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Posted: 15 years ago

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Now the shaadi part also went well....Raj n Naina's varmaala scene was really nice...and the seven vows....even they r nice...and seems blissful!! And the money session was going well...until those guys interfered however Raj did take care.....otherwise shayad bekaar me hungama ho jata...

And yeah....Aalekh-Nupur scene or interactions.....were also very nice.

Enjoyed reading all these Vertika....now w8ing for more.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part 22:-

He was no where to be seen. Naina understood and Lakshmi jee too. "Tum ruko mai abhi us ko le kar aa rahi hoon."

She went to his room and found it locked from inside. "Alekh," she called.

"Maa," he opened the door.

"Tu yahan kya kar raha hai? Chal Naina tujhe neeche bula rahi hai." She said.

"Mujhe nahi jaana maa," he denied.

"Par kyoun?" she asked.

"Bus maa, mai us ko vida hote hue nahi dekh paaonga." He said and his heavy voice clearly told that how much he cried for his sister.

"Par beta ek baat bata, tere aisa karne se Naina ko kitna dukh hoga socha hai tune?"

"Maa par mai kya karoon? Naina meri behan hi nahi, meri sab se acchi dost bhi hai. Aaj us ko koi mere se humesha k liye door le jaa raha hai. Batao mai kaise aisa hote hue dekh sakta hoon." He started crying now us ka dard Lakshmi jee acche se samajh rahi thi.

"Ek baat bata, jis tarah se aaj Naina jaa rahi hai vaise hi kal Priya bhi chali jaayegi to bhi tu aise hi baitha rahega ye sochte hue ki kaise vidaa karne jaaye tu us ko?"

"Maa, aap nahi samajh rahe ho. Naina aur Priya me bahut difference hai. Maine us ko humesha bahut mana hai ek behan se jyada. Yaad hai maa kaise bachpan me vo meri ungli pakad k chalti thi aur agar kabhi kahin gir jaati to sab se pehle mujhe bulati thi aur apna dard dikhati thi. Aaj bhi mai us ki khamoshi aur udasi acche se padh leta hoon. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai maa ki na jaane vo kaun sa rishta hai hum me jo hume ek doosre k itna kareeb le aaya." And he eyes got moistened once again.

In sab baton me jo baat bahut der se Lakshmi jee ne notice ki hai vo thi ki Alekh ne aaj us ko maa keh k bulaya tha aur shayad ye baat un k liye bahut maayne rakhti hai. "Samajh rahi hoon beta tera dard sab se jyada hai, kyounki apna dard tu bus Naina se hi to batata hai na. Par ab zindagi k is mod par jahan us ki zindagi k ek suhane safar ki shuruvaat hai mujhe poori umeed hai ki humesha ki tarah aaj bhi tu apni behan k saath khada hoga." Alekh ki maassi k in words ne shayad Alekh ko apne dard se upper uth k sochne k liye majboor kar diya tha to us ne tay kiya ki vo Naina ko vidaa karne jaroor jaayega ek acche bhai ki tarah.

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"bhulegi to nahi hum sab ko na?" Noopur said crying hard.

"Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki mai apni is dost ko bhool jaaon aur vo bhi vo dost jo jaldi hi meri bhabhi ban ne jaa rahi hai." Noopur smiled between her tears and it was Priya's turn now.

"Priya........" Naina called her and found her trying to smile, jab ki vo acche se jaanti thi ki aisa karna us k liye bhi asaan nahi hai.

"Di, jaana jaroori hai na? Jeeju aap ko kab vapas le kar aayenge? Batao na di ki kitne dino me aa jaaogi hum logon k pass vapas? Ab mujhe mera fav pasta bana k kaun khilayega? Kaun mujhe exams me subah padhne k liye uthayega? Kaun mujhe samjhayega ki mujhe kya karna hai aur kya nahi?"

"Koi baat nahi, ab ye saara kaam tumhari hone waali bhabhi ka hoga aur jab tak vo nahi aa jaati ghar tab tak Shalu bhabhi to hain hi na." she assured Priya and Priya hugged Naina tightly still crying.

Soon here Naina sab se mil chuki thi aur ab baari thi Alekh ki. Alekh samajh nahi paa raha tha ki kaisa response de.

"Naina.."he called her softly.

