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Posted: 15 years ago
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This poem is written by me for Mahima on her request. As always, i am a little nervous in posting my poems. Hope you like this.

The wind was blowing softly against my curls,

Each drop of water looked like pearls.

The rain was pouring softly on the ground,

Heavenly was the black coloured clouds.

I was standing near my window,

I could see the beautiful meadow.

Enjoying the full breeze of the wind,

I could feel the sky wink.

The beautiful rainbow made its way out,

All the winds carried away the cloud.

The enchanting and heavenly rain,

Everything else looked lame.

I was enjoying the entire feel,

This scene was without any fees.

I could feel the rhythm of the atmosphere,

There was serenity in hemisphere.

I loved the essence of this rain,

It took away all the pains.

I was lost in this weather,

I felt light as a feather.

Definitely, I love the nature,

And admire all the creatures.

I love to get wet in rain,

I love the way I act insane.

Others may consider me as mad,

But I am just a carefree lad.

Let me live for a while,

Let me walk alone for miles.



Please do let me know how you found it.

Comments/Criticisms are more than appreciated :-)

Thank you. 😳

-Mahak😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's simple yet awesum Mahi!!!!
I luv the poem... 😃
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OMG mahak u r really talented yar superb loved this poem ,arre autograph please 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mahak that was such a sweet poem yaar...very nice!!
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Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing dear.....



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritavasireddy

hay awesome poem yar 👏



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak

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Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak

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Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

It's simple yet awesum Mahi!!!!
I luv the poem... 😃



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

Thanks Anshi For Loving It...

-Mahak

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Originally posted by: aashizin

OMG mahak u r really talented yar superb loved this poem ,arre autograph please 😳



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

Aashi, U R Making Me Blush Hard.

Friends ke liye autograph ki kya zaroorat hai?

Main Hoon Na....

-Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samratrocks

woah... lvoelyy.. simply beautifull!



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak

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