SAJAN FF-KISMAT K KEHLL.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
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its on ff on sajan curent track....but with cahnges....sajan find out nupur alive n mayank is admited in hospital by nupur n sajan n maynk meet nupur in mayanks ward...

mayanks pov

nupur tmney itney saal kuin door rahe kya kasor tha mera

nupur s pov

mere behan aur merey pati ney mjhey jetey jee mar dya mjhey aik baar bhe nahn pocha

gunjan s pov

dii tiney saal mjsey dor rahe unho ney aik martaba bhe merey barey mein jananey k koshish nahn k

smrat s pov

yeh sab merey waja sey suffer kar rahe hain.....

at hosiptal

nupur mayank n gunjan teeling each other their povv..n almost yeeling at each other...

smrat couldnt saw it n break down...thirce stop for moment as hears sobss...which smrat put hand on mouth...they all three got shock seeing his condition like a two years child......

s:i am sorry tm teno ney teen saal mere waja sey itna suffer kya i am soory mjhey mafi mat do beshak par plzz tum log is trah mat laro mein sab kcuh seh sakta hon par apney doston ko yun larta huwa nahn dekh sakta....mein tm teno ko hamesha kush dekhna chahta tha hon aur rahon ga...par tum teno ko meri galti k saja mile...mayank nupur apni jagah pe aur nupur mayank apni jagah pe tekh hai plzzz..tum dono aik dosrey ko maff kar do...kuink tum teno ney teeen saal guzarey hain aik dosrey k bina shaid ab to tum dono aik dosrey k ahmiat ko jaan pae ho gey...

nupur n mayank had tearss..mayank offerd nupur hand she acceptd both hugged each other n all anger vanished....

s:nupur gunjan ney tmahrey bina bohat suffer kya hai usney apni di ko apni maa ko khoya tha iselea gunjan tmsey yeh sawal kar rahe hai k tm ney usk barey mein kuin nahn jananey k koshish k tm to jante the na wo zinda hai gunjan nhan jante the iselea usney tmhey contact nahn kya warna batao mjhey kya koi us behan k begair reh sakta hai jis ney usey ungli pakar k chalna sekhaya hoo aur gunjan is mein nupur ka bhe kasor nahn kuin k usey laga k tm logo ko us k fiqar nahn aur yeh to normal hai jab humey koi imp nahn deta to hum bhe nahn detey....nupur tum gunjan k bina aur gunjan nupur k bina udhurii haii........

nupur open arms n gunjan rushed to hug her n the two sisters hugged to feel each toher pains

g:i am sory dii...

n:mjhey bhe maf kar dey gunajn

g:di aesey nahn bolo...they wipe tears n when thrice look aat smrat s direction didnt find him..gunjan s body was shivering her legs were not abel to made her stand....she just rushed outside....where nupue asked mayank what had hapend bw them maynak told her n she cried n hugged mayank

on other side

as samrat saw them haappy he move outside....his place was not there..he unknowingly come to roof of hospital n moved towrds edge

s:cahsmsih mjhey maff kar dena par mera tmharey begair jena muhkil he nahn na mumkin in teen salon mein mein ney bohat koshish par tmahrey begair jena na sekh saka...i hope tm mayank aur nupur k sath kush raho aur mjhey bhol jao ya bhol chuki ho...aur merey chaley janey sey he sab kuch tekh ho ga..he heard gunjan shouts..turned

g:samrrrrrrrrraaaatttttttttt...ruko plzzz...plzzz aesa mat karna.........tmharey janey sey kuch tekh nahn ho ga..kuch bhe nahn hoga..

s:hoga chasmish

g:nahn hoga kuch bhe tekh aik maa apna beta kho dey ge(took step towrds egde)aik behan apna bhae kho dey ge(take another step)aik dosst apna bhaiyon jasa dost kho dey ga apna best compitetor kho de ga(he moves to edge).........aik dost apna best fun loving partner kho dey ge.(take another step)....aik larki apna sab kuch kho dey ge....sab kuch kho dey ge(thought for a moment n take another step)..last step was about to put in air when.....aik angel apney dad ko kho dey ge(he shoked n came a little near to her).

s:kya kaha??

g:han aik angel jis ney aj tak apney dad ko nahn dekha jo rozana sirf aik he shaks ka pochte hai dad kab aein gey.......gunjan was totally broken..tmhare bete samrat han tmhare bete...smrat came to her n hold her by shoulders tightly.....his eyes full of hurt anger

s:gunjan itne bare sachae tum ney mjsey chupae itney bare sachae

g:samrat plzz mere baat suno

s:kuch bhe nahn bach gunajn kuch bhe nahn...he left she tried to stop but he didnt....she was totally shaterd...smrat wnet from there in high sped he dont know what to do.........he just goes to a lonley place n cried his heart a loud.....

gunjan moved to mayank s ward n told nupur n mayank also about it...as expext her no1 knows reality.........both shocked n also shocked at samrat s reaction gunjan huggd nupur n nupur hugged back......tried to cosole her.......