Naina turned and found him standing behind her, "Tu jaa rahi hai apun ko chod k." and all looked at him surprisingly. Par Raj,Noopur aur Naina k gharwaale jara bhi surprise nahi the kyounki sab jaante the ki jab Alekh apne emotions par control nahi kar paata hai to us k muh se bus tapori language hi nikalti hai.

Naina looked at him with teary eyes and instantly hugged him, "nahi bhai, mai humesha tere saath hoon. Koi hum dono ko kabhi juda nahi kar sakta hai chahe kuch bhi ho." She said with heavy voice.

Kuch der tak yu hi Naina roti rahi aur Alekh bhi. Raj aur baaki k sabhi logon ki aakhon me bhi ansoon aa gaye tabhi Naina ki maa vahan aayi aur unhone Alekh se kaha "Beta sab log wait kar rahe hain." Alekh ne Naina ko chod diya aur fir Naveen aur Alekh Naina ko le gaye car me bithane.

Naina abhi bhi bahut ro rahi thi aur us ki haalat ko dekh kar Alekh ne Raj se bus itna kaha, "Bharosa hai tujh par ki tu apun ki behan ka khayal aache se rakhega; aur agar nahi rakha to samajh lena." Raj smiled at him n answered, "tum tak to baat baad me pahuchegi na is se pehle Naina hi mujhe zinda nahi chodegi." And both smiled.

Finally sab ne Naina ko vida kiya ansoon bhare aakhon se.

Yahan Raj ki maa apni bahoo ki besabri se intezaar kar rahi thi jab car ka horn baja.

"Are jaldi laa thali Shikha, dekh mera Raj meri bahoo ko le aaya." Aur un ki aakhon me khushi k ansoon saaf dikhayi de rahe the.

Raj car se bahar aaya aur Naina k liye us ne car ka door khola, "Naina." And she looked at him, "Swagat hai tumhara aaj se is nayi duniya me aur mere zindagi me humesha k liye." At which Naina gave a big smile.

Raj and Naina were standing outside the main door of the house and Raj's mom started doing rituals. Pehle unhone Raj n Naina ki aarti utaari aur us k baad Naina ko chota sa kajal ka teeka lagate hue kaha, "bahut sundar lag rahi hai tu, kahin kisi ki najar na lag jaaye mere ghar k chand ko." And Naina smiled at her sasoo maa. Raj n Naina bent to touch her feet and Raj winked Naina to which she got surprised by his act. "Naina, ab ye chawal se bhara kalash tum apne right leg se giraa do aur is rung bhari thaali me apne dono pair rakh k ghar k andar aao." Mansi said n Naina did exactly what she was told.

Jaise hi Raj aur Naina Ghar k andar aaye Mansi ne un ko bataya ki un ko ek game khelna hoga abhi, " Sab se pehle Raj n Naina ko ek game khelna hai. Mai is milk se bhare bartan me ye ring chupadeti hoon aur in dono ko us me se ring dhoondh k nikaalni hai. Aisa then baar karna tha, jo ring dhoondh leta vahi winner hoga.Is se ye bhi clear ho jaayega ki is ghar me kis ka raaj chalne waala hai, Raj ka ya phir Naina ka." And the game started after the announcement.

"Bhaiya mujhe poori umeed hai aap hi jeetenge."

"Raj aap hi jeetiyega ye hum aadmiyon ki izzat ka sawaal hai." Abhi said.

"To phir samajh lo ki aaj tumhari izzat utar gayi, kyounki mujhe poora bharosa hai Naina par, ki ye game Naina hi jeetegi." Mansi said in assurance.

"Haan haan meri bahu hi jeetegi mai bhi jaanti hoon."

"Lo nayi bahoo kya aa gayi mujhe yaani apne bte ko to aap bhool hi gayi na. Jaaiye mujhe nahi khelna hai ye game." Raj ne nautanki karni start kar di.

"Nahi, nahi beta aise baat nahi hai. Koi bhi jeete tum dono me se bacche to dono hi mere hain na." Raj ki maa ne kaha. Aur phir game start ho gaya. First round me Naina ne ring dhoondh li n second round me Raj ne ab bacha third round to third round me hi ye decide hona tha ki game kaun win kar raha hai.

"Come on bhaiya."

"Come on bhabhi."

