar main kahi nahi jaoungi Maan. Mera vaada hai aapse.'

Edited by premmukti4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Happy Birthday Dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Enjoy ur Day................................
Hamein gift dena chahiya tumhe apni Birthday par. Lekin Ulta Tumne hi humein 3 khoobsoorat Updates di hain.
Thanq sooooooooooooooooooooo much Dear
Thats Fabulous Dear
Loved all the Updates
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooo much when Daadi said
'Woh toh hai Geet beta lekin badi bahu ka darja toh kuch aur hi hota hai na?'
Loved the way Geet spoke to NT
wow Dev Slapped NT.................
OMG how can NT planned such a thing of Harming Maan.
OMG The 29th part is soooooooooooooooo touching
This line is soooooooo touching
'Yeh zakhm bhar jayenge lekin jo tum dogi woh toh mere marne par hi bharenge.'
The whole Update is just wonderful
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by .sireesha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanaa,
God you are on such a roll!!
Poor Geet feels so bad for Maan that she decides to leave!!
Glad he found her ..
ab NT aur Dev ko aisa nach nichoa ke sab to mazaa ajayae!!
much love,
Uzma xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
me 1st.................
wow wat a wonderful conversation ..
both very caring for each other.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part. geet again try sacrifice for maan's life
thank God maan stop her.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
love u so speedy update nice 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!....three parts in a day!...amazing!...
thankgod!...geet decided to stay with maan!....
continue soon!
HAPPYYY BIRTHDAYYYY!!!!=)

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