nxt day gunjan got smrat s call

g:samrat plzz aik dafa...he cut her

s:mjhey angel sey milna hai abhe

g;tm mayank k ghar a jaoo......

smrat cut call n came there in 15 mins...mayur was not at home ......gunjan opend door smrat didnt see her...

s:angel

g:wo udhar room mein..gunjan was hurt but she knows she deserve it........ smrat slowly opened door n found a baby girl of 2 years 3 months...he came to her sat kneed down on florr.his tearss just coming out of eyes.....as he saw her he was just statue she wass too much beautiful her features resembles him......he cant describe her beauty he hold her tiny hand n cresed it made her hand move on his face....then he get up sat on bed...kised her forehead ..angel smiled in slepp...cheks hands..due to his kisses her slep disturbed she opened eyes just having same colur like gunjan having a spark like her.....she smiled at him...smrat smiled back he lift her ..his hands was shivering but he some how manged to lift her...placed her in lap....n kissed her on forehead....n made her stand on his legs..smrat was smiling..tears also showering from eyes.....

a:dad....in a babish voice.........smrat couldnt believe...her voice same as like gunjan s same smile...he just hugged her....

s:meri princesss...as his hug was tight she cried a bit......gunjan who was watching it had tearss n came to him

g;smrat usey dard ho raha hai...smrat broke hug quickly n wipe angels tears.......

s:i am soory princess...... i am sorry....he agian showers kisses on her face which she likes n smile...soon smrat n angel was playing n smrat was soo much egrossed in playing that he didnt know when it passed 5 hourss....but for him it was just a second...angel start crying....gunjan came who had went to make her milk.........

g:smrat angel ko bhok lage hai mjhey dena mein usey dhodh pila don phir le lena......she didnt see him as she know she had to face his eyes full of harted.........smrat silently gave her.....gunjan sit on bed near him smrt sat at a distance...gunjan noticed n a tear fall but she removed it...she make angel lye in her lap.....n made her drink her feder.....smrat was just smiling seeing angel s face...angel was doing masti with him even drinking milk.....after milk gunjan gave back to him..n left the place as she couldnt bear him ignoring her moree........................it was dinner tym when angel slepping n samrat stiill lokking at her...gunajn came n placed hand on shoulder...smrat look at her then at hand n removed it....gunjan again hurt

g:smrat khana kha lo

s:mjhey bhok nahn hai.....

g:tmney.......he leave place....as he was leaving mayur was at eerance door.....smrat saw them n wipe tear n smiled n hugged mayank

s;hi dude hi nupur kasey ho tum dono

m:kasey lag rahe hain

s:kush...smrat smiled n mayur smiled back...aesey he rehna....

m:jin ka itna acha dost ho wo bhala khahn dukhi ho saktey hain....smrat tried to smiled.....

g:jeju di mein ney khana laga dya hai a ke kha lein n she also gestured to make him stop

s:mein chalte hon

n:nahn samrat diner hmarey...

s:phir kise aur din mein bus angel sey milney aya tha

m:hmsey koi rishta nahn hai

s:aesa nahn hai mayank

n:to phir dinner k lea rukh rahe hooo yeh mrs nupur sharma ka oder hai..smrat smiled

m:ab bolo

s:mrs.nupur shrma ko kon mana kar sakta hai....mayur smiled...sajan also...

at dinner tabel....gunjan seved everyone but samrat didnt allowd her she didnt control n went away

n:gunajn tu ney...

g:di ap log khao mera abhe man nahn hai.......

she again tried to left when heard a strong voice

s:gunajn khana khaoo....

she cant refusd him...mayur knows he didnt forgive her n also understands smrat s situation n they gave him tym....so that he could decide beter

she sit beside him but samrat didnt look at her for once.......after dinner samrat left

note:plzz coment...shall i continue????????

Edited by meerrii - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear nice one loved it ya do continue soon
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its really nice..... pls pls pls continue
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itss really very nicee....plzz do continueeeeeeeee
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Congo for ur new ff n i loveeeeee da concept loveee how Sammy reunite mayur n gunur awesome bt wen gunji told Sammy truth dat dey r mom dad he got mad n he is rite to be angry anyways den loveeeee how he playing wid angel awww so cutee bt poor gunji Sammy not talking to her n all loved it do continue soon plzzzzz
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luved ur new ff.......plz continue.........good 2 find samrat retaliating back......in d show it seems he has got no self respect.......bt here by showing his anger...m happy u r showing his ryt emotions............plz continue...........plz give angel sum other name.......maybe sanaya......coz angel luks 2 filmy...........keep a plot lyk........angel is her pet name bt her real name is sanaya.............
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congo for ur new ff!!!!!
nice one

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fabulous ff....plssssssss cont soon.....thanks for pm
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Congratulations on your new Ff.The concept of the story is awesome.Love the twist.please continue soon..
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plz cont soon.awww and sajans angel luved it

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