"Naina, koshish kar mujhe pata hai tu hi jeetegi."

"Raj, hum sab ki izzat aap k haath me hai." N finally Naina ne ring dhoondh li and all girls clapped for her.

"Dekha, maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki Naina hi is game ko win karne waali hai." Mansi teased Abhi n Raj.

Raj smiled looking at Naina, actually Raj ne ring dhoondh lit hi par bartan k andar us ne hi Naina k haath me ring de di kyounki vo chahta tha Naina hi jeete game.

"Kya Raj ladkon ki izzat ka falooda kar diya aap ne. Pata hai humari shaadi me ye game hum ne jeeta tha."

"Phir bhi kya fayda hua jeeja jee, raaj to mei behan ka hi chal raha hai na filhaal." Raj teased Abhi to which all laughed. Abhi also smiled whereas Mansi blushed.

Poora din kab beet gaya pata hi nahi chala aur ring ceremony k baad Raj ko jara bhi mauka nahi mila Naina se milne ka. He was impatient to be alone with her. Par waqt kahan mila us ko jab se Naina aayi hai yahan koi na koi us k pass hi baitha hua tha.

In night:-

"Raj, kya socha hai?" Abhi asked him.

"Kis baare me?"

"Are humare poochne ka matlab ye tha ki honeymoon pe kahan jaa rahe hain aap log?"

"Oh vo.........abhi socha nahi hai is baare me."

"To kab sochna hai?"

"Dekh lenge, vaise bhi office se leaves li hue hain pata nahi us k baad kya hoga?"

"To wait nahi karna padega aap ko, kyounki hum aap k liye already arrangements kar chuke hain."

"Kya? Par kahan?"

"Vo to surprise hai na, jaldi hi pata chal jaayega aap logon ko." Abhi winked.

Later in night:-

"Aise nahi jaane denge aap ko hum sab bhaiya, kuch dena to padega na."

"Are mai to tabaah ho jaaonga shaadi k baad, sab ko kuch na kuch dena padega. Lag raha hai jaise shaadi karne ki penalty deni hogi."

"Yahi samajh lijiye, par hum bhi aise jaane nahi denge."

"Haan Raj ye to hai, ye rasm hoti hai ki apne room me jaane se pehle tum ko hum behno ki demand poori karni hogi." Mansi said.

"To theek hai, mai doosre room me so jaata hoon." Ye keh kar Raj muda jaane k liye tabhi.

"How mean bhaiya, ye kya baat hue? Koi dulha aise karta hai kya?"

"Baakiyon ka to nahi pata, par apna to yahi style hai."

"Kahin nahi jaana hai tujhe samjha ki nahi." Mansi now scolded him.

"Tu jaa yahan andar hum chalte hain." And she moved out taking all.

"Di"

"Ab kya hai?"

"rukiye jara,"

"Kya hua?"

"Kuch laaya tha mai aap k liye."

"Mere liye", Mansi was surprised.

"Haan di, ye dekhiye ye raha" and he presented her a beautiful golden chain with a diamond pendent and Mansi said,"Is ki kya jaroorat thi? Mere pass already tere diye hue itne saare gifts hain."

Raj smiled, "Par apni shaadi par sab se khoobsurat tohfa apni di ko nahi diya tha maine abhi tak. Aap ko kya lagta hai mujhe pata nahi tha kya is rasm k baare me. Shaadi se pehle maa ne mujhe har ek rasm aur us pe diye jaane waalon gifts k baare me bata diya tha. Tabhi maine banwa k rakh liya tha ye aap ko dene k liye. Aur jahan tak baat hai meri in baaki sisters ki to ye raha in ka gift", and he handed over a big sum of money to all his sisters.

"Raj, jab itna kiya hi tha to bhaav maarna itna jaroori tha kya?"

"Are mai to bus aap ko tease kar raha tha, mujhe kya pata tha ki aap sach me gussa ho k nikal jaaogi." He made a face.

"It's ok my dear bhai."

"Aap ko mera gift pasand aaya na di?" he asked.

"Kyoun nahi, sab se jyada pasand aaya. Aakhir mera bhai mere liye itne pyaar se jo le kar aaya hai." She gave a big smile.

"Thanks di."

