SR FF - My Heart Will Go On upt part 6 pg43 & VM - Page 41

Originally posted by: monar

good one harshu, i loved each and every part of this FF

and guess what I dont have to wait for next part 😆😆

bring up the next one soon

Mona ji🤗

thank u soooo much

i am glad u liked it😃

Harshu, I finished all of it!👏👏

Kudos to you for compeleting it and keeping your readers engaged. There was a lot of drama, but I found that made me want to read further. Plus, I appreciate your use of Hindi dialouge. I know its hard to speak and even harder to write, but it adds a factor of realism. The final part was 😲 Man, Mrs. Modi is something🤣 I think that was a "mere dil ka tumse hai kehna, bas mere hi rehna" moment😳 And Sid, as usual, only thinking about her comfort, 😍 I have to admit, I thought the last part was kind of rushed in transition from what had just happened. But then again, I understand where you're coming from. Lovely story hun, hope you grace us with more, 🤗

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Harshu, I finished all of it!👏👏

Kudos to you for compeleting it and keeping your readers engaged. There was a lot of drama, but I found that made me want to read further. Plus, I appreciate your use of Hindi dialouge. I know its hard to speak and even harder to write, but it adds a factor of realism. The final part was 😲 Man, Mrs. Modi is something🤣 I think that was a "mere dil ka tumse hai kehna, bas mere hi rehna" moment😳 And Sid, as usual, only thinking about her comfort, 😍 I have to admit, I thought the last part was kind of rushed in transition from what had just happened. But then again, I understand where you're coming from. Lovely story hun, hope you grace us with more, 🤗

Cheers,
dc

Neetu 🤗

so atlast u hav read d whole FF😆😆

and thank u sooooooooo much 4 these lovely words😳

abt d hindi dialouge , i think it feels more realistic & d actual feeling can b expressed in a much better way😉

again thanx dear😳

^^ Harshu, I agree about the Hindi and its expressiveness completely. It flows better when you know what to say and how to say it in that particular way. However, I've had complaints that ppl can't understand it, so I tend to add translations sometimes. Anyways, 👍🏼

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

^^ Harshu, I agree about the Hindi and its expressiveness completely. It flows better when you know what to say and how to say it in that particular way. However, I've had complaints that ppl can't understand it, so I tend to add translations sometimes. Anyways,👍🏼

Cheers,
dc

ya i know some people can't understand it well

i hav posted d translated part on Wahi's site😉