"Ab chal baad me karna ye thanks vanks, jaa andar Naina intezaar kar rahi hai tera." Mansi pushed him inside. He slowly entered inside and saw that Naina was seated on the bed and the whole room was decorated beautifully along with there bed. Raj was feeling a big happiness in his heart when he was coming closer to Naina. Naina was feeling more n more nervous with each passing minute.

Raj was finally seated in front of Naina on their bed and he could say only, "Naina............".

Raj k aaj Naina ka naam pukarne me koi alag se baat thi jo Naina apna naam sunte hi sharmaa gayi. Raj dheere se us k paas aaya. "Kyoun, dar lag raha hai kya?" She could not say anything.

"Bolo na." he urged.

"N.............nahi to." Raj felt something really wired. Naina ko aisa bolna us ko kuch ajeeb lag raha tha.

"Mujhe lag raha hai ki u r feeling a bit uneasy na?"

"May be." She said.

"Relax, koi baat nahi; aisa kuch nahi hoga jo tum nahi chahti ho ya jis me tum ko jara bhi takleef ho." Raj ne kaha vo jaanta tha ki Naina ka nervous feel karna obvious hai aakhir vo dono hi pehli baar aisa kuch karne jaa rahe hain.Naina ne koi jawab nahi diya bus dheere se apna sir hila diya.

Raj ne kaha, "Bus ek baat humesha yaad rakhna, aaj se hum ek hain. Do jism ek jaan, hum dono ko koi juda nahi kar sakta hai. Aaj k baad mere zindagi ka tum vo atoot hissa ho jis ko koi chah kar bhi mujh se alag nahi kar sakta hai. Mai bus tumhara hoon aur humesha rahoonga aur tum se vaada karta hoon ki kabhi bhi tum ko koi takleef nahi doonga. Kabhi bhi tumhari aakhon me meri vajah se ansoon nahi aayenge. Varna Alekh to meri band baja hi dega."

Raj k in sabdon me jitney jyada sacchai thi us se kahin jyada sincerity us ki aakhon me clear dikhayi de rahi thi. Phir Raj ne dheere se poocha, "Naina may i?" Naina ka ghoonghat kholne k liye us ne poocha. Phir bhi kuch nahi kaha Naina ne bus sir hila diya dheeme se.

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Naina ki vidai k baad Naina k ghar me bahut khamoshi chaa gayi thi. Ek ek kar k saare mehmaan jaa rahe the. Sab ko attend karne me Shalu aur Lakshmi jee lage hue the aur saath me Noopur bhi kaafi help kar rahi thi in logon ka.

"Maa mai is ko yahan rakh doon."

"Haan beti tu yahin rakh de aur ab ghar jaa." Lakshmi jee ne pyaar se kaha Noopur se.

Noopur ne muh banate hue kaha, "Ye kya maa, aap to mujhe bhagana chahti hain yahan se."

Lakshmi jee smiled, "Are nahi pagli, mai kahan bhaga rahi hoon tujhe. Mai to chahti hoon ki jaise maine aaj ek beti ko vida kiya hai vaise hi jaldi se jaldi ek beti ko mai apne ghar le aaon."

Noopur gave a big smile, "Haan maa pls jaldi se na. Mai yahan aa k humesha k liye rehna chahti hoon."

"Par vo jo buddhu ram hai na tera, vo nahi chahta hai ki mai yahan le kar aaon tujhe." She made a sad face.

"Haan maa pata hai. Par us ka bhi to point sahi hai na." Noopur said.

"Haan haan pata hai mujhe, sab k sab sahi ho apni jagah pe. Bus mai hi galat hoon jo tum logon se itne saari umeedin lagaye baithe hoon." Lakshmi jee said with a sad face.

"Nahi maa, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Aap sahi ho apni jagah pe. Mujhe pata hai ki jo aap chahti ho vo kya maayne rakhta hai. Par Alekh bhi to pehle stable hona chahta hai na us k baad hi vo koi aisa decision lega." Noopur ne kaha.

"Sach keh rahi hai tu beti. Kitne acche se samajhti hai na tu Alekh ko. Varna Naina k baad to mujhe bahut chinta hoti. Par ab bilkul befikr hoon Alkeh ko le kar, aakhir tu jo hai us k pass." Lakshmi jee ne pyaar se Noopur ka maatha chumte hue kaha.

Tabhi ek servent daudta hua aaya,. "Maa jee chaliye, vo Shalini bhabhi ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai kaafi." Ye sun kar Noopur aur Lakshmi jee dono hadbada gaye.

"Are kya ho gaya Shalu ko?"

"Abhi tak to theek thi na bhabhi." Dono lag jaldi se pahuche to dekha Naveen k room me Shalu bed pe leti hue hai aur Naveen doctor ko phone pe bula raha hai.

"Kya ho gaya Shalu ko?" Lakshmi jee ne poocha.

"Pata nahi maa, abhi saare kapde theek kar rahi thi achanak na jaane kya hua behosh ho gayi."

"Kitne baar maine kaha hai itna kaam mat kiya kar. Par meri sunti hi nahi hai. Saara kaam khud hi kar leti hai. Kabhi kisi ki help ki jaroorat hi nahi hoti hai is ko." Bahut naraj lag rahi thi Lakshmi jee.

"Doctor ko bulaya bhaiya?" Noopur ne poocha.

"Haan bulaya hai."

"Pata nahi kya ho gaya meri bacchi ko, abhi tak to theek thi. Maine hi theek se khayal nahi rakha hai is ka." Lakshmi jee aur jyada pareshaan ho gayi.

"Maa aap pareshaan mat ho, sab theek hoga na bus doctor ko aane to do." Naveen ne samjhaate hue kaha.

Kuch der baad Doctor aa gaye. Unhone Shalu ko check kiya aur tab tak Shalu ko hosh bhi aa gaya tha. Naveen ne thoda pareshaan hote hue poocha, "Kya hua doctor sab kuch theek hai na?"

"sab kuch theek hai Naveen,"

"to fir Shalu behosh kaise ho gayi?" Lakshmi jee ne poocha.

"Thoda jyada aaram ki jaroorat hai ab inhe, kaam jyada kiya hai aur fir is condition me thoda apna khayal rakhna bhi jaroori hai na." Doc said.

"Kaise condition doc?" Naveen asked panickly.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#923

Ahh....was w8ing for the part....btw....why do I feel Raj jo wo romantic baatein kar raha tha....usse sunne wali Naina nahi thi.....I may be wrong....but mujhe bas aisa laga....hehe.

Anyways....the bidaai scene was very emotional....specially Aalekh ka 'Maa' kehna and then switching to th tapodi mode....very nice!! And then Raj ke ghar me rasm and sab ki teasing....honeymoon ke discussions....and of course...Raj n Mansi ka sweet scene.....very nice!!!

And guess....here Shalu is pregnent....and that y she fainted!!

Anyways....I am w8ing for their wedding night yaar!!! Hope u can continue soon.

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swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#924

awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next .

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Suhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#925

Hi Vertika

How r u???

Update was gud..😊

So finally Naina ki bidaii ho hi gayi..Alekh was trying hard to contol his emotions but nothing cud stop his tears..Naina was crying too.After all shadi ke baad kuchh to change ho hi jata hai...😭😭

But she has got a very wonderfyl life partner..

Raj intentionally lost the game..ohh!! he is just so cute..😊😊

Mansi neg liye bina Raj ko room mein jaane nahin de rahi thi but Raj bhi kam nahin hai..😆😆😆 He fooled his sisters easily but then he surpised them by giving them gifts..😊

He is such a caring brother ...😃😃

Sumaiya ki tarah mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki Raj ke room mein Naina nahin koi aur hai..

I think Shalu is pregnant😛

Continue soon

Bye

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#926

that was really really good
plz continue soon

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Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#927

Hey Vertika

update was awesome,fantastic dear👏👏
the bidaai scene is very emotional😭😭😭😭
Raj intentionally lost d game............so sweet😊😊😊
loved Raj n Mansi scene😊😊
pata nahi kyu lag raha hai ki Raj ki baatein sunne wali Naina nahi hai...........
i think Shalu is pregnant n dats y she faints😊😊
plssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#928

totally awesome tooo good updt....👏

loved alekh and naina's mom part 👏

and also d rasm which were presented wer too good....totally awesome and cool updt👏

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Ayesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#929

Hey, nice upate

Bidai was so emotional 😭
I think there is some good news for shalu.
RN scene was so sweet

Ab pls nxt part jaldi se ud kardo, can't wait